(Supernatural, humorous, ridiculous, watch slowly, the excitement will come later)
The clumsy-eyed Huang Pizi went through the tribulation to ask for a seal from humans, but was knocked unconscious by San Yi, a greedy old man with a knife hidden in his smile. Yu Mu Lengqiu encountered a kind heart, bought it for 50 yuan and put it in the hole of a dead tree. Before leaving, he put a handful of bean cakes that his grandfather loved to eat and said the immortal, I hope you get better soon... Inadvertently, Huang Pizi finally became a true Taoist and became an immortal.
In order to repay his benefactor, Huang Pizi, as Huang Baye, dragged Yu Mu Lengqiu into the void and came to the parallel world with a breath of fairy energy, and signed a contract with the 24 Soul Locking Company under Black and White Wuchang. From then on, Yu Mu Lengqiu captured evil souls as a soul locking master. Every time he completed an order, Yin Chai burned the ghost coins on the spot as a reward, and his grandfather's health would be better.
Yu Mu Lengqiu was shocked and suddenly realized that people can burn ghost money for ghosts, and ghosts can also burn it for people.
Yu Mu Lengqiu's kindheartedness and Ba Ye locked the ghost-wielding and stupid Ninja. Ninja was born clumsy, but extremely kind, and the millennium-old Grandma Wong Tai Sin. For the sake of justice, they united to lock souls and kill ghosts. Yu Mu Lengqiu regarded Eighth Master, Eight Sisters, Ninja, Maomao, Grandma, and the boss of hell Guan Zishu as relatives, and he would never be merciful in hurting my relatives.
Ba Ye is Yu Mu Lengqiu's body-protecting immortal. Killing ghosts and locking souls is blessed by Ba Ye's immortal power.
The eighth master likes to play pranks and punish the bad guys who are against him, making the unfriendly opponents feel ashamed and embarrassed, and even make him want to vomit. The eighth master is also the eighth brother who is the most damaged in the eyes of the eighth sister!
Reader comments
The story is smooth, well organized, and the plot is novel and special. The beginning is written with Huang Pizi asking for a seal, which is even more eye-catching.
But there are some places where the logic doesn't make sense. When did he enter the parallel world? It's hard for me to read word for word. [Cover face]
The pace is too fast, and the description of details is not quite right in some places, which is normal for a novice writer.
The character settings are still a bit funny, after all, they often do things that are so embarrassing that they leave three rooms and one living room behind. Especially Huang Pizi, I really like him, I like his character.
That's it for now. There are many difficulties on the way to writing a book, and single-player is inevitable. I hope you can stick to it and never forget your original intention. Come on! [Laugh]
A novel story with ups and downs, fascinating and worth reading.
Come on!
I really like this type of novel. Some supernatural novels were originally very good, but they were too scary and I didn't dare to read them. But this one is different. This girl looks really excited and nervous. She is also looking forward to what surprises there will be in the next chapter. The author is really great!
The content is rich, the imagination is wide open, and the scenarios are compact. It is worth watching. Five-star praise.
The writing is constantly exciting and the plot has ups and downs. The characters are full of flesh and blood. The young man's bones are strange.
Come and watch. The great immortal Huangpizi is waiting for you. Ba Ye will give a gift of immortal energy to the judge!
The author has profound literary knowledge and a broad imagination. He uses folk stories and combines elements of Internet literature with ingenious conception. The characters have distinct personalities and the plot has twists and turns. Fascinating. It is a masterpiece [love]
The characters are vivid and the author's writing is superb😄
In the author's description, the road leading to the village is sweltering with heat, and Grandpa is unbearably thirsty.
A pile of human excrement was looming near the entrance of the village, and flies were flying everywhere. Yu Mu Lengqiu held back his breath and sped up.
At this time, a glib voice from the village elder came from the entrance of the village:
"Take away your hair, close up the hornet's nest, close up the old turtle cover..."
For a moment, I passed by.
There was a goosebump-inducing braking sound, and Yu Mu Lengqiu got out of the car inexplicably, shouting loudly:
"Stop it, you idiot!"
Grandpa was confused, squinting his eyes and turning to look at the stopped old man.
Unique description and beautiful characterization! [Like][Like][Like]
The novel concept and delicate description are very interesting to listen to and read. It is a very good book!
The plot design is very interesting, the characters are perfectly created, and the author is great! Five-star praise [send heartfelt praise][send heartfelt praise]
The writing is interesting and the storyline is engaging.
The author's writing is smooth and very good!
The young author uses rich imagination and innovative ideas. It introduces us to the shape and function of future motorcycles, hinting at the importance of technological innovation. It is hoped that with the efforts of the young author, future motorcycles can be applied to real life as soon as possible. [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] Huang Pizi and others carefully and delicately describe the characters' language, expressions, movements, etc. This is a major feature of this article. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart], love love love [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]
The concept is too novel. I admire the author's unique imagination and fluent writing style. He portrays the characters well, but I just don't dare to read it at night. Why? You need to read this yourself.
The writing is great and the plot is so compact that I couldn't stop reading. The name of the protagonist Yu Mu Lengqiu is very interesting. What else will happen between him and Huang Pizi? I'm looking forward to it.
The author's writing style is delicate and the structure is novel. Character life. The architecture is complete.
In particular, the subject matter is very unique, and unusual events often occur!
A very unique article. Loved it. Five-star praise! ! !
The language is down-to-earth and a little bit crazy... A little character is created so vividly. It can be seen that the author is an interesting person and a person with an open mind. Like! Looking forward to the later stage.
The story is interesting, the characters are unique and typical, the plot is lively and interesting, soulful, interesting, and super good-looking. This situation is so sentimental.
The writing is good and the characters are vivid. Wonderful, the plot has ups and downs.
The author's writing is really good. It can be seen that he has deep literary accomplishment and writing skills. The characters are delicate and full, lifelike and vivid. The plot is compact, the structure is reasonable, the conception is ingenious and wonderful. It is a rare time-travel fantasy masterpiece. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write the following story better. The five-star review is highly recommended [like] [like] [like] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]
The character of Yu Mu Lengqiu is so well created. We can feel the existence of this person. The writing style is mature, the description is delicate, and the flesh and blood is a good book worth recommending. It is so exciting, especially the decisive battle with the Japanese ghost. It is so exciting. Huang Baye, a yellow-skinned man, is cute and righteous, and plays a spoof of bad guys. He is an absolute master. He really brought Huangpizi's writing to life. I read it so well that I didn't fall asleep. I continued to read it even though I had insomnia. The writing is fluent and well-written. Great work from the author. It's not enough. The character Snot is so funny and interesting. This book is humorous and witty. I highly recommend it! !
I like Huang Baye very much. Humans are just a kind of animal. Animals educate people and there is no distinction between high and low. Huang Baye is much better than people in the real world, he repays kindness with kindness, and he is humorous. He is a rare character.
The writing is very good, and I wanted to laugh more when I read "Flower Girl"; come on, author! ! (The words are lacking, maybe the writing is not good)
Grandma suddenly showed a huge fairy body, her beard was like a sharp sword, and Yu Mu Lengqiu stood in front of her like a dwarf.
Yin soldiers, catch the ghost fairy!
Grandma is so majestic, the characters are well drawn, and the imagery is strong. I recommend it.
The content of the novel is vivid, interesting and highly contagious! Especially the yellow one, it's so "cute"! I really like this novel, but it's a pity that I'm a junior high school student and can only read a little bit at home after being at school for five days and two days!
Wonderful work! The plot is well organized and the characters are vivid, not bad! Support the author! Like!
I caught up to Chapter 103 in one go and I really couldn't put it down. The author's writing style is good, the story has a moderate pace, it is very attractive, and the character descriptions are also vivid. This is a good book, give it five stars! [Like][Like][Like]
I read Chapter 127 in one breath, and the reading experience is very good. This book is worth reading, appreciating, and recommending! Give it another five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
The content is exciting and the author's writing is fluent. It is a good book! Added a bookshelf, five stars!
The characters in the play have distinct personalities and can easily empathize with poor people, such as the little blind boy. Good people are rewarded and bad people suffer. I like this logic. Follow Huang Baye to another world to play and see what's new
Ahhhh! It pokes me so much! It's so appetizing! I like it so much, the author is awesome
This book is well written and very beautiful, worth reading!
Very well written
I can finally post it, Momoji. Love you so much, your writing is so smooth, and I love the snot. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
The writing is very good, the mind is wide open, the imagination is rich, the emotional plot is very delicate, the plots are interlocking, the story is vivid and interesting, and the story is very immersive. I look forward to more exciting updates!
The story is smooth, well organized, and the plot is novel and special. The beginning is written with Huang Pizi asking for a seal, which is even more eye-catching. But there are some places where the logic doesn't make sense. When did he enter the parallel world? It's hard for me to read word for word. [Cover face] The pace is too fast, and the description of details is not quite right in some places, which is normal for a novice writer. The character settings are still a bit funny, after all, they often do things that are so embarrassing that they leave three rooms and one living room behind. Especially Huang Pizi, I really like him, I like his character. That's it for now. There are many difficulties on the way to writing a book, and single-player is inevitable. I hope you can stick to it and never forget your original intention. Come on! [Laugh]
A novel story with ups and downs, fascinating and worth reading. Come on!
I really like this type of novel. Some supernatural novels were originally very good, but they were too scary and I didn't dare to read them. But this one is different. This girl looks really excited and nervous. She is also looking forward to what surprises there will be in the next chapter. The author is really great!
The content is rich, the imagination is wide open, and the scenarios are compact. It is worth watching. Five-star praise.
The writing is constantly exciting and the plot has ups and downs. The characters are full of flesh and blood. The young man's bones are strange. Come and watch. The great immortal Huangpizi is waiting for you. Ba Ye will give a gift of immortal energy to the judge!
The author has profound literary knowledge and a broad imagination. He uses folk stories and combines elements of Internet literature with ingenious conception. The characters have distinct personalities and the plot has twists and turns. Fascinating. It is a masterpiece [love] The characters are vivid and the author's writing is superb😄
In the author's description, the road leading to the village is sweltering with heat, and Grandpa is unbearably thirsty. A pile of human excrement was looming near the entrance of the village, and flies were flying everywhere. Yu Mu Lengqiu held back his breath and sped up. At this time, a glib voice from the village elder came from the entrance of the village: "Take away your hair, close up the hornet's nest, close up the old turtle cover..." For a moment, I passed by. There was a goosebump-inducing braking sound, and Yu Mu Lengqiu got out of the car inexplicably, shouting loudly: "Stop it, you idiot!" Grandpa was confused, squinting his eyes and turning to look at the stopped old man. Unique description and beautiful characterization! [Like][Like][Like]
The novel concept and delicate description are very interesting to listen to and read. It is a very good book!
The plot design is very interesting, the characters are perfectly created, and the author is great! Five-star praise [send heartfelt praise][send heartfelt praise]
The writing is interesting and the storyline is engaging. The author's writing is smooth and very good!
The young author uses rich imagination and innovative ideas. It introduces us to the shape and function of future motorcycles, hinting at the importance of technological innovation. It is hoped that with the efforts of the young author, future motorcycles can be applied to real life as soon as possible. [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] Huang Pizi and others carefully and delicately describe the characters' language, expressions, movements, etc. This is a major feature of this article. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart], love love love [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]
The concept is too novel. I admire the author's unique imagination and fluent writing style. He portrays the characters well, but I just don't dare to read it at night. Why? You need to read this yourself.
The writing is great and the plot is so compact that I couldn't stop reading. The name of the protagonist Yu Mu Lengqiu is very interesting. What else will happen between him and Huang Pizi? I'm looking forward to it.
The author's writing style is delicate and the structure is novel. Character life. The architecture is complete. In particular, the subject matter is very unique, and unusual events often occur! A very unique article. Loved it. Five-star praise! ! !
The language is down-to-earth and a little bit crazy... A little character is created so vividly. It can be seen that the author is an interesting person and a person with an open mind. Like! Looking forward to the later stage.
The story is interesting, the characters are unique and typical, the plot is lively and interesting, soulful, interesting, and super good-looking. This situation is so sentimental. The writing is good and the characters are vivid. Wonderful, the plot has ups and downs.
The author's writing is really good. It can be seen that he has deep literary accomplishment and writing skills. The characters are delicate and full, lifelike and vivid. The plot is compact, the structure is reasonable, the conception is ingenious and wonderful. It is a rare time-travel fantasy masterpiece. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write the following story better. The five-star review is highly recommended [like] [like] [like] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]
The character of Yu Mu Lengqiu is so well created. We can feel the existence of this person. The writing style is mature, the description is delicate, and the flesh and blood is a good book worth recommending. It is so exciting, especially the decisive battle with the Japanese ghost. It is so exciting. Huang Baye, a yellow-skinned man, is cute and righteous, and plays a spoof of bad guys. He is an absolute master. He really brought Huangpizi's writing to life. I read it so well that I didn't fall asleep. I continued to read it even though I had insomnia. The writing is fluent and well-written. Great work from the author. It's not enough. The character Snot is so funny and interesting. This book is humorous and witty. I highly recommend it! !
I like Huang Baye very much. Humans are just a kind of animal. Animals educate people and there is no distinction between high and low. Huang Baye is much better than people in the real world, he repays kindness with kindness, and he is humorous. He is a rare character.
The writing is very good, and I wanted to laugh more when I read "Flower Girl"; come on, author! ! (The words are lacking, maybe the writing is not good)
Grandma suddenly showed a huge fairy body, her beard was like a sharp sword, and Yu Mu Lengqiu stood in front of her like a dwarf. Yin soldiers, catch the ghost fairy! Grandma is so majestic, the characters are well drawn, and the imagery is strong. I recommend it.
The content of the novel is vivid, interesting and highly contagious! Especially the yellow one, it's so "cute"! I really like this novel, but it's a pity that I'm a junior high school student and can only read a little bit at home after being at school for five days and two days!
Wonderful work! The plot is well organized and the characters are vivid, not bad! Support the author! Like!
I caught up to Chapter 103 in one go and I really couldn't put it down. The author's writing style is good, the story has a moderate pace, it is very attractive, and the character descriptions are also vivid. This is a good book, give it five stars! [Like][Like][Like] I read Chapter 127 in one breath, and the reading experience is very good. This book is worth reading, appreciating, and recommending! Give it another five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
The content is exciting and the author's writing is fluent. It is a good book! Added a bookshelf, five stars!
The characters in the play have distinct personalities and can easily empathize with poor people, such as the little blind boy. Good people are rewarded and bad people suffer. I like this logic. Follow Huang Baye to another world to play and see what's new
Ahhhh! It pokes me so much! It's so appetizing! I like it so much, the author is awesome
This book is well written and very beautiful, worth reading! Very well written
I can finally post it, Momoji. Love you so much, your writing is so smooth, and I love the snot. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
The writing is very good, the mind is wide open, the imagination is rich, the emotional plot is very delicate, the plots are interlocking, the story is vivid and interesting, and the story is very immersive. I look forward to more exciting updates!