Naruto: Naruto Just Wants to Build Mechas, What's Wrong with That?

It's super cool. Isn't it better to write about Sasuke's gay relationship and how to write about brotherhood while being gay?

The subject matter is very novel. I hope the author can keep writing. If he keeps writing, he might be able to surpass Dave!

It's very interesting to watch, and it's really fun to watch Naruto cheat. Whether it's cooking or inventing, he has taken a completely different path, and his style is more relaxed. But when I saw Danzo acting as Hokage, I felt a little bit unmotivated. After all, without him taking the blame, I felt that I had no motivation. Also, Naruto's performance was not very proportional to the results of his efforts. There was a bit of a gap. With so many achievements and inventions, it shouldn't be so laborious to defeat Orochimaru. Even without Gundam, the many derivative scientific and technological achievements of one product are amazing. There is a sense of separation between Naruto's learning ability and practical spirit, because according to the setting of this book, Naruto carefully studied the nature of chakra and various ninjutsu in the ninja school, and actively practiced it, but it was strange that he didn't know how to climb trees and tread water after graduation. Another thing is that compared with other Naruto fans, it is a pity that it does not influence partners to join in the common progress of science. Of course, all of this is innocuous in general. This book is still an excellent and enjoyable book, and I enjoyed reading it. It's just a pity that it could be better.

It is very good and very similar to a book I read before. (Naruto: Naruto said that I am not a homebody. It has been removed from the shelf, but you can find it in my bookshelf, in the discontinued column. If you want to read it, you can look for it.) But that book has been discontinued. I hope the author can stick to it.

Very exciting ideas, and the writing style is also good. It's just that I don't know where the author studied? This fragmentation method of yours? Um. Can you give me your home address? I'll send you some souvenirs here to reward you [angry]

The alternative Naruto is so interesting. The author's ideas and writing techniques are particularly beautiful. So far, I can't see any shortcomings. The word count is long enough, the updates are fast enough, and it also retains the original innocence of the celebrity. Okay, I'll just think about it for now. I'll comment later if I have any thoughts.

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The language of the full text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work. The emotions are rich and true, and it is enjoyable to read. The structure is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. The language is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people's blood boil and their hearts surge when reading it. The content is novel, the idea is wonderful, and the language is vivid and lively. The fresh breath of life is revealed between the lines.

The updates for more than half a month are all about Sasuke's plot. I really don't like the plot of the two pillars. When will the two young lovers successfully meet or cure each other's illness? I really don't have the patience to watch it and let me have a good time. It is really painful to follow the update. I put a punctuation here. I hope some kind people will kick me when the Sasuke plot is over. I will watch it again then.

I've finished reading it all. It's good that he has taken another path. Well, the path of science and technology is still OK so far. You can see how it is written later. As far as celebrities are concerned, as far as we are concerned, it is similar to Goldfinger. At that time, it didn't work well. At least give us a write-up of what this is like.

It is interesting without deviating from the main event, and does not forget the core of the protagonist. It satisfies the readers' expectations while adding its own color. However, the author still needs to pay attention to some places. Reading the comments can tell that the author seems to have some flaws in some places. You can read more in the comment area. By the way, don't deviate from the main line, which is the development of science and technology, because it is estimated that most readers come here after reading "Technology Naruto". I have read other books, and in the end they all went off the mark because of this, which led to dismal results. Although the author has no major problems now, I still want to remind him.

It's exciting, updated quickly, and the plot rhythm is very comfortable. However, Sasuke's emotional line needs to be handled carefully, otherwise it will be a big poisonous point.

This book can definitely be ranked in the top 10 of the best books on Naruto at that time. There were many authors of good books on Naruto at that time, but this book can still occupy a place and it is very awesome.

Although the plot is a bit blunt, the magic modification is very innovative. It is no longer a cookie-cutter fanfic, but the process is blunt and a bit confusing. Then the Gundam among the mechas is not necessarily strong. Some other inspirations should be given. After all, mechas in interstellar wars can only be regarded as one of the battle formations. You can consider the explosion style and some hydrology. It can only be said to be a novelty, not very good. Come on.

The protagonist, Goldfinger, is powerful and has a strong presence in the early stage, but disappears in the middle and later stages. The full text has no time-travel and rebirth, highlighting the story of diligent study - technology changes the world. Cp Hinata, childhood sweetheart, raised. Sasuke's plot was not handled well, it was a bit unfinished, and there were a lot of pitfalls that were not filled in. However, the author's writing style is not new, and the book is still readable.

It's very novel and beautiful. The author's Naruto is working hard "to drive a mecha" from beginning to end, or in other words, to develop the story. After reading the whole book and recalling it, I can't remember any poisonous points. Of course, some people should not read it if they mind that there are no conspiracy theories or that Danzo is not dead. It's not brainless, the story development is well-founded, and there's no low-level plot (like pretending to be 13 to slap someone in the face) It's worth a second read, but the story ends too quickly, leaving a bit unfinished. If the ending of the story were completed, there might be about a hundred more chapters (I want to read it), but it didn't, so I'll deduct a star from you.

To be honest, it is a very good Naruto fan novel. It has a lot of ideas and a tight rhythm in the early stage. However, the shortcomings are also very obvious. Especially in the later stage, the handling of Sasuke and Xinxin is very obvious. I didn't think about how to deal with it. Other aspects are very good.

The plot is one of the better among all the Naruto fanfics I have seen. Many of the plots are connected together, but there are many holes left unfilled, such as why the indescribable thing came from (it may also be the author's will [smile])

The writing is still very good, especially Uzumaki Naruto. When the villagers' attitude towards him reverses later, it still feels very good, and the genius is on the left and the madman on the right. It feels like the celebrity should be on the left.

All I can say is that it is very beautiful! I would like to say that this is another Naruto science and technology novel after My Man Helps is Big Big Wolf!

This book gives me the feeling that I think it is the best of the three books.

Tai Ku La is not the kind of mindless and cool article, it is in the style of science and technology, and it is all developed by ourselves, it is very awesome. But the author is a bit short

It feels okay. The protagonist is Naruto, who has the ability to get all kinds of things. He used this to study technology and became a super scientist. His dream was to drive a Gundam. It's still a pretty good read, but the latter part isn't as good as the first.

How should I put it? The idea and starting point are very good, and the writing style is also good. It gives people a new feeling after reading it for a long time. It feels like this book is still available even if it is out of stock. Can't you read more about the author? Too little, not enough to watch [laughing evilly]

One of the best Naruto fanfics out there

Yes, the character of the protagonist is okay. He does not follow the crowd and has his own style. There is not so much bitterness, hatred, conspiracy, and the like, and he is not full of Noko. Such a protagonist is great, but the author's updates are so slow that it is not enough to watch [please update]

With this update intensity, apart from the 200,000 words and 20 chapters, I would like to call you the strongest

I like it very much. It's the same as the Dave's book I read. It's very to my liking. Author, please keep writing

Very new theme, very good plot

This book will definitely become popular in the future, and the author is very diligent in updating it. I think he has posted four pictures today. I wonder, did Naruto open the mecha in the end?