Comprehensivejuanwang System and Its Salted Fish Host

I cursed back to the original one from the next door, and I finally waited for it. Damn, you have opened a new trap! ! ! The writing logic is still online [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] Looking forward to Wen Yao's subsequent performance [blowing kiss]

First, the writing is very good; second, the plot arrangement is reasonable and more enjoyable; third, it is not OOC, and the characters are quite reasonable so far. Okay, enough praise, let me list the shortcomings: First, the protagonist has some virginity (it should be changed later, which is a foreshadowing); second, I personally feel that the appearance of Sora is a failure. This does not mean that you cannot write about him, but you can also use Sora as a way for the protagonist to recover the fragments of the gods, rather than as a way to divide the protagonist. The existence (yes, Sora has self-awareness and takes away the protagonist's wind god form as soon as he appears) is somewhat separated from the uniqueness of the protagonist created in the previous article. To sum up, I will give 4 stars first. The writing style is really nothing to say. It is the ceiling in Tomato. If the plot develops and is corrected in the future, I will change the rating and comment [Blow kiss]

Will the teacher ever write another book? The last time the teacher was active was in June 2024. The teacher's writing is really superb, the imaginative plot and writing are all online, and every character created has a unique charm. But I seemed to have discovered it a bit late. I don't know if the teacher is still here at Tomato. Including the book "The Careerist" is also very amazing. I was super fascinated when I read it. Later, after reading it, I checked the teacher's homepage and read this book again. After seeing the abrupt ending, I suddenly realized that the treasure I had discovered had expired. I don't know if the teacher gave up on this book because not many people read it or for some other reason. Anyway, it's really a pity. I wish the teacher a happy life.

The setting is very interesting, the writing is also good, the plot is coherent, and it blends well with the characters of Teyvat. The protagonist is a salty fish hahaha😂

I can't see enough [I'm about to cry]

Why isn't such a great work popular? ! ! The world view is great! My wife is so good at writing woo woo woo

It's very well written. Good luck to the author.

It's so beautiful!!! And the author's writing style is super guaranteed! Hehehe, I like this kind of protagonist who is lazy but has an IQ the most.

It's still a seedling. Come on, author.

The author writes very well. Come on!

Super pretty, super pretty, super pretty! ! ! But why did it end before it was finished?

Come on, come on, come on, Wenzi's charm is becoming more and more apparent.

At first, I thought the background was a bit troublesome, so I skipped a few chapters. When I saw Barbatos, I started chasing him on the spot, but it got better later on. It didn't feel laggy at all. The writing was very good and I continued to follow the story. Okay, it's so brain-burning, my skull is going to be broken, Aba Aba, I can't understand it a bit, but it's okay.

Faster, faster, ahhhhhhhhhhhh (dark and twisted creeping) (roaring) If I had known I would have waited until the end of the update to watch, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo itchy School is about to start and I don't have a mobile phone anymore. I'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo epepeininging to to come back as I was already finished [licking the screen] [sending my heart]

Super pretty! ! ! I blew it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Yay! The author's writing is so good

Author, please work hard and give birth to all the characters in Liyue. It doesn't take much effort for those of the rock type [crying], I want to be an emperor! Full sense of security

When will it be updated? Uh-huh! ! ! ! After Sora appeared, I felt very unhappy. It felt like he had changed from killing everyone to a battle of wits type, but I thought it was quite interesting. ———————— I can't understand it anymore. The plot direction has completely changed into something I can't understand. It feels like it has nothing to do with Genshin Impact, it's just a template. It would be nice to say that Sora was created by the protagonist himself to advance the plot, but unfortunately not. Let's put it this way, I couldn't figure out the plot from the beginning. I watched it completely passively. I was so passive that my brain was dead. I felt like I had to sort out the plot in my entire notebook. Author, do you think this is right? Anyway, let's wait and see with Samsung.

Very well written! ! ! Come on, author✊

Come on! Very well written

It's nice to read, but it's too short. The author is short and weak●●

It's a huge world view that I can't really understand anyway. The character is his original personality The protagonist also has his own ideas Not invincible

Good luck, good luck, don't stop adding oil. The author writes very well and is very distinctive.

Nice. The writing, worldview and character creation are so good wwww