Gu World******

The opening scene is about Dongfang Changfan, which is very innovative! Two hundred years is enough time to lay out the five domains. When Fang Yuan is in place, he will break his fate and become a master!

It's not bad, it conforms to the setting of the Gu world, unlike other fans who always practice techniques from other worlds, or else give them inexplicable talents. Or maybe the Immortal Gu is given randomly, like these fans who saw brain congestion after seeing the previous few pictures. The original dark flow was abruptly changed into a mindless and refreshing novel.

When the protagonists of each world in the book send messages, can they include the name of the world at the end? Otherwise, it is easy to get confused sometimes.

I feel like we can learn from the plot of Bai Prostitute Linya Earth Spirit in Hongyue Qiuxian. After getting the Divine Movement Gu, we can exchange resources, and then the Pirate Sky promises to practice the second void orifice Gu, and then practice the Divine Movement Gu in person, and then exchange resources. This is a win-win-win-win situation [laughter]

The author's writing is very powerful and can completely simulate the great masters of other schools. The killing move is just a piece of data. In the future, we can digitize the body, simulate Gu refining, create the uploading of consciousness of everyone on the Internet, and finally achieve quantum immortality.

Good, good, good, good Except for the writing, everything else is pretty good. Author, your writing style really leaves me speechless [laughs awkwardly] First, there are too many typos, which is okay, at least I can still understand the meaning. Second, it can be said that a transition without a transition, even if you draw a segment line, is better than an extremely stiff transition or a transition without a transition. Third, the meaning of the text is unclear, especially the related words, which made me confused. Also, the author's pacing control is very poor, and the narration is also messy. Although I gave it three stars because I wanted to keep the score high, but for now, this book is only worth three stars. Fans who can write about real people will give you two stars. I recognize your creativity, and since you are so persistent, I will give you one more star. After all, it is not easy to write more than 100 chapters. Overall, this book can only be regarded as just passing the standard even as a fanfic, but the author is persistent and does not deliberately make people disgusting, so it can still be recommended.

Update again, I know you can do it! ! ! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Well, that's what I like, that's all I can say. When Xi Wang wrote this fanfic, he was not killing for the sake of killing. It is to do something for the sake of ideals.

Can the main character have a first name? One moment, Changfan becomes a character.

Dongfang Changfan: There is no limit to the traces of my outer world.

It's a very interesting book by Xian Zun. Come on, the author.

It's pretty good. The biggest bug of the clone flow is that the strength grows too fast. The author has grasped the basic plot and it is still very interesting to watch.

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

It's not enough, the author updated it [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Entering the palace to become a father-in-law?

The writing is good, but there are many typos.

Updates have been a bit slow recently. Give it a five-star rating and give the author a boost! [Please update] [Sneaky laugh] There aren't many people in Tomato who can write as well as the author and last for such a long time! [Like] [Smile] [Smile]

Not bad, very creative The author can refer to Omniscient means omnipotent development, Killing Move: Knowledge is power, the more information collected, the greater the lethality.

Very good author, cheers

Yes, this kind of Tianwen.

Yes, in the original work Dongfang Changfan, his soul was captured by Fang Yuan, and he searched for the soul repeatedly, hoping that he would be stabbed directly when he encountered it [sneaky laugh]

The best ancient anime fanfic I've seen recently.

The setting of "Dongfang Changfan" is very interesting. There is enough time left for the development of the protagonist, the layout, and the use of channels are also very novel, and it feels a bit like the original.

In other words, if faith represents omniscience, then which dao can be matched with faith, which represents omnipotence. It seems that the Tao of Refining is suitable.

Not bad, good, great

Very good la la la

Very creative fan

Doesn't the protagonist go to Langya Paradise?

Hahahahahahaha

Finally won the Easter match