Returned from Another World and Found That the Two Worlds Merged?

First book review. It can be seen that the author is a novice, after all, the paragraphs are exactly the same as when I wrote the article. There are some typos and some wrong symbols. I hope I can correct them while it's still hot. Overall, it was well written, and the male protagonist was okay. My sister's personality is a bit strange, and her feelings, behavior and language are somewhat contradictory. The roommates are okay, Zhang Junbao's character is a bit strange but okay. There are some points that are quite confusing, such as why it is not necessary for me to conceal my identity from certain groups, but I hope the author can give a reasonable explanation. Overall it's pretty good, author, please keep writing. Although it may not be possible, if it becomes popular, I will be the veteran~

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, White Snake has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Yi for 3,000 years, Yiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a frail young girl was lying beside the bed, with a slight smile on her lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Ah Qiao is perfunctory with his sister casually like this. The drama shows that the sister is sentimental, which is also 3. The brother is weak and needs more rest. The sister is so accurate with the brother, but it is the sister's fault. It hurts the brother's body and makes the sister feel distressed. Unfortunately, what does the brother's failure to defend himself have to do with the sister? Hurry up and add more updates, brother

Overall, it's okay. After all, you can tell he's a novice at first glance. From what I've seen, there's nothing particularly annoying about quitting, but there's nothing particularly exciting about it either.

Forehead. . . It feels pretty good. Let's talk about a few female protagonists @ a little bit. Big cheers for the author

It can be seen that the author is a novice. So, give me some support

Don't read novel reviews first, don't read paragraph reviews, don't blind the novel you just found with other people's eyes. You should start your journey, and don't read my comments unless you have finished reading it. The copywriting of the novel is attracting you, then read on. If you don't like it, you can jump directly to the table of contents. You may feel that there are a lot of questions about the protagonist's character in the front, but slowly reading back, there are explanations. This is a very fresh subject. Although the rating is only 6. Few, it will not be much higher in the future. I like this subject very much and hope to find novels with the same subject. The plot is also good, but the content and supporting characters may not be what I like. Like the feeling of separation for thousands of years, waiting and relief? , The relationship between the ancient gods, a certain ancient god who is the protagonist's daughter, the loyal deputy leader, the new faith in the lower world... Are all the highlights of this book, but I personally feel that there are too many college plots here, and may be more inclined to the protagonist's communication with another world.

Not bad, it looks good. I hope it will be updated continuously without interruption. I also hope the author will work hard, come on! ! ! !

Not bad, just too short

The technique is a bit immature

It's okay, but it's too everyday-oriented [face covering]

The plot is good, but there are some minor mistakes that need to be improved.

Personal feeling is good

See how many years the hero has lived in that world

It's okay for a novice author, mainly because it's quite novel.

Good-looking, not perfect but the second brushing

Personally I feel it's okay

Can we add more female protagonists?

It smells a bit like German orthopedics

Looking at it so far, I feel it's okay!

Not bad, just a little bit lacking.

I hope there won't be any eunuchs [laughing evilly]

Can there be a second book that tells the story of Gu Mofan's time travel?

The author is great, is there a female protagonist?

Not bad. This routine is quite novel, but it's a bit lacking.

It looks good, but there are too few updates, so I deducted one star. If the author updates twice a day, I will give it five stars directly.

This topic is good, give it a thumbs up

The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow. It is updated once a day. I followed it for more than ten days and only updated a dozen chapters.

It's quite good to watch. I've seen a little bit about the single male protagonist, but overall it's okay.

I feel very interesting