GB**********

The peach tree that rebelled against our ancestors became a spirit. Not only is he a true GB, but he is also a boy. The short story is okay [laughing] [laughing] It's just that sometimes the level goes up and down.

The writing is quite good. Anyway, I don't think there are any bad points. The characters of the heroine and the hero are also okay. I like it. I hope the author will write it quickly and write many, many stories. It's a pity that there is no CP in Train to Busan. It would be great if there is a side story, because Xu feels a little interested in the heroine in the article. I want to know what he thinks. They may not be together in the side story. The witch thought she would end up with the angel, but she didn't expect to leave suddenly, but that's not bad. Both of them are immortals, so it's not easy for the heroine to leave. Big boost to the author 💪

It's not bad, but the pace is too fast, a bit like a summary of a character's life How could you treat Brother Zheng like this [angry][angry]

It sounds pretty good, but a little short.

Nice! Please keep up the good work💪

It's okay, but I wrote it a little too fast.

What a crazy situation, this is it, it's gone, it's gone, can you believe it [laughing and crying]

It's not bad. There are really very few novels of this type. I've also read a few other novels. I'm going to read your latest follow-up. Come on!