Crossover: The Overachiever System and Its Slacker Host

I cursed back to the original one from the next door, and I finally waited for it. Damn, you have opened a new trap!!! The writing logic is still online [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] Looking forward to Wen Yao's subsequent performance 😘

First, the writing is very good; second, the plot arrangement is reasonable and more enjoyable; third, it is not OOC, and the characters are quite reasonable so far. Okay, enough praise, let me list the shortcomings: First, the protagonist has some virginity (it should be changed later, which is a foreshadowing); second, I personally feel that the appearance of Sora is a failure. This does not mean that you cannot write about him, but you can also use Sora as a way for the protagonist to recover the fragments of the gods, rather than as a way to divide the protagonist. The existence (yes, Sora has self-awareness and takes away the protagonist's wind god form as soon as he appears) is somewhat separated from the uniqueness of the protagonist created in the previous article. To sum up, I will give 4 stars first. The writing style is really nothing to say. It is the ceiling in Tomato. If the plot develops and is corrected in the future, I will change the rating and comment [Blow kiss]

Will the teacher ever write another book? The last time the teacher was active was in June 2024. The teacher's writing is really superb, the imaginative plot and writing are all online, and every character created has a unique charm. But I seemed to have discovered it a bit late. I don't know if the teacher is still here at Tomato. Including the book "The Careerist" is also very amazing. I was super fascinated when I read it. Later, after reading it, I checked the teacher's homepage and read this book again. After seeing the abrupt ending, I suddenly realized that the treasure I had discovered had expired. I don't know if the teacher gave up on this book because not many people read it or for some other reason. Anyway, it's really a pity. I wish the teacher a happy life.

The setting is very interesting, the writing is also good, the plot is coherent, and it blends well with the characters of Teyvat. The protagonist is a salty fish hahaha😂

Why isn't such a great work popular?!! The world view is great! My wife is so good at writing woo woo woo

It's still a seedling. Come on, author.

I can't see enough 🥺

It's so beautiful!!! And the author's writing style is super guaranteed! Hehehe, I like this kind of protagonist who is lazy but has an IQ the most.

It's very well written. Good luck to the author.

Super pretty, super pretty, super pretty!!! But why did it end before it was finished?