Villain************

It's just for your style. I saw that you had opened a new book before, and I was very excited [smile][smile][smile]. I originally wanted to read books for a while, but I was really curious and couldn't stand it, so I came to take a look. Take a look! Eh! ! That's it! ! !

I hope I can write a book as good as The Emperor's Son this time. After reading the first two chapters, I feel that the male protagonist is a dandy who is a good boy at home and does nothing outside. According to the author's usual book style, he should also be a harem. If you like harems, hurry up and get involved. After reading it, I felt that the first few chapters were a bit sloppy, but then it gradually became more stable.

I skipped over from the book The Emperor's Son, because the subject matter is similar, and I must like this style, so I will give you a good review first. I read the previous book for 58 hours and skipped some chapters. I will make up for them when I have time. It can be said that it took a lot of time. I personally feel that if more psychological descriptions of the protagonist are added to highlight the character and reflect the protagonist's understanding and control of the overall situation, the overall sense will be better. Better use of ellipsis in character dialogue would be better. Although ellipsis in dialogue can help you feel the atmosphere immersively, if used too much, it can give off a sense of panic and stuttering, so I think it should be used with caution. If it is just to increase the number of words, it is strongly recommended to add more small details [smile] [smile]. You can use scenery descriptions and obscure expressions, and fill them with ellipses in the middle. I think your senses will be improved. I am looking forward to this book very much, and I hope to be able to accompany the author as he writes and witness the complete birth of this work.

Big cheers for the author, keep it up. This ability can win more than Shang Ben's 61 wives. [Laughing evilly][Learned][laughing]

Aren't Empress Mingyue and the male protagonist related? I've been thinking about the latest chapter, and now I realize that it's just the author who needs to be careful [laughs crookedly] I almost thought it was "Villain: Mine... Is the Emperor" from somewhere next door, cough cough!

Damn it, I didn't notice that you wrote The Emperor's Son. I'm short of you by 5 stars. Come on, surpass the previous one. Be careful and don't go in again [laughing]

Listen to me this is a good book

I have read all the author's books, and every one of them is very beautiful

Isn't this book really going to be a sacrifice to heaven again?

It's very good. Although I haven't read this new book yet, I decided to read a few more chapters, just like the book "The Emperor's Son". I'm reading more chapters, and it feels good to read every word.

Except for a little bit of a breakdown in cultivation, everything else is pretty good. It's a very good novel.

The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, there are many foreshadowings, the logic is online, the plot is also interlocking, the imagination is wide open, the content is resonant and thought-provoking, it is very exciting, don't miss it,

Don't take too many, otherwise like the last book, you won't even know who the heroine is.

Okay hahaha

Very nice, keep up the good work

Old taste, I know [laughing evilly]

Let's kill more children of luck, Lu's protagonist Ma [laughing evilly]

I like this theme [laughing evilly]

I'm following this from an old book, so I hope it doesn't end on a cliffhanger! [Cover face]