The Fallen Girl Rescue Plan

There are so many flaws, I don't know how to complain about it. First of all, the plot is too fast, the twists are too fast, there is a lack of foreshadowing, and there is a lack of a clear goal for the plot portrayal of the characters. Starting from the person playing the protagonist, it jumps to arson and murder in two chapters, which makes people confused; and all the settings are added after the fact, it feels like I wrote it wherever I thought. The butter heroine should be described, but there is a lack of attention. A lot of miscellaneous female characters have been written, but they have been abandoned halfway. It doesn't matter if the protagonist is a loser, but every time he gets into trouble, he just forcibly cheats and runs away. It feels quite raw.

Can it be published soon? I want to see it. I want to see it. It is a breath of fresh air among Tomato novels. It stands out among many noisy and boring novels.

I jumped and watched it, the original ending of the big group

I was extremely angry when I saw it! What on earth are you writing!

Well, it's not bad. I hope the plot can be more unexpected in the future.