At the Beginning of Border Lords, I Can See Through the Loyalty Value

After reading the beginning, I feel that the author is quite ambitious and wants to write a huge epic western fantasy world. However, I feel that the author wanted to show the grandeur and reality of this different world too much in the early stage, which resulted in the narrative speed in the early stage being very slow. The most important thing is that the pressure of the early events is not enough. But Wen Ping's ability to design plots is way beyond me. I have read some, and I feel that it is a pity that such a good novel did not become popular. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future.

The sparrow outside the window is talking too much on the telephone pole

In the aristocratic world, it is normal for the king to become the king and lose the bandits. It is natural for him to die if he fails in the struggle. The strong will win and the loser will fall. But the protagonist survives. If the situation turns around later, the stepmother and the whole family will die. If you enjoy the convenience brought by power, you must accept the failure brought by power.

Is Hook an enemy or a friend? His loyalty to the male protagonist has never increased, and his position is unclear. Also, why did Rosen calmly lower his loyalty to Carl? Does it have anything to do with him?

The author's writing is very delicate, the environment and characters are described in detail, and the character's behavior is consistent with the character's identity and personality.

European flavor and sophisticated writing style. This point was suppressed.

The writing is good, but is Elizabeth the heroine?

There are some minor flaws, but fortunately the flaws are not hidden.

Karl's father might have loved Ruth very much before, otherwise he wouldn't have even named the alliance's high wall after her, but even high walls can't withstand years of wind and rain, let alone people's hearts.

Come on, author, I am very optimistic about this book.

This is a good book that caught my eye. The author's writing is excellent, the reading experience is good, and it is comfortable to read.

I am an old bookworm. I have read many books and come across many subjects. This book gave me a completely new feeling.

The writing style is good, the content is rich, and the article is relatively long-term. I hope you can read it without being impatient.

Rosen is a slave bought by Carl. Why is he so loyal? And if Carl dies, he will be free, but when danger comes, his first reaction is to protect the male protagonist behind him.

Five-star praise, wonderful🍺

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I like this book very much, but I am very dissatisfied with your update speed [staring]

The writing is pretty good, but is there anyone like me who always feels like something is missing?

There are very few Western fantasy books nowadays, so everyone should cherish them.

Karl's mother is an elf, right? How did his mother die? There is not much description of this mother in the article, but I think she is also a very kind and warm person.

This is a refreshing article with bold plot design, majestic environment and all kinds of elements.

Yes, the author has written the details very well.

This is the first time I have written this type of article, it is well written in big letters [adoration][adoration]

The author continues to write more! ! [Salute][Salute] I love watching [Shy]

The world view is grand, the scene structure is very graphic, and the logic is strong.

That's good, come on

I finally found a book that is more comfortable to read. Many books feel like I swallowed shit when I read them.

The beginning of this story gave me a sense of the drama between the kind and weak Snow White and the evil stepmother.

I haven't finished reading the first part. It's pretty good. Keep at it later.

There are really few books like this, so I'll give it five stars to show my encouragement.