Lie Down in the Infinite World with the Mountain and Sea System

I've read about twenty chapters, and it's quite interesting, but a bit... Well, how should I put it, even the protagonist's role is too little! The copy is not very long to begin with, and there are too many descriptions of teammates. Xiao Yazi's presence is more like a passerby [a big boss among his teammates] [there are not many descriptions of the appearance of the vest]. Maybe it's because the hook is a bit big from the beginning, and it's not easy to write? Also, I feel that my wife is not very good at describing the thriller world view. The copy is relatively bland, and the plot advancement relies entirely on dialogue. There are not many foreshadowings and twists, and there is no scary atmosphere. [Perhaps my wife also wants to write a copy that is less scary and supernatural. (But it's not funny either!)] It's all about push-ups, and the large area of ​​text describing the teammates' efforts to break the game seems very... Well, funny? In other words, it's all in vain. Anyway, in the end it's the protagonist who ends up finishing. Of course, it's possible that I'm too impatient, and my teammates also need to grow step by step. So my wife can add more depth to her teammates, give more highlights, and give the protagonist more roles, Xiao Yazi is obviously so cute! The small system is also very cute!

Just gone? ! ! ! ! ! ! So short! ! Although the ending is very good and the blank space is also very good, is there not even an extra chapter? ? Is it over? ! Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo......

It's very beautiful. It's not what I like very much, but the author, are you a bit short? Well, you have to know that you are a newcomer and you have to have a newcomer's attitude. Why not write quickly?

It's pretty good to watch. There are no flaws except for the sudden ending.

It's pretty good to watch, but it feels like it ends quite suddenly, as if it's never finished! I still want to continue watching!

It's good-looking and interesting. The male protagonist should be able to wear a lot of vests.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's good to watch, and the plot is exciting.

It looks good, but I feel like there are a lot of settings that haven't been written.

It's beautiful, I like this type of article, but it's a pity that it's finished in such a short time [almost crying]

It's beautiful. The author's crazy words in big letters hit me hard.

It's very beautiful but it's appendicitis [smile][awkward laugh][cry]

Nice! ! Well, how should I put it? Although I have finished reading it, I still have a feeling that I am still unfinished, and I really want to continue reading it!

I like the non-CP good-looking, relaxed and refreshing text, take a sip of fluff (≧▽≦)

Why is there no one reading such a beautiful book?

This makes me feel happy

Very nice, but a bit short

It looks so good, why no comments?

One copy and one vest!

Hateful! ! ! Why did it stop so suddenly! !

I regret that I didn't see it. They said it was our copy and there were other copies.

Not bad, I'll go read the second one

I think it's pretty good-looking, except that it's a bit sparse

I really finished reading this book. I like this book very much, but I have to say that this book is a bit small for someone who can easily follow more than 500 photos.

It's super beautiful, I really like my wife's writing style and setting [blowing kiss]

The praise is overwhelming. It looks good, but it's a bit short. There are basically no blocking points.

It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?

It looks great, please give the author a big boost [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [ask for more updates] [please get more updates]

The protagonist has a lot of vests, and the protagonist can support a group by himself, and the story is quite interesting.