Fox Demon Miss Yaya's Sword Immortal

In Chapter 12, Tu Shan Yaya's confession part is too abrupt. There are several obvious problems here. One is that the previous text is not enough foreshadowing, which will prevent readers from being involved in the characters, which is the so-called sense of satisfaction. It is written too anxiously and wants to push the emotional line too much. This is a very classic problem. I have seen that several readers cannot accept the confession part. Maybe some of them also know it. I can't tell what the reason is. In fact, the writing style is too young, which prevents them from being well integrated into the characters. I personally think that if you want to promote the emotional line, you can use fragmented memory methods and scene descriptions. The two work together to express the emotions vividly. At the same time, the author must also pay attention to writing emotions. If a high-scoring emotional line is required, it is best to You have to have your own uniqueness. When writing emotional lines, I personally think you can read female novels. The emotional level of female novels is generally good. Just find a few high-scoring books and read them, but don't imitate their illogical plots. This will only be brushed off. This is what I will say in the review. Finally, here are some of my personal thoughts. I read this book not just for the plot, but for the routines. It's one thing that attracts me, but I see that the author's writing style is very young. I want to see growth, not only the author's growth, but also mine, so I will continue to make suggestions and sincerely hope that this work can be better. Therefore, I hope that I can read this book as a loyal reader of this book, and I also hope that I can complete this work as a reader who accompanies the author. I am a reader and a writer, but I am also someone who wants to walk with you, come on

I don't know how to evaluate it. Is reincarnation as simple as restoring memories? I think it's not just that. Is he still the same person in his previous life? Even if it's just a memory, it doesn't belong to him. It's conceivable that if a life that doesn't belong to you suddenly intervenes, then does this life belong to him or to me? He should live his own life in this life, which may be related to his previous life, but that should not become the mainstream. This is my personal opinion, not specific to your book, just based on my feelings.

I have been looking for many novels about kingship on Tomato. This is one of the few books. I think both the plot and the character settings are in line with my ideas. I hope the author can keep writing. I will keep pursuing it. (I will definitely give the free gift to the author every day. The author should come on!!!)

I highly recommend everyone to read it. The author has added his own things based on the original fox demon, and the continuation content of other demons we have seen will be omitted, which greatly increases our perception.

Why there are only four stars? The author will know more if he reflects more on the number of chapters he has updated.

Don't have too many heroines, just one Yaya is enough [shocked]

I feel that the past life without the main character in this world is interesting. Come on and have more memories. The past life is much better.

The writing is quite good. You can't satisfy everyone even if you like it personally. Just like it. However, I personally think the ending is a bit forced. I just don't think it has any other meaning. I just want to express my opinion. It's indeed a good-looking fanfic. The ones I've seen so far can be ranked in the top three.

I've read 30 chapters so far, and overall it's pretty good, except for a few places where it's a bit awkward to read. I'll come back and review it after I finish reading the next 188 chapters. Also, there are too few chapters and the author needs to update them quickly! We bookworms read books very quickly (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧👍

I hope the author can complete the update and don't interrupt it. Never interrupt it.

It's okay, although there are no bright spots in the front, but there's nothing bad about it either [like] (it's not enough to watch alone [almost crying])

I've read more than 80 chapters, and so far it's still quite enjoyable. It's okay, I hope the author can cheer up.

I like it so much [send heart]

It's good, but it doesn't have a strong sense of immersion. It doesn't have a little soul. I hope the author will work hard and keep up the good work.

It's really good. Can the author give me more accurate information? Does this book have a single female protagonist? Tushan Yaya

Personally I think it looks very nice

The descriptions that intersect with the ancient story lines are very interesting. Only by reading carefully can you understand the beauty of it. It is a very good novel. Although Liu Er is a bit abrupt, the distinction between priorities is the most appropriate situation.

Very good! In line with the original comics

It's so good that I forgot to eat and sleep while reading it. I rarely feel this way. This fanfic is good. I am a bull demon and I also brought into the relationship between the protagonist and Yaya [face covering]

A very interesting novel about the fox demon and the matchmaker

It's so good, it's the first time I've seen the protagonist of King Power, and the plot production and coordination are very good. I hope the author can keep up the good work and add a few more chapters. It's not enough, not enough at all [please update] I finally finished chasing it. I hope the author will publish a book about Tu Shanrong in the next book [laughing]

It's okay, there's more comic content

I feel that those who write about the fox demon and the little matchmaker only write about people from ancient times who are so powerful in modern times. I feel that no one has created a modern genius.

It is very suitable for people like us who watch the fox demon matchmaker, mainly because we have always watched Yaya being single, and finally watched her fall in love for once.

Not bad, you can take a look

Well, the structure is well written.

It's beautiful, and the story and memories are well written.

Please, author, please update twice a day [I'm about to cry] [Sending my heart]

It feels very interesting, I hope the author can finish it

So good, I want to watch this, I want to watch this