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It's great. The emotional lines are quite delicate. It's very comfortable to watch. [Shy][Shy][Shy] emmm, what do you say? I feel that the male protagonist is a bit old and kind, and his cultivation is more or less vigilant. This is not to say that the author is not good, but after so many chapters, there is only one person who is greedy and misses the male protagonist, and the male protagonist has not long enough to remember. This will harm himself and his family to some extent. I hope the author can pay more attention to it~ [I learned it] [I learned it] In the end, I will support it and update it soon. Move, move by yourself [learned] [learned] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Why is there no one? It feels very good. There are many books on Tomato that can see the emotional lines written well. It's not bad at all, and the author's description of the male protagonist makes people feel immersed in it. Is this a college student? . Haha [shy] [shy] [shy]

It shouldn't, it shouldn't, it shouldn't, the writing style, the artistic conception, the description, the progress of this book shouldn't be read by so few people. It's a novel worth reading, and it also has the state of mind of a college student, and this kind of fast time travel that is more realistic. Especially the description of emotions is delicate and rich, and the various metaphors are just right. Reading it makes you feel comfortable physically and mentally. Just do whatever you want. Come on, author, this book will definitely shine. Write it well, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

First of all, this is definitely not a book that would show up on Tomato. Its overall look and feel and the depiction of the heroine are already outstanding. Putting aside some astringent content and relatively blunt transitions, other plot characters have been well shaped in Tomato. Whether it's the two sisters who don't have many plots so far or the Yueqing girl who only appears in the first chapter, their character creations are all unique. Not to mention the magnificence of the two heroines of Qing Luo Xianyu. Their characters were not perfect at the beginning and had flaws. However, as the two of them interacted with the protagonist, various mysteries continued to be solved, and the relationship between the protagonists continued to grow. Qing Luo Xianyu has been deeply impressed in our hearts. "Life is like a distant boat, heading towards death. The length of life has nothing to do with it." This sentence is very touching. With these literary and plot-appropriate sentences, this book should not have the dismal results it has now. @ Come on!

This protagonist does not have the shortcomings of most modern authors' protagonists. And he does things casually. This author is good at characterization. In this novel, revenge is dealt with immediately. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

I love watching it, the protagonist is thoughtful and thoughtful, not a loser, the plot is not procrastinating, not poisonous, brainless, and embarrassing. It's really good, a bit invincible. If you like it, you can watch it [Note]

After looking at the author's bookshelf, I can see where the writing style came from, and the taste is indeed good. So far, the latest chapter, 99 chapters, is at the first-tier level of fantasy romance. I hope the author can polish it more. Are there not many fairy tales like the one you wrote? I like it so much, keep it up

God of Gods, it is rare to find a fantasy book on Tomato that has good characters, plot and style. From the front, I personally think it is no worse than Entertainment Spring and Autumn. The protagonist may be almost angry as a human being, but the heroine is very good. It depends on whether the author can control the back. At present, I am counting on your Tomato fantasy book and the Golden Scale one. Is the author new? It's really a talent for a newbie to write at this level, and he's really good at avoiding lightning. There isn't a single possible lightning point in the harem novel.

The first time I spent money on a novel, it was still a pleasure to write. The male protagonist is emotionally stable, possessive, and has mysophobia. He doesn't get angry when fighting and just does what he says. Most of the daily routine is quite interesting and a little bit buttery. The writing is also very good. Come on, author, don't run away. I should have read the back and forth for a few days. It's really good. It will definitely become popular [shy][shy][shy] Oh, by the way, the author remembers the entire ai picture when he has time [Chigua][Chigua]

It's good-looking. It's one of the few harem novels that focuses on describing the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It's still a fantasy type. The emotional descriptions are quite delicate, but it's too little and too short. It looks like there are a lot of big holes waiting to be filled. Hurry up! ! !

This is the first time I have seen this kind of opening plot. The plot of explaining things before leaving is very comfortable to watch. The emotional line at the beginning is also full. The harem is almost not disgusting to me. The first volume is an immediate five-star

It's very good-looking, and it's super sweet in the early stages, and it's a bit slutty from time to time, but that's not the reason why you suddenly stab me. Although no one died, it still felt a little heartbreaking to watch. The heroines fell into deep sleep when they should have, and the hero also passed out. It felt like it would affect seeing other heroines, but overall it's still very perfect, just five stars.

Life was hard enough, so I just wanted to read some novels to relax. The emotional lines written by the author are sweet and exciting. It is a good harem novel. Maybe it is because it is the first time for the author to write a novel. The emotional content makes me feel like I am reading a romance novel [laughter] ps: People in this world are normal enough, and there are not so many people who are easily dominated by desires. This also leads to the protagonist's personality being kind-hearted and easy to empathize with in some things. Although this kind of content is the author's plot, it reflects the transition of the protagonist's personality. So there's no need to worry about it, as long as the author makes the protagonist enjoyable [laughter]

The writing is beautiful, the plot is wonderful, the characters are vivid, and the characters are cute. Overall, Sister Qingluo is very good. Where can I get it from Sister Qingluo? Where can I get it from Sister Qingluo? Where can I get it from Sister Qingluo? Where can I get it from Sister Qingluo? Where can I get it from Sister Qingluo? Where can I get Sister Qingluo? Where can I get Sister Qingluo? Where can I get Sister Qingluo? Lead, where can Sister Qingluo lead, where can Sister Qingluo lead, [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

I have read dozens of chapters so far. The emotions are too delicate and the characters are vivid. It is also relatively realistic in terms of the character of the time traveler protagonist. This narrative-like writing technique is the first one I have seen in Tomato. It's great, I hope it doesn't crash later

The sacred book, the first sacred book of the real tomato fantasy harem, a fantasy fairy-style romance, super beautiful, with excellent writing and gentleness. Super recommended! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love][Love][Love] Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! Fantasy is the most affectionate! A must watch, you won't regret it if you don't watch it! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][send heart][send heart][send heart] But update your teeth quickly! ! ! Don't be a eunuch ah ah ah ah

It feels quite delicate. Of course, the pace is a bit fast. I meet a new heroine in the next chapter. But considering that Tomato has many eunuch books (of course I hope the author is not one of them), the pace is fast.

I hope the author will write more about this book. I haven't seen much of it, but it is very attractive to me, and the emotions are also very delicate. It is much better than most of the books in Tomato, and the plot is also very good. I hope the author will keep writing and not be a eunuch or stop updating. Come on [like][like][like]

It looks simple and unpretentious, but it has real connotations. There are not so many intrigues and petty intrigues, and some are just sincere treatment. If you like it, you will start, if you don't like it, you will be ugly. The male protagonist's three views are very up to date, and he dares to love. The main plot is not very clear at present, but there are many pitfalls. I hope the author can fill it in slowly.

Really, there aren't many novels like this anymore, it's very rare, it has a daily style, there are battles, and the characters are described delicately, I rarely review books, this is the only book that I can't help but review because of the good reviews, it's great! College students are invincible! The author must not be affected by a small number of negative comments. I scrolled through the comment area and I think I have spent the longest time reading it. I don't know what the outline is, but the role of Yan Daotian should play a big role in the Central Region. What Qing Luo said is that I really want to wake up early, but according to the plot, I have to arrive The Central Territory can only wake up, and Xianyu can appear earlier. Although Di Xi is cold, he can't be too cold. I'm afraid that someone will soon forget Di Xi. Just write some plots that need to be written. Don't feel like it's a waste of time. Not all battle plots are a waste. This book is suitable for reading slowly. The more you read, the better it gets. Come on, author!

It's very interesting, and it's different from what I've seen before. I think the emotional line is the best I've ever seen ^_^♪. The plot is not procrastinating. Although it's a harem novel, it's not boring at all. It's a soothing and refreshing novel.

It's a good-looking movie with many female protagonists but not a stud. The emotional lines are well written and detailed enough. After reading 50+ chapters, I didn't see any poisonous points (I can feel the author's full desire to survive haha). There is almost no plot where the protagonist has to be ridiculed wherever he goes (only once in 50+ chapters). The writing is very good. The score of 8+ is too low to be true. There are at least 9 points, and I almost paid for it by mistake😭

My feeling is that the writing is more healing, the male and female protagonists have more emotional interactions, it is more everyday and slow-burning. The novel mainly tells the story of a female sword fairy possessing the male protagonist, seeing all aspects of the male protagonist, and taking him to the world of immortality when he was frustrated. She doted on the male protagonist very much. The character of the female sword fairy Qingluo in the novel is very well created. I like it very much. I hope the author can be faster. I read it very quickly [Love] One more thing, the speed of this car is very good, the author should have a side job

I was halfway through it, but I looked at the number of people who felt sorry for the author. The writing is so good, the plot is so good, the characters are so well done, and the action descriptions are so good. But no one watched it. I don't know why I was really convinced, but I will continue to see it until the end. Anyway, no matter what, I will support the author! [Blowing kiss]

I have read ten chapters so far, and I feel very good about it. It can be seen from the intermittent posts that the author has been revising the previous problematic paragraphs, his writing style has been improving, and he has a strong awareness of lightning protection. Although the author is writing a book for the first time, his writing style is not bad, and he has a good attitude and is very responsible for his own books. Such good authors are not common. Slow heat, recommended

Extremely simple, but with a different emotional foreshadowing. The author can make Linyuan's character and Xianyu's character incompatible, and then the protagonist takes advantage inexplicably. Ps (Can you add the supporting character's name? Just call him Lian Zhu, his real name!)

It's so beautiful, non-toxic and non-toxic, and the heroine is very well portrayed. Inexplicably acting as a gift boy, inexplicably deducting points from gay friendship gay friendly 4

OK, the writing style is delicate and the writing is okay. It's 🔥🔥🔥🔥. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

After reading it in one day, I think the rhythm is okay. Yue Qing has some factors in it. The ending of the secret realm should not be too centered around women (maybe write about a man [making a face]). It can have a storyline. Remember to intersperse some trivial things about Yue Qing. Don't forget about others. You will get scolded. Paying attention to emotions is not a gift for a daughter. Is there any problem with giving a beautiful woman in the world a home? No problem! Don't slack off on characterization. The first book is a success at the beginning. Let's encourage each other.

The author's writing is really good and the characterization is great. I would like to make some suggestions that are not suggestions. In multi-heroine stories, it is not recommended to have a certain heroine offline for too long (for ordinary beauties, this is no problem, after all, it may just be the article of a chance encounter). Take Yueqing, for example, she will be offline after dozens of chapters, and if she still cannot be reunited after more than 100 chapters, it will be a few months in terms of the update process, and it is easy for people to lose the feeling of the first meeting. I generally understand the author's setting. The heroines who carry out the whole story should be the Sword Fairy and the two sword spirits. However, the writing style of the remaining heroines telling one story in dozens of chapters and then switching to another one is really tiring. My understanding is that the author may want to introduce all the heroines in this way first and then arrange for everyone to reunite? If that's the case, it would be better Another question, do the eight female protagonists, the Maiden sisters, count as two? If so, does that mean that all the female protagonists will be released?