Hello, Arknights

This book by the author is simply the best among Ark novels. The characters have distinct personalities, and their reactions have original intentions that can be used as a reference in reality. The characters' personalities are actually the same as the normal people we know. The author in particular has not forgotten the background of this land, and mentioned it in the description of each plot. It can be said that the description is very perfect, and the author's emotions in writing the characters can be easily felt by us. Its background also always emphasizes suffering

Overall, it's good. The author is a student, but the story he writes still has a plot, and he dares to insert swords. It's not just an invincible harem or ordinary daily life. Judging from the first 100 chapters, the main problem is the change of self-designed characters' names and self-designed organizations. The irregular code names and real name changes make me always have to search and match the characters in the previous chapters, which is quite troublesome. In terms of design and organization, when I see the hazards of the rules, I worry about the combat system, but at present, the problem is not big, and the author has a good grasp. Finally, I hope that it can be connected to the Rhodes Island plot as soon as possible. It is also very impressive to read without knowing the timeline. Generally speaking, it is worth watching. The focus is that it is still serializing rather than discontinuing updates. The staying power is very good, and I hope it will not be unfinished [Note]

I found this book accidentally before. I couldn't figure out why I came here because of the title, so I clicked on the introduction... And then I was glad that I didn't miss it. This book is really good, my family. It can be regarded as a clean one among all the Ark articles written by Tomato, and the author's writing style is also very good. After all, most of those books are written by YY, and I don't care about the quality of the book, but this book really gave me a different experience. In this book, I saw the growth story of a real ordinary person - Ling Bingxian. What he saw, heard, felt and understood can give us readers the so-called sense of reality. At the very beginning of the story, the meeting between the protagonist and Bagpipe was not earth-shattering or love at first sight, but rather the attraction of the soul and the long-term companionship. (Mom, be sure to keep this pair... The first volume may be confusing due to the roundabout perspective. It's a lazy dog digging a hole.) The encounters and interactions with other characters also have a gradual process, from unfamiliar to familiar... In this fast-food era, isn't such content worth watching? That's all I have to say, but I still have to strongly recommend this work to you. You won't be disappointed (and you can't get enough of it) [face covering] The character design is very stable, not broken at all, and the whole family is beautiful!

It took me a few days to read it. The writing is really good [OK]. It has changed a lot compared to the original work. It is not purely refreshing, but it has depth. Multiple female protagonists, currently bagpipes and Texas are the clear ones. A still has platinum, but Xiao Mo is still a 'good senior'. There are still quite a few in reserve (I wish there were more, Yelena, yes, I'm talking about you). The first part was a little confusing to me when I read it, the unique eagle language of the Ark. It's better in the back. In addition, this update is indeed a problem [laughing and crying]

A slow-growing protagonist with a remarkable plot, who dares to use his own sword (his own original character), and has a "stable" rating, without any thunderstorms or character breakdowns. , From a young and innocent boy to a mature and reliable story😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 Look again😃😃

The writing style is really good, the characters are vividly created, and the emotions are quite delicate. I really like this narrative method of daily interspersed with the main line. The protagonist's continuous strengthening reflects the psychological changes of our readers to a certain extent. From being indifferent at the beginning, to being determined later, to being unyielding at the end, it is not mindless. But the author is a newcomer after all, and I hope everyone can support the author. All in all, the evaluation is very good. [Like][Like][Like]

I haven't read a book in many years, so I read (listened to) this book by chance. Although it is a common time travel, the book also shows the protagonist's strength and confidence in adversity, the young man's first love, and the author's broad knowledge. But it's not finished yet, I hope there will be a sequel.

This novel is very well written. It brought destruction to many organizations and cities in the original work, and also gave it a new life that was different from the original work. It used external crises to crush internal differences. This is the only novel that I don't think is better than the original work. Come on, author! The protagonist is also very, very well portrayed, with enough inner description and inner growth. The author's writing style is also very good, and the changes in the organized city are the best I have seen among many fans, especially the Dragon Gate aspect, which is lacking in other novels. The changes to the city of Longmen are just to let nature take its course, and the Longmen you wrote has gradually become that egalitarian red country, and the Wei Yanwu you described is also very courageous, very close to the Wei Yanwu in the original work who sacrificed himself for the greater self.

As a fanfic, it is obvious that the author's writing style is relatively novice. But it was inexplicably attracted to me and I finished reading it, probably because of the author's novice writing style. First of all, I have no intention of looking down on the author. All words are purely subjective. The author's interesting plot, leisurely daily life, and youthful writing style deepen this leisurely feeling. It is very comfortable to watch, but it is difficult to keep up with it first. I hope the author can steadily improve himself in writing.

The book is really good, the author has created his own characters, and the writing style is also good, but the early stage is a bit confusing, I don't know why so few people have read it [crying]

For doctors who like Arknights, this book is simply irresistible It makes up for the regrets in the game, and I really like the bond between the protagonist and the operators, as well as the daily content. Finally, the name Ling Bingxian is really cool. He is a young man who keeps experiencing, paying the price, and growing up. I hope he will be less ruthless and more gentle in the end.

This book is still very interesting to read. Compared with other Ark novels, Lazy Chan's setting is unique. The writing style is very good, and the character's emotional line is also very advanced. It will not be too abrupt. For me, the main motivation for reading is that it is different from other Ark novels in handling the main plot. It is not That old-fashioned, cookie-cutter mainline rescue flow, and Lazy Chan brought a lot of unpopular operators to play with. I was very happy to see the appearance of unpopular operators. Each operator is written very vividly and feels like it should be like that... All in all, Lazy Chan's book is highly recommended [lick the screen]

Come on, author! ! ! I'm very curious about the future of this book, and I hope it won't stray too far from the original setting.

This book is so good, why hasn't it been rated yet? But I hope this system can be useful. The author hopes to update ten chapters a day. Look next door.

Nice. Except for the author, updates are a bit slow. Clicking the space makes me exhausted

I have read two volumes and summed it up. It's pretty good, but it's still not as good as other really excellent fanfics that have scored 9 points. Although a lot of them are full-point reviews, in general there is a lot of room for improvement. The current rating makes sense. The protagonist in the early stage is still a bit weak. Although I don't just want to read cool stories, the character development of the protagonist in the early stage is really unsatisfactory. The comment section said that there will be growth later on, but what I saw at the beginning was quite unsatisfactory. Some people like to see the protagonist slowly grow from weak, incompetent and indecisive, but I don't like it very much, or I think I can be weak in the early stage, but not too weak. How to put it this way, I am ordinary enough in real life and have suffered enough in order to adapt to society. Anyway, I read novels just to see the journey of those who do not exist and will not suffer as much as myself in real life. So I will give it 4 stars for the time being.

I've read a lot of Ark fanfics, and this one is also very good [like], but the author is a bit confused [thinking]

Good-looking🤓🤓🤓But if the author codes 3,000 words every day, then we can calculate the total number of words you can complete in one year. Assuming there are 365 days in a year, then: 🤓 You can complete 1,095,000 words in one year🤓 So what I mean is 🤓 Why doesn't the author get up and type? Readers will do anything.

It's good to watch (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, I love to read it (⑉°з°)-♡, although I haven't finished it yet, but this volume one, well, it really shocked me, so I can only give it five stars. I beeped quietly, it's all because the author rolled up his bagpipe so beautifully and it made me shake my heart towards Shark, (┯_┯)

The descriptions are vivid, and I have the motivation to keep reading (it's really addictive, like skating). It doesn't seem to have any bad points at the moment (although the author digs holes and I don't know if he can fill it in). However, the author is very considerate, and there are some settings that will be explained in detail even if the readers don't understand them. It is very friendly even to readers who don't know much about the background of Ark. If you are not interested in other Arks, you must try this one.

OK, it's been a long time since I've read it. Although I've only seen the second volume, first of all, at my current level, the characters are all restored and the plot is pretty good, just a little bit sharp (pay it back to me, Ah Ran!). The protagonist is wooden but not completely wooden. It's just that there is no dividing line in front of the scene to switch, which makes me a little uncomfortable to watch, but it is acceptable. I personally think that Sozhou can be counted among the top few fans in Tomato (maybe because there are not many fans here) I take back that sentence. Among all the Zhou Tongren I have read, including the one on Hedgehog Cat, this one will definitely be in the top five of my book list. In my opinion, the biggest problem now is that it is a bit uncomfortable to watch in the early stage because there is no dividing line to cut the scene, but it is much better later on, the character design I've said it before. I haven't seen OOC yet. If there is any, it's very small and can be omitted. I really didn't expect the empty part, but it's quite interesting, but there are too few. For me, I have to save it [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] It's a very good book. I highly recommend reading a few chapters. (Complaint: According to my progress, we still don't know what the "job" of Master Xiaochan, who claims that his main purpose is to accompany him [smile] [smile])

The popularity is so low that it took me a long time to find it. I thought it was accidentally removed from the shelves. Fortunately, the author is still updating it. Although it is not a wonderful plot, when I think about it carefully, the protagonist's experience is vivid in my mind. It is a pretty good novel.

The author writes well, but is this book about a single girl or multiple girls? Judging from the content, it should be multi-girl. Check with the author to confirm. Most of Ark's current fandoms are single girls. There are very few good books written by multiple girls. I hope the author will continue to do so [Like] However, the author, the protagonist's ancestral curse is a bit bad [face covering], and the plot is a bit too sharp. Maybe I've watched too many plots with swords, and I'm a bit stressed.

In my opinion, the plot is novel and logical, the second creation is reasonable, there are many foreshadowings, and the emotional line is okay (the three female protagonists, most likely Bagpipe, Mostima, Texas)

Among the many Arknights novels I have read, this one is a very good one. It's quality totally deserves five stars. The author shows a continent of Terra that we have never seen from a different perspective. Although the technique is slightly unfamiliar, it can be completely ignored. It is also very friendly to book lovers who are not porridge lovers. The author's settings are also very interesting, and the private creations are very attractive. [Learned][Learned][Learned]

Must support, good writing style, Ark will continue to have more female protagonists, my heaven buff stack is full, must be rewarded severely

It's very beautiful. Please support it. Also, it's not enough [laughs evilly]

It's very well written, and it's the most comfortable book I've read in Ark.

This is a truly masterpiece, the plot is not stupid, and the writing is interesting.

Nice looking and comfortable to look at. I only gave it five stars without rating it before, so now I'm going to make up for it.