Comprehensive Comic: Daily Life Destined to Be Unstable

The first five-star was so bad that I had to do it myself. A building for soliciting opinions, good or bad, just a little bubble [full]

Hahaha, just look at the cover and you will know that this time you are finally a hero! There is a common problem in stories about heroines who lead the way. Regarding Aki's plot arrangement, in fact, in my opinion, Aki could have quit the agency when she wanted to replace Eiri, and there was no need to complete the whole competition. The second is the identity of the protagonist as a novelist. There are too few plots about this identity, but it is understandable, after all, this is not what I want to write about. But generally speaking, the writing is readable, because it is as difficult to find a book on Tomato that is a variety comic, is not a stud, and does not cause stomachaches, as it is to find chocolate in shit. Speaking of which, the protagonist of this book is Amamiya Atsunun, and there is another book whose protagonist is Amamiya Nishiki, who is also an Asashi boy, and has a family accident, and even has a single female protagonist. One book is written by Megumi the Sage and the other is written by Eiriri. Did you two collude? [Laughs]

I don't understand why so many people keep saying something about the characteristics of Eiriri that they hate in heroine Eiriri's novels or that they don't want Kato Megumi to be defeated. They want to see Megumi go to the heroine Eiri or read a harem story [facepalm]. Beautifully written, highly recommended [sending my heart]

I don't know if the author can see it, but I have a small question. Why is it always "Well, well, well"? There are so many endings in a sentence, why can't "Ah, ah, oh..." Be used in turn? Not all dialogue sentences are suitable to be used at the end of every sentence. It makes my head feel a little numb. The book is still very good, recommended! Still haven't changed it. There are dozens of "what" in one chapter, what about what about what about what about "what", what about that? If there is no "what", then I won't be able to write!

It's quite good-looking, I like it very much. I hope the author will update it soon. The protagonist's character is also very good, and the ordinary daily life is described very well. I really love it! The most important thing is that you update me quickly!

I stayed up late to read this book. I can only say that the author wrote it very well. I am only in the second grade of junior high school. I don't have that much literary talent [smile], but every chapter is written with care by the author. From Yinglili to the end, after reading it, I feel like I am finally together after smoking CP.

Ambiguity in the harem or ambiguity in the single heroine? But the plot is really good.

I really can't find any major faults. The emotional writing is very good, especially the emotional part between Hui-chan and Eiri-ri. It made me want to bleed when I saw it. It's very good. The minor problems are that the number of words is a bit small and the updates are a bit slow. I can't give 10 stars for the plot advancement. The word count is not good and the writing is not smooth. I suggest that the next book should be published in a volume. It will affect the rating and long-term profits. It has pros and cons. It's good.

It's pretty good-looking. Is it the single heroine Yinglili?

It's quite good, a daily love drama. . . But I don't really like the character of the male protagonist. He has already made it clear who he likes. As a result, he neither announced it nor kept a distance from other members of the opposite sex. It gave me the feeling that he is hanging on to several people at the same time. Although I don't hate harems, this is a single female protagonist. . . Personal opinion Holy shit, Shinroku. . . . Hui went back to the past and pried the male protagonist off. Although, it was. . . . . . Uh, I can't express my feelings.

A very good book. The defeated dog finally became a hero.

How to say this novel. The plot is quite interesting, but the main plot is a bit monotonous. There are also quite few side lines. From the beginning, this novel is actually quite perfect. But the plot is a bit short. Add a little more branch lines, add a little more main lines. In fact, I could write more about the passerby heroine and so on. Overall, this novel is quite good and I recommend reading it.

Yes, it's a rare Golden Retriever victory, but the reason for the relatively low rating is probably because of Kato Megumi. After all, such a gentle girl is very popular. If I write one more line about Megumi, the score will be even higher. Long live Kato Megumi.

I really like this, I wrote it, I really like the sweet life between the male protagonist and Ying Lili [crying], but it's a pity and I want to see more [crying] [crying] [crying] It's really good to watch, I still want to see the sweet life of Duyun and Yinglili [crying]

The characterization is very good and the writing is pretty good, but it feels a little bit toxic in the middle. Other than that, it's so short that I really can't get enough of it.

It's a comprehensive comic novel that's quite satisfying. Keep up the good work, author😊

Very nice, but I don't know why What to let Hui Like the male protagonist

The description of the original characters is better than most novels I have seen, and I like the character of the protagonist very much.

It's beautiful [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] The sweet and sour love touches my heart, especially Lun Ye's handling of it is just right! [Laugh][laugh][like]

It's very appetizing. After all, there are so many heroines in TV dramas nowadays. I really don't know what I want to read. This one with a single heroine really has a very warm feeling.

It's very well written, I enjoyed reading Yinglilichu, but it's a bit short.

The male protagonist has a distinct personality, and the defeated dog wins! Five stars, must be five stars! Very well written

Very good fanfic, the rhythm is very comfortable

It is an online comprehensive daily novel with a single female protagonist. The characters of the protagonists are well portrayed, and the daily chapters are fresh and plain without any too obvious and abrupt features. There are no major flaws except for the rather bland plot, which is a rare work for Tomato.

Yinglili has a single heroine. I like Yinglili the best. The emotional description is very good.

The one single-heroine comic novel I really like is Eri-ri! Yingli Li is the best!

Come on, it's pretty good

It's pretty good despite its flaws.

Nice fanfic

Very OK, pretty good-looking