Under One Person: Obtain the Jidian Inheritance at the Beginning!

It's so beautiful, I must praise it, but it's too short.

Personally, I think this book is very good to read (don't comment if you don't like it, thank you!) I will change the book review because the author is too short.

Finally someone came to help Feng Xingtong. To be honest, I have a hard time with Feng Xingtong. His Eight Miracles were not complete in the first place. In order to prevent the king from swallowing up Uncle Wang's soul, Uncle Wang's soul was dispersed. Firstly, it was the old man who had been with him for half his life. Secondly, after his soul was dispersed, he would not be able to truly control his spirit. But he still did it, and his father kneeled down and put his dignity at the feet of the Wang family to ensure that he would be like his grandfather. I am afraid that his good heart will be wasted in this life, and it will turn into a guilty heart in the future!

It's okay. I just wanted to write something chic, but I didn't feel like it was too overt. The protagonist's thoughts and behavior, written almost 30 years ago in his previous life and now almost 30 years ago, are still a bit childish and a bit awkward. Especially the chapter where he meets Feng Baobao is a bit awkward, but overall it's okay. Come on.

The writing is super good (✪▽✪), I like it very much. Keeping the character of the protagonist and no censorship, this book will not be toxic. It will definitely be popular.

It is a very good alien fanfic, but the pace is a bit too fast, and the protagonist's strength rises too quickly, which does not affect the viewing. However, the rhythm may be a little bad later, I hope the author will work harder.

How can I put it, my thinking is smooth, and the author is also updating it. I am very happy to see it. I will add a bookshelf to fatten it up before reading it. I will read it again in three months. By then, the author should be able to update 300,000 words. Hahahaha

It's very good, and the literary talent is also relatively good, but here is a small suggestion for the author. Next time you write, you can try to scan the list and there is one last question! Could the heroine be Feng Shayan? Please [shy]

I told you it was very good, but can we find a female protagonist? No, it doesn't mean that if you find a female protagonist, you have to engage in that kind of ambiguous plot, right? Mainly because it's really hard to read some books without a female protagonist. But the heroine I'm talking about is the kind who just needs to talk about it, and I don't mean that she needs some clips or something.

Come on, if the author can kill the Wang family, I will immediately change it to five stars... I have read several one-person fanfics, and they are all very afraid of the Wang family. When the protagonist becomes stronger, he just takes the Wang family away... This is the only one. From the beginning, he wanted to destroy the Wang family [Like]

It's pretty good-looking, I really like it without a female protagonist.

Come on, author, it's so funny. I laughed out loud in the middle of the night. It's great. Don't worry about the trolls. Follow your own ideas. You've already come to Tomato to write a book. How can you still be controlled by trolls and sunspots? Come on, author, take good care of you. [Laugh]

The author's writing is really good [like]. Now the author has written more than 200 chapters. It is really enjoyable to read at once, and there are no red flags. It is also fun to read the text according to the picture [laughs]. Anyone who doesn't want to be too serious can read it. Most of the ratings of fan fiction are not too high for fear of being sniped, so this book is still good-looking. If you see it, you may want to read it and give it a try [Congratulations]

It's super good-looking, there are no messy emotional lines, and the logic is clear. It's a super good-looking and non-procrastinating piece of writing that's amazing [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It doesn't start well at the beginning, but as the plot unfolds, it becomes more distinctive and interesting. However, the protagonist's strength grows too fast. How will it develop in the later stage? If you want to write it well, you must test the author's experience and writing skills.

If you like reading, cheers for the author! I hope this book becomes a hit!

When acting, you must fit the role of the person you are playing. If you have psychological growth and personality changes, coupled with the improvement of your realm, you can act as an Arhat, understand an Arhat, and become an Arhat. The effect should be better. Come on, author! I believe you can write this book well!

Not bad, good-looking, I want to know who the heroine is

The writing is really wonderful [like] [like] [like] But you can also accept the ones like Xia He, Fengsha Yan, Feng Baobao and so on [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

It would be better to kill less. There are also later Jiekong masters who are relatively brainless. The ending is hard to watch. But the front part is very good, it's a refreshing piece of writing, but not embarrassing. This is one of the few fics that can be read through and fits the character's personality. Five-star encouragement.

I have read a lot of fan fiction about one person, and this one was quite enjoyable to read. Many others were very frustrating to read. Based on this, I think some of the other flaws can be ignored.

It's too short, but it's well written. I like the author Lu Linglong, so the arrangement is difficult.

The author's story line is very good, probably the best among the one-person fanfics I've read, but if the novel is to be truly well written, it must also show the growth of the characters. Guan Shan's background is very good, because he is similar to Wang Ye in that he pursues unrestrainedness. For changes in direction, you can refer to the original work. The growth of Zhuge Qing, Zhang Chulan, and Wang Ye in the original work are all very good.

In this paragraph in Chapter 156 (Guan Shan sees the tiger mother dying, but is afraid that the Five Immortals will come to snatch her head. After all, no one can guarantee whether there will be a character like Lao Lao among the Five Immortals.) What is the grandma mentioned in it? Is there anyone who can answer this question?

It's not enough to watch at all. I hope the author will update it faster and come up with more self-created plots.

It's okay. The five stars are because the author worked hard at writing and can't complain. For me, an old bookworm, it's quite bland and doesn't make me excited or laugh out loud, but it's okay if you can read the explanation [please taste carefully]

Very good, the first time I saw a good Chu Ma Xian

It's not enough. It's not enough. I saved 70 chapters and I couldn't help but read them. I regret a little. There are no more chapters [crying] [crying] [crying] It will take a long time to save [like]

Very good, come on, after watching it, I understand why the protagonist is only 5%, and Jigong's murderous intention is all in this 5%.

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