Xialan: If Only We’d First Met as Strangers

The protagonist is a child of Yundan and the story framework of developing in the wild and a lot of second creations are okay, but the plot is too general and looks awkward and a bit messy. It would be nice to solve these problems. After all, Xia Lan has seven seasons and I can definitely write a long one.

It's pretty good, but the protagonist's treatment was too miserable in the early stage, but the overall writing style is okay. I'll feel good if I keep writing. Don't interrupt the update. The heroine is stronger overall. Don't let the protagonist get hurt. I think your inner alchemy training in Xia Lan is a very good setting! You have to believe that your writing is better than most on this platform, and it will be even better if you strengthen your logic.

I feel that the writing progress is a bit slow, I hope the author can speed up the pace.

That's it, a weird fanfic, written about cowards, tragedies, and failures. The updates are too slow. I can't keep going. Come on, author [face covering]

Average The characteristics of the protagonist are not outstanding and mediocre, but it is forcibly giving the protagonist a halo. It is better to write clearly that he has tricks or talents. The plot is very confusing and the logic is a bit lacking. There are too many doubts left in less than thirty chapters. Jane mentioned a few big ones, why is there a high-level zero in the protagonist's village, how to arrange the potential heroine, how to tell the story of the protagonist's life in the third volume, etc. This does not include the plot of the original book.

It's quite in line with the original comic style.

Don't dismantle the official CP

Although it is very interesting, the update interval is too long and I have forgotten the previous content. Forget it.

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Okay, I've read a lot of Xia Lan books, this one is quite new.