The Young Immortal Who Has All the Taoist Spirits and Heavenly Spiritual Roots

The subject matter is quite good, and it is not a system-oriented game. The protagonist also has a genius start. I like the elements of the mythical beasts and husbands very much, and I think most people like this element. However, I feel that the writing has been ruined by the author. I suggest that the author read "Dharma and Immortal Path" and "Wanxiang Immortal Sect" for reference. Moreover, the article also said that there are thousands of worlds. For the world view, you can refer to the world view of "Eternal Life" by Shenji Master or "Zhe Tian" by Chen Dong. The path of cultivation can be made similar to that of various schools of thought, with various paths to enlightenment. Another point is that this current book does feel like there is too much nonsense. The most important thing in reading a novel is to make people feel immersed in it, so that they can have the heart to continue reading. A bit of personal advice, don't criticize if you don't like it, but respect the author and support originality [currently in development]!

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Yes, the analysis of the relationship between immortal cultivators and ordinary mortals is very reasonable, and the manifestations of various mentalities are also consistent with common sense. Come on

It's very good to watch, and it doesn't feel like there's any brainless plot. As you read it slowly, you can understand that the author's settings are very reasonable, and it's very comfortable to write a bird to death. The protagonist is also very smart and talented, and there is no bloody plot. I really don't understand the clichés in the comment area. I just don't know why so few people watch it. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

It suits my taste. The key point is that it is not brainless. Don't think that cultivating immortality means love, hatred, and opportunities to practice in seclusion. Your IQ will definitely increase. Finally, there is an article that meets the conditions and is logical.

It's quite palatable for now, but I don't know what will happen next.

Very creative, very good [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I like it, I like it, I like it so much, author, author, come on, come on, I am super, super invincible. I like it. If you like it, I want to cry. Author, I love you😍 I love you so much. I love you so much.

The name is pretty good, but the plot is bad. Come on, the author.

Very well written. Tomato is rare enough to read on

Keep writing, it's quite interesting

Why doesn't anyone read such a good book?

The author will update soon, there are too few, not enough to read! ! !

It's very beautiful and the author writes it very well. Lu Ci is really the most talented writer of Xiuzhen writing I have ever seen. I like him so much. Most of the writing is not enough to read.

I didn't expect to cut the book. I actually quite like the protagonist with this kind of personality, which is the Immortal Invincible style. I was originally looking forward to the protagonist getting slapped in the face in the post-apocalyptic world. Still want to see it! !