Xingqiong: My Disciple Jingliu Always Wants to Deceive His Master into Committing Crimes.

The writing is good, but... It's short and very cute [laughs evilly]

It's beautiful, but where is the author?

The plot is very simple. The protagonist picked up a girl, raised her, loved her, cared for her, and then died in front of her... And then a big boss was raised (buishi)

The writing is very good. It is rare to see this kind of writing in Star Iron fan fiction. The content is very exciting. The main reason is that the character of Kage-ryu is completely different from other fan fiction and games. I like it so much! ! ! ! Makes you want to raise her as a daughter~[Like] So, author, don't force me to kneel down and beg you, give you gifts, and urge you to update! I hope the author can update it steadily! [Please update]

Great, I am the dog of Jingliu and March 7th!

No, it's short, it's too short, it's not enough to read [angry] It's rare to find a book that I like to read so much. The author will update me as soon as possible.

Jiujiu, I am a huge fan of this book! I'm very honored. I've been reading this book for a long time. Although I can't be satisfied with everything, I think the author is great! This is one of the better novels about Star Iron in Tomato. Although you can still see the traces of Xiaobai, you can also see the author's transformation. This is the experience of a young author becoming an adult (乐) The main plot of this book in the early stage is from the ten years before Kyoryu became famous to the more than 180 years after he became famous. In the middle stage, I used Ai Kun Mo Yin as a clue, and in the later stage, I hastily fast-forwarded directly to the main line of the game. Maybe it's because I feel like I can't hold on to my writing power. In a word, this book is worth reading. Maybe you will see Jiujiu's wonderful comments? I would like to tell you my happy time with the above words. If this book has more than 500,000 words, the censor doctor Jiujiu will definitely express my heartfelt and emotional words in a thousand words. Jiujiu will not be stingy with his brain and wisdom when it comes to good books!

It's well written, and the author's cosplay is also very nice.

Strength, destiny, ideals, when I inherited the name of the author, I also got everything about that man. However, there is nothing that belongs to me under the name. I just play a shadow that has been dead for many years, but why should I play a failed shadow? That's right! It was I who killed the Herrscher of the Sky and saved the world. I did it. What that man failed to do, I have surpassed him. I defeated the world. This is my own strength, my own destiny, my own ideal, this is the real me. Ah, it's beautiful, but I just want to go crazy

For a new author, the book is already good, at least it starts off well, but it lacks some details. It is simple and white at the beginning and slightly sweet at the end. It doesn't look that amazing. You can add more details. For example, by the end of the book, except for Dan Feng, Dan Heng has almost no connection with the pig's feet. You can also add some knives (the tomato man is passive and triggered again), Wuxiao Drinking the Moon Rebellion on the Cloud or The way for a person to help others cure the demonic yin is to transfer the demonic yin into his own body and then slash it with a sword in order to suppress the demonic yin. Or it can be written in a cute body mirror, which is more yandere, so that more people can see it. In addition, some other destructive armies can be added later to attack the fairy boat. Then the protagonist can't suppress the demonic yin and is slashed by passing through the underworld, causing the memory to be shattered and so on. All in all, the book is good, but it could have been longer [Love]

I am a person who is immune to knives, and not a single knife in the game made me cry. However, the author killed me with just one knife. But it's well written.

Good book, the plot is well controlled, but are there really such innocent adults in the world?

Author, I advise you to get them together as soon as possible! [Code to hold] [code to hold] [code to hold] [code to hold] [code to hold] [stare] [stare] [star] [star] [star]

Please, I really hope to see Jing Yuan appear later

It's good-looking, but it's too short. The emotional line is full and logical. I have a two-way secret love. I just feel that it's a little too fast after we get together. It feels like it's ending for the sake of completion [facepalm] [facepalm]. It's too short. I still want to say that I'm sorry, sister-in-law. [Laughter] [laughter]

Although it is a bit short, it is not a big problem [eat melon]. What makes me a little uncomfortable is that the plot after the male and female protagonists express their feelings for each other is a bit watery (maybe due to the influence of the author's love experience [smile]). Putting aside these, what I am most looking forward to in the whole book is the author's women's clothing [smile] (Author, you smell so good, Sihasha~ Can you give me a pout🐶dog head to save my life). Looking at the whole article, it is obvious that the author has a strong writing skills [thinking]. This is not to say that this is not good. This is of course very good and can well guarantee the basic quality of the article [eating melon]. However, it will also be affected by one's own experience and experience. If the accumulation is not enough, it will be difficult to write a very good article. The character portrayal in the article is remarkable. It perfectly matches the character's behavior, psychology, etc. With the environment. It's a bit subtle [I learned it]. The plot structure is also good, smooth and clear, and the purpose is pure. It just didn't catch me [face covering]. The overall structure is also very complete, and the details are good. Comprehensive evaluation, (written above, I recommend the author to dress up as a woman [laughing]) is a good Star Iron fanfic. It is not long, so whether you are jumping into it directly or those who are in a book shortage period and want to find books too much, you can consider [Learned]. By the way, the four stars I gave are a bit low. I suggest you use the extras to add some content, and then I will come back to make up for the five stars, okay?

Seeing that you are going to an unscrupulous school in four days, I will give you a five-star review.

Is it time for the author to speed up the process?

It's quite nice, and so are the author's women's clothes.

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Super nb, it's been a long time since I read a book seriously [Chigua]

Are you going to write about knives? I've seen Xiu Yuan and Bai Mo. Already invincible

The plot is rich in content and the character descriptions are vivid. Each character seems to have his own soul and has become an independent person. The only shortcoming is that it is too short.

It's quite beautiful, just because... Just because, you are so beautiful!

Quick update! It was hard to see the mirror flow. . . It's a pity that the author dxwl. . .

After reading this book, I really like it. It's a bit unreadable, but I support the author very much. I will also read the new books released by the author in the future. And the author's ideas are very novel, come on! [Laughing] Come on, author, go to school well and wish you a good university! [Laughing]

I want to watch the clip of falling into the devil's body directly

Everyone is a passer-by, and everyone knows whether they have been written in a book by fate.

Let me tell you something, the author is really up to the task [laughing]

Author: I'm waiting for you to come back from school alive