Immortal Demon

(It feels pretty good). I have read 33 of them so far. The story is a bit flat to read, which is not to say that the story has no ups and downs at all, but it does feel a bit draggy. So far, the writing is good, and the protagonist is not brainless. It just feels like the progress of the story is very slow, and it seems confused and unclear. There are more holes than filled, and we are still digging holes... I don't want to say anything, I don't know what I'm looking at. Anyway, hurry up and get through the plot, it's so boring ahead! ! ! O (><) o

The author forgot about the rating even if he didn't mention it [laughing and crying] This book mostly uses ordinary things and ordinary people to reflect the beauty and regrets in life: a young man who left his hometown, an old village chief who worked for the village all his life, a scheming royal family, a widow who lost her husband... A demon king who gradually came into being dominated by demon nature The process of human nature brings readers to see the most important bits and pieces that are usually ignored - this is life, precious but also an ordinary stroke in the historical picture (from my personal understanding, it is relatively simple but I can't explain it anymore. I feel that I feel it deeply and I can't describe it) Simple writing and stories are often the most touching. Cheers, author [blowing kiss]

A very vivid story of Peach Blossom Spring. I want to know if there is cp. If the other party wins the bet, the village will be protected forever, but if the other party loses, his sentence will be reduced by one hundred years. Loss of blood

When reading this book, be sure not to skip, skim, or read briefly. You should read it based on life experience. Some people sacrificed their lives just to ride the wind, and some people wrote flowers but could not write about him. Some people even became a beauty in anger, and their hair on their temples turned into snow at dusk. It feels like listening to Xiao Shaoyan shouting for wheat. Write to live forever, read to read the world. Long life, long life...

Very well written! ! Everyone, look! ! Woohoo, don't let the good books get buried! ! ! It's not a cookie-cutter routine! ! It's very novel, very passionate, and very sober. Different perspectives tell different stories. All I can say is that the author is amazing! ! ! Don't stop updating! ! Please! !

The writing is okay, but the updates are too slow. You can learn from the author of (You just arrested the sect leader when he was promoted to law enforcement elder). They update three or four times a day, and sometimes they update seven times. I always feel that capitalists are running rampant in tomatoes recently? Either the good-looking book has a low rating, or the good-looking book has been blocked.

This book is very good for a new author. The characters are well drawn and the plot does not drag on. There is a desire for people to watch. You still have to give the author some care. Since the book is written as a master, a teacher, and a guardian, the protagonist should try not to be involved in the world, or simply not be involved in the world, and write the story of the supporting character as a bystander, then the book will not have bad results. But if he joins the WTO in the later period, that's when this book starts to collapse. I hope I won't come back and change my rating later. Come on, author

The whole book is a reference to Jian Lai Jinli. He is very similar to Chen Ping'an, and there is also a sense of friendship in the words. It can be said that it is very good that the concession is not so ruthless, and the people in it are very smart. The protagonist is also a sensible person. He has his own principles and his own basic principles for the world. He is not so partial, and he also has his own emotions, and he is not that kind of extreme. Black and white, people are complex, and the concepts in it are also very useful. Some people like values, and they are personally involved in them. They have unique insights, and they only have objective values. Sometimes they are objective, and sometimes they have their own unique insights. If this book was not famous, he would definitely be very popular, and his words would be above 9.0. Of course, part of this is due to the fact that if a sword comes, it is not a sword.

Well⊙∀⊙! It looks pretty good to me, but as for the flaws or the knife, well⊙∀⊙! I can turn a blind eye, because I will read whatever the author writes. After all, the author also has ideas! [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I like this book. There are details, and there are many small stories interspersed with the main plot of the male protagonist being a otaku and a snake cultivating immortality. In those details, I feel that everyone is the protagonist, and everyone has their own way of living. Everyone has different choices, and some things cannot be changed. I also hope that I can see that he can break through this small world and enter a larger world...

There should be a second part! There should be a second part! It should be the second one. It's not quite like the ending. A lot of things are left unfinished, leaving only a shadow. What about the follow-up? And there are more foreshadowings buried behind the tail, which I have never forgotten, like a stuck in my throat. After watching the short play, I thought I could see the ending, but it turned out that there was more to go on. Where is Zhao Jiashu? What about the follow-up to Fuxianmen? What about Xiao Jingzi's question? What about Zhang Jiao's dream? The battle between dragons and kings? Too many I just want a reminder for the next one! ! !

The group portraits are great, but the sword-like ones are different, which is good. The level is also comparable to that of Sword Comes, Demon Comes, and Lord of Mysteries. Unfortunately, the author has already ran away.

In the early stages of this book, the writing style is good, and the plot arrangement is also very interesting. However, in the end, the author has not finished writing a lot of foreshadowing, which is rather sloppy and half-eunuch, maybe because it is not very popular. But overall it's still a relatively good work. Looking forward to more good works from the author.

Every character in this book is three-dimensional, and every supporting character has his or her own character. I think the author's writing style is quite good. The author describes human nature well. In terms of setting, it's grand. It's a good book, but you have to understand it and support the author. Good guy, this book has entertainment, favors, and strategies, and they are all good [face covering]

The writing style and articles are very good, with a feeling of "Rotten Ke Qiyuan", 5 stars is enough, but actually I want to give 4 stars. The title is invincible, but it is very frustrating at the beginning. If there is true invincibility, then those regrets will not happen.

It's a wonderful book. It may be a little depressing at the beginning but it's only for a few chapters. It gets more exciting later on. The main character starts off very strong. It's really good.

There is a slight problem in the front that may not be suitable for readers. But the more I looked at it, the less it became, and the quality became higher and higher.

Very well written. If you are lucky, you may become popular. The disadvantage is that it is too boring when the chapters are long. As we all know, the main reason for the popularity of male videos is the martial arts cultivator Dragon King. No one likes to watch an ordinary life like history. My suggestion is to learn more about the writing techniques of "Dragon". Maybe you will be the next big hit.

A python swallows a dragon, tsk, I never thought about it before, but I didn't expect it to happen. It looks so cool.

The rating should be higher. After all, it is still very beautiful.

I really like this type of novel, and I have a feeling of the impermanence of the world... [Send heart] [Send heart] [Love] [Love]

This is a book that I have read with great literary talent. The scenery and people are vividly written. The road to immortality is long, and there will always be dullness and passion. However, the author's writing is too dull and lacks passion. I hope the author will work harder and write better articles I originally wanted to give it 4.5 Stars, but the new book scored 5 stars.

The author knows how to write books, and the writing style is very good, but I really have to admit that some of the plots are clichéd, but the flaws do not hide the good points, it is beautiful!

A very interesting group portrait novel, but the impression it gave me was different from the title, so I didn't click on it after reading it many times.

The writing is really good, it has a bit of a sword feel, the ideas are relatively clear, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. I highly recommend reading it and chewing it slowly.

I prefer reading this type of book. The more I read it, the more interesting it becomes. It's not a mindless read.

The book is very good, and the writing style is quite comfortable. People who are willing to wait and are patient and not too impatient should be very interested in this kind of writing. So far, I have seen the protagonist's change of state of mind from demon to human, which is very reasonable and smooth. Of course, those who just want to read for pleasure should try not to torture themselves. There are many such books in Tomato, just turn right when you go out.

The writing of the little characters is profound, and the main plot has become a supporting role. The author's writing skills are very profound, surpassing those of many Tomato authors. If it is updated continuously, this book has great prospects.

A very good book, with solid content, vivid characters, and no brainwashing. It's a really good novel. The protagonist is a great demon who sits in the mountains watching the changes in the world, suppressing one's luck and plotting the overall situation of the world. The supporting characters are also full of plot and characters, and everyone will be deeply impressed. The recent content is even more intertwined with right and wrong, and full of contradictions. You can watch it with your mind!

Very good, more in line with my taste.