Don't Lie! I Can See the Title Above Your Head

The book is quite good, but the fatness in the beginning will dissuade some people. After all, most people read the article and feel involved, but it should be thinner in the later part. The subject matter is novel and it should be popular. Come on✊

It looks good but lacks a lot of authors, come on!

The plot is quite good, but the settings are not very clear. For example, there are some major details such as how the color levels of the information seen by the male protagonist's plug-in are divided, but they have little impact. If you are short of books, it is worth reading. There is that kind of cowardly plot in the back. The protagonist's uncle is sick. The protagonist has money but doesn't take it quickly. He has to have his relatives laugh at him before taking it. That kind of Dragon King plot is disgusting.

It's so damn good to read, it has a plot and brains, the emotional line is too smooth, the fighting passion is also a little humorous, the characters are full of personality, I feel that this book should be rated 9 or higher. I don't know why the score is low. Is it because of the word count? As long as the follow-up does not collapse, it will be a good book

The subject matter is good and so is the plot. It's just that the settings are too high and it doesn't feel that interesting.

The story concept is very novel and interesting, but I don't know why the score is a bit low. Compared with other similar settings that reflect reality, such as strange worlds, 18-year-olds who enter the game and die if they lose, online games, etc., This book is more attractive. First of all, the protagonist's character creation is relatively successful. The protagonist is not a brainless and funny one, at least he is a thoughtful one. Yesterday I read a book "The Case of the God Being Eaten..." And I couldn't stand it after reading 30 chapters. The protagonist is brainless and funny. Compared to others, this one is very good. It's really like finding gold in shit. The setting in the story is also very interesting. The Monkey King and King Li Tianwang are all mechas, controlled by humans, and fight against each other. The last thing I feel bad about is the title of this book. It's weird and feels like a youth romance novel. I suggest changing the title.

It's okay, the subject matter is new, there are a lot of coincidences, but my IQ is still online, it's not really a cool article, it's reasonable after reading the first 5 chapters I'm just careless, I'm trying to be smart, I'm not thinking about this, it's okay to just try to make it fresh

Personally, I feel good about it. It is one of the few novels that I can read. Although it is sometimes a little bit toxic, it is fortunate that there are not many chapters and it is too short. The ending was actually planned from the beginning, which is from the other side and the next life. This is easy to guess, maybe it is just a back-up, and the combat power is still not clear until now. It basically depends on luck. The writing is not bad, and I can't say it. It is too good and feels weird. I suggest the author hide the foreshadowing better so that readers can't find it and turn back to read it. Come on last author [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

I read it in one sitting, it's very short but it's such a great book! The main reason for the low rating of this book is that the title is a mindless harem novel, but the content is from other genres. Tomato readers, who have a small audience, naturally do not buy it. I hope the author will continue to update and then recommend and test the title of the book, maybe it will become popular. If it doesn't work, I will give it a review and rush to it. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I really can't bear the data of this book. There are too few good books.

Very good, very comfortable to watch, Cyber ​​Journey to the West, worth owning [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It's okay, but it's not particularly good-looking. Some places are still a bit contrary to logic, but overall there's nothing particularly anti-human. They're all minor issues that can be ignored. The overall direction of the plot is quite interesting, and the relationship between the characters seems to be handled well. Five stars encourage [OK]

I think the author did the right thing. If the author hasn't thought about the subsequent plot, this kind of plot requires reasoning and requires brain-burning. In addition, he also has to remember what props the protagonist got. It will become more and more confusing as he writes. It is a good choice to immediately stop the story at a node. I look forward to the author's next story. I think the storyline is well designed. The protagonist can know the usage tips through the title. We readers look at the name of the prop from the perspective of the protagonist and feel that we are imagining the feeling of playing a game out of thin air, with a certain title on our head.

The plot is well-paced, compact and gripping, but this is a double-edged sword. If you grasp it well, it can grab people's attention and make people "get on top" But once it is not controlled well, the problem of insufficient details will be exposed, the settings are not clear enough, and too many things are not explained clearly. This is a common problem for new writers, because if you think about it while writing, you will make up many things by yourself, but these things are not available to readers, so many places appear "poisonous" The author just lacks experience and has the ability to tell exciting stories. He has a promising future. Come on

It's very good-looking and interesting. There are often witty and humorous short stories, and the subject matter is also very novel. At least I haven't seen anything similar on Tomato. If you can keep reading it now, it is a good book.

I think this book is quite good despite a small number of poisonous points. Compared with the previous book that was embarrassing, I think it is still quite good. I saw this book in the book waste square, which shows that many people still think it is good. The settings inside are very good, including fighting against the Buddha mecha and so on. To be honest, I think this book is a good one among the fantasy novels I have seen. If not compared to other novels, it is still a good one in Tomato. As long as the author doesn't forget the details of the outline and the holes he dug, then I think there is still hope. Unfortunately, I didn't expect the sudden ending. Hey, what are you going to do with a person who can't sleep in the middle of the night reading a novel? You have to find someone again.

Very exciting, individual and distinctive. Don't let others (other than yourself) influence you. I hope this light novel can last for a long time, but I have a question 🤔Don't lie, the connection between this book and lying has not been discovered yet, it is foreshadowing (⊙o⊙?!). The appearance of the characters is weakened, but the image and personality of the characters are shown from multiple angles, and a lot of things are buried. My guess is that Lu Sheng's father Lu Peng should also have traveled through time, so it was decided to be virgin territory. Only with a lot of foresight can he help the Yang family rise. At the same time, the spirit of rebel gaming is even stronger [Cool]

The author's various ideas and the first copy of the game are all good, but the author's writing style still has room for improvement. As far as I am concerned, during the attack on the city lord's palace, there are continuous surprise points when the heroine and the enemy are dueling in pairs: 1. The rating of the item [Absolute Domain] is only S, but the double S (not the ordinary double S) mecha cannot be broken. More importantly, the title modification has no effect, which makes this rating too fragmented. 2. It's also about the prop [Absolute Domain] that disappears on its own for too long. Although I know that it takes such a long time to highlight the tenacity of the heroine, it feels a little uncomfortable for such a long time. The time can be shortened slightly. 3. Also in this scene, he was defeated the moment before the field disappeared, and was only injured by 0.01 Centimeters. This was intended to highlight the hero's heroic rescue at the last critical moment, but it was too abrupt, which made people very uncomfortable. More importantly, seeing too many such critical rescues made people disgusted. This book is generally good, and the ideas are good. It still needs some work, and I hope the author will write better and better.

Chapter 170, waiting for the update. Let's talk about this book. It was rated 9 points, but now the rating is obviously lower. Time-traveling male, with hookup but no system, single female protagonist (currently). The general plot is that the male protagonist travels to a fat house in the game world, contracts a marriage with the rich and white heroine, and counterattacks all the way. The plot may seem a bit old-fashioned, but the world view and setting of this book are quite interesting. It is based on the RPG of Journey to the West, but it also includes mechas, fighting, and the fat male protagonist (in the early stage) ), reminds me of "Accelerated World". The dungeon missions are very weird. The author's comedy skills are quite good. Various jokes emerge one after another. The writing style is not bad. It is full of joy. There is almost no water content. Every small event can be connected later, which shows that the author's outline and logic are very good. I hope the author will continue to do so and not try to make up the content for the sake of word count later on. Looking at it now, the author should have a clear framework for the whole story. If it is maintained until the story is completed, it should be a superior work.

I feel pretty good. There is no need to be so serious when reading a novel. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it if it doesn't suit you. There is no need to give a low score. Writing a book is not easy. If you have the ability to write it yourself, I feel that this book should be around 9 points. Come on, author!

It's OK, it's pretty good, I can keep reading it. I always read this novel intermittently and read it with relish, Wuhu. The male protagonist is a person with perseverance and the ability to stack buffs. I think his most incredible ability is the entry, which allows him to see the identity and status of the other person, such as a hidden trash can. You can still pick up equipment when you are invincible. What does it say in it? There are some jokes in it. Does Kunpeng Group count as a joke? If you say yes, it is, and if you say no, it is no. The heroine is a proud girl, she has everything, she is talented in housework, but she starts with a high and a low match. The male protagonist who starts with poor conditions is not worthy of her. By chance, she has to get married in a task issued by the system. The bigger the gap, the higher the points bonus. The system requires everyone to get married, and those who don't get married will die. The development of the next two people is quite natural. The female protagonist will not have many scenes. The male protagonist develops in the early stage. By the middle stage, he has already gotten to know the female protagonist's family, and then his identity is recognized. Emotionally, it should be a foregone conclusion that the male and female protagonists are a pair for life. In terms of career, with the support of the heroine's family, the hero is asked to start a team of his own. It seems that it was finally decided that the Yang family will take the majority, so the hero will take the majority. The novel is not finished yet, and it is not clear who will join the team. But I think there must be a lot of props. Both parties have matching family backgrounds, and the male protagonist's father is very powerful. There are many intersperses in the book that use NPCs' memories of past events to show that Lu Peng is a legendary figure. His father opened a group called Kunpeng, but the conditions for taking over are still unclear. He should get clues through his uncle in the future. When the male protagonist enters the game, there is a script inside, and his identity is the script. Outside the game, it can also be the script. The game developers can also be the script, and we readers can also be the script. Everything is possible with NPCs.

[Chigua] I read it from the first chapter in one breath. The story is novel, the setting is novel, and the imagination is great. It is a rare novel in 🍅. The only flaw is that the details need to be improved, and the writing style is a bit messy, but the story line is still very clear without going too far. Overall, the subject matter is novel, and the flaws are not hidden. It is worth reading [Like]

The various settings are integrated very smoothly, whether it is the identity setting or the background settings of these games, it reminds me of many good articles I have read before! Moreover, the time allocation is reasonable and it does not directly turn into a game article! Self-motivated dog abusers can watch it in one sitting [laughing]!

The pace is not slow, and although the beginning is a bit cliche, the plot is boldly innovative based on the myth, giving people a hazy feeling of déjà vu and original surprises. I think this book should have a normal score of 9.3-9.5. Now this point must have been maliciously brushed by someone! ( '-' )ノ)`-' ). ಠಠConvex

The setting is very novel, and if the plot unfolds, the world view will indeed feel very huge. Although the emotional drama after the protagonist becomes handsome becomes a bit cliché, it is still good to watch despite the flaws. It is a pity that it has been discontinued. I hope the next one will be better

It's a very good book. I don't know why the rating is only 8.2. I read a copy of it in the middle of the book and it actually has a Werewolf-like plot. I thought it was well written and a bit innovative. It's a pity that it's not finished, I'll probably come back to read it again after half a year.

The storyline is different and worth watching

It's a beautiful book. I love reading it. It's a very charming book. It has the same feeling as when I first read the novel ten years ago. It's actually nothing like it, but there is a feeling that makes me obsessed. I can only say that it's very charming, very charming.

The plot of the dungeon can be more passionate. At the same time, the appropriate use of some Internet memes can make the plot more funny and interesting without feeling boring. In reality, add more sugar and funny plots, and at the same time develop the clues and plots of game pollution.

The subject matter is quite novel, but it's a pity that it ended so hastily, but overall it's quite good. I feel that it would have been better if the male and female protagonists had more emotional lines. I can only write it down and feel that it has a score of at least 9.2 (This software has too many points, so it depends on the score)

I'm really short of books. I started looking through the books on the bookshelf. I read it again today. In fact, the setting and everything are pretty good, but the details still need to be improved. There are a lot of bugs and various flaws. It would be good if they could be polished. It's a pity that the update has been discontinued [face covering]