After the Old Man Dies, His Soul Will Appear in the Heavens

I don't know how to explain it, but the protagonist can create a clone, and then the main body is practicing from the perspective of the clone. Every time I see this, I feel that the main body is a tool. Also, clones like to take on the role of their stolen predecessors and bring too much emotion into them. I think it's okay to do things reasonably and not to have so many emotions.

The plot is generally good, but the author doesn't know how to describe it. I saw the protagonist lived for more than 100 years in the world of immortality and then died, so I thought it was an old man's story. As a result, the author describes how the reborn protagonist behaves more like a young man in his 20s. I don't feel like an old man at all. Even if I don't want to write about old people, I have to change slowly. And I always feel a little bit shy about shouting "Mom". . . I would still understand if the protagonist had no memory, but it feels a bit outrageous to still be able to shout out the words even though he has memories. I think it would be better to modify it. It would be better if the death age of the protagonist in the world of cultivation is lowered. The way you write it is too inconsistent.

The description style is a bit outdated. The author always explains why pig's feet are done in this way from the perspective of an outsider. The content is just a business YY article covered in the skin of cultivating immortals, space, and avatars! The character descriptions are also very contradictory! Suitable for newcomers to watch!

Chapters 41 to 45 are so confusing, and what about chapter 44? Why is there a missing chapter?

It looks good, I like to see this kind of thing

Give me a five-star review, come on!

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, really good, come on, author!

Overall it's pretty good

What the hell? The chapter is all messed up. The author should check it.