Bone King, but Total War

The author is great. Although the writing is good, this kind of plot-oriented novels are not as popular as peach novels and brainless novels on Tomato. Moreover, depending on the content, you will have to write more in the future. I look at your data every day and I am very worried that you will not be able to eat. It makes me tremble to follow up every day. I'm afraid that one day you will be cut off. To be honest, among the books that I update every day, you are still the first among those who are less than 100. There are hundreds of thousands of words in your content that cannot be downloaded. I can understand even if you cut it now. Anyway, come on, I like your novels very much.

Advantages: The characters are well created, the plot style adds a lot of the author's own ideas, the detailed description techniques are a bit lacking, and many new characters are added. Overall, it is a good fanfic. Disadvantages: The contrast between the original dark and refreshing writing and the cuteness of the battle of wits and courage with the air has disappeared. It is dark but not too dark, and feels a bit like a black-hearted company. There are basically no cool articles, and it can even be said to have been brushed off. The description of the original character setting was lacking. It gave people the impression that after watching the original anime or novel, no further description was given. Although there was a lot of missing text, it also led to the feeling that the original character did not need side description and jumped directly to the topic. Summary: Recommended for readers who don't mind deviating from the original author's original style and like innovative settings in fan fiction. (After all, fan fiction is the hardest to control.)

There are very few themes about the Bone King in Tomato, but the author's current thoughts on this book are not too poisonous. It is worth reading. I hope the author will continue to do so.

This author works hard and deserves encouragement!

It doesn't follow the original plot very much, and this basically surpasses all Bone King fanfics, not to mention the writing style is pretty good [Like][Like][Like]

It's very interesting. It doesn't follow the original plot, and the characters' personalities are very obvious. It's already considered a masterpiece among the King of the Undead fanfics. Good luck to the author, I give you five stars. I hope this book can go further and further [Blow kiss]

The overall level is undoubtedly good. It is solid, lively, meaningful, and logically self-consistent. It breaks away from the elementary "conquering the world" and actually writes about the friction and smell of gunpowder between large forces. Disadvantages: In the middle and later stages, there are still more blunt explanatory texts, and it is obvious that there will be more clever arrangements, and the reading experience has declined; A large number of specific nouns not only abuse the not-so-advanced group portrait technique, but also have a weak sense of presence. The amount and level of characterization are limited, and there is no clear and in-depth character design. They also like to occasionally pull them out to show off. Many times they seem to be impressed when they see names but cannot remember what happened specifically. The behavior of the characters is quite eccentric, and the logic of the characters appearing at certain intervals and with little detail appears even more strange. It is a fan work itself. There is no character recognition difficulty in the early stage. More original works are added in the middle and later stages. The proportion control is not good and it looks more chaotic and confusing. Considering the proportion of power friction and urban construction management, it is also a choice between trade-offs to a certain extent. Tomato 5/5, 80/100 among all entertainment works. It is worth watching the power-annexing Shuangwen and Overlord fanfics, but it is definitely not suitable for everyone. Don't hold on if you have blood pressure. Reading suggestions: Overlord audiences who are not interested in reading too many books and who read more seriously There is another less serious but obvious shortcoming: chaotic combat power. Not serious because combat is the least important factor in the entire story. This is obviously because in the last few dozen chapters, there will be ten heroic-level demi-humans (level 35). However, the characters who have been personally trained by our own NPCs and have shocking titles are not marked with any level. The battle scenes and ranks are not clear, and the audience has no appropriate expectations for the fight. Lv, as a very core setting in the original game travel text, was abandoned to a certain extent in this book. The literary account was successful, but there was no corresponding information to complete. Known as the number one paladin in the Demonic Kingdom, he had no idea whether he was going to fight against the wind or against him before the fight started. The result was a 50-50 fight with the hero. - Final thoughts It's true that it's rare. It's the first book I've finished reading on Tomato. It feels satisfying, logical, clear-cut, intertwined with suspense and innovation, and I always have good reading motivation. Many people say that the ending is rushed, but it's actually not bad. It even echoes the earliest character background settings, so it's not bad. Wenxiu just wants to catch a fish, so there is no bad intention. It does not have to kill all the enemies to have a happy ending, nor does it only have a happy ending to be a good ending. Perhaps it is also the first online article I have finished reading after I have become more picky in recent years. Most online articles have no new ideas in the middle and late stages. This book is indeed excellent in the integration of new ideas and rhythm. Flaws do not cover up strengths Tomato 5/5, all entertainment works 80/100 Suggestions for reading: Interested in annexing subject matter, with basic social science and humanities exposure There is no pressure to identify Western nouns and unique nouns (such as reading many books and not often reading Western literature). You don't need to know too much about Overlord. The original characters' scenes and portrayals are quite limited.

Time travel, the plot can grab people and make them want to keep reading. The author's writing style is good and it's obvious that he has literary skills [Like][Like] Must read every day, good book

It's really great. Overlord is one of the very best fanfics. I really don't know why it got this rating. Come on, author, it's really great! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Bone King's novels are extremely toxic and explosive. There are currently no books of this kind. I hope the author will stop being a eunuch. There are too few Bone King books.

I've read some, and every novel of this kind has to write about Enri and Kaon Village, so I'm a little tired.

I rarely feel that the author's writing style is really good in Lao Gu's books, and the many self-created elements are very nifty [Love][Love]

It's something written by normal people. It is not the imagination of a young boy. But because the style is still that of a light novel. Therefore, the process of establishing the kingdom is described through daily dialogue. In the end I really liked the ending.

It's perfect. The early stage focuses on national games and conspiracies. From the beginning of the splitting of the kingdom and empire, it has been constantly showing how a careerist establishes the basic market in a devastating way. The issue of territory expansion is also written very clearly. The game of business alliance later also surprised me again and again, especially the game of the Blood Emperor. He is not like the original. Dejected, he began to continue to use the wisdom in his mind, even when he was ignored by Rudav, he was still trying to save his empire. The all-out war in the later period was even more exciting. The wooing of the allies and the negotiations between various forces were simple but expected. The final sea battle against Dragon Territory gave me the final surprise. The game afterwards is as refreshing and not boring as watermelon or ice cream after a big meal. Finally, there is the protagonist, a perfect protagonist who cannot be more perfect. The flexible moral bottom line is definitely a part of our P club players. Finally, I want to see the backhand, development and challenges of Blue Star. The starry sky made me realize the empathy that a time traveler should have. I am looking forward to whether the remaining 40 supreme beings will be written later and whether there will be a sequel to defeating the space Leviathan. This concludes the review. Thank you to the author for his masterpiece. Finally, let us listen to "Faster than light" together and congratulate Shu and Suzuki Satoru on walking towards the stars!

I declare. This is the most perfect treasure in the world.

The book is a good book, but after watching the original work and animation, it is still a bit difficult to get into it, but I really like everything about Laogu. I bought a copy of all the figures. Come on, author, and I wish you faster and faster times in the future.

It's very interesting. It turns out that the author is also a Divinity Original Sin player. Hahaha, the idea is very good. In fact, Warhammer can also be integrated, haha

It looks good, but can it be more stylish? It feels like it lacks the feeling of the ladder of kings in the original work

Very thoughtful fics, those studio fics from Gousha that only follow the original work

It's a good fanfic of King of the Immortal. I haven't finished it yet. The first part is pretty good and the setting is quite consistent. (I'm sorry, I haven't read much of the original novel, but the comics and animation.) Personally, I feel that it is a fanfic with a stricter setting. I will take the time to read the later part, hoping it will be more exciting.

It's well written, you can read it, come on I can't stand it anymore, I can't stand it anymore

This plot is good, the author will keep up the good work

Come on! I believe this book will be a hit! The premise is that the author does not lose his chain!

It's really beautiful. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs.

There are only two words that sound good. Wenxiu is cheating people. So fun. Remember to let him dig more holes. It's not too funny, but it also makes him feel a bit restrained. The whole process was exciting, and it made me happy to watch it. A few more chapters until I feel comfortable reading them. Otherwise there wouldn't be enough for me to listen to every day.

Come on, one of the rare Bone King fanfics that can be read [Blowing Kiss]

This book is considered to be very good among the Bone King fanfics I have read. It extends a lot of plot and is also very interesting.

Not very boring.

Although the protagonist does a lot of things that are not done by humans, the results are indeed acceptable, but the process is very bloody [eating melon]

It's worth trying [Like]