Basic Attacks Permanently Increase Life. How Do You Respond?

It's good to watch, and the plot is not cliched. It's rare to find a clever and refreshing article, and the data is also calculated. However, the progress is a bit too slow. If the plot drags on and the serialization is slow, it will easily make people want to abandon the article.

In fact, there are some shortcomings in the quick update. When some places do not make sense logically, the author goes to the commentary to explain it. This is unacceptable to the audience who are purely watching with brains. It is best to directly change the original text and explain it to the readers. This way there will be no inconsistency in the setting and it will also attract readers. I hope it can be updated soon. I finally found a quite interesting scheming online game novel.

Originally, when I read the title, I just read it as a mindless novel. Golden Finger is just about the steel of the heart and the giant hydra, but it actually gave me a surprise. The novel still focuses on refreshing stories, but as it goes on, the protagonist is asked to complete tasks and grow stronger, setting a longer time and difficulty. When reading, you not only experience the thrill of the protagonist becoming stronger, but also the tension brought by the ups and downs of the plot. The logic of the plot is more self-consistent. All in all, it is a relatively high-quality web article, very suitable for killing time.

So pretty! I hope my sister won't collapse in the later stages. I think the plot line is quite good and the structure is tight [like it]. Currently I don't dislike the God of this book. The main reason is that I am impatient when I see God and often give up easily. This book is quite good. For online game articles, I listen to books at 2.5 Times speed. I think the data should be written a little, otherwise sometimes I can't keep up. If you don't want to read the data when reading the book, you can just skip it. This is not considered watery. Finally, I hope I don't have a harem, otherwise it will be really painful. It's really hard to find a book that I'm willing to read. It's really a book shortage. It took me two days to catch up on the latest [Sending Hearts], give the author a big boost💪

Suggestions: 1. When reading, please get back the brain you lost when reading other novels. This book needs to be read with brains, it is not a mindless article. The data is relatively reasonable and there has been no collapse so far, so you can eat it with peace of mind. 2. Don't skip reading, read every sentence clearly, because there are many settings in online games, especially in this book, and the author completes the old settings from time to time, so there is no need to worry about possible setting problems. ｜In this day and age, this book is very good among online game articles. I recommend it. ｜I also hope that the author can provide irregular updates, which will bring great surprises to readers! Let us have the motivation to keep chasing updates. Come on, author! I like your novel very much. This "suggestion" was originally intended to give the author some feedback... But it is still a bit too old for the appropriate age [face covering]

There are a few smart and clever articles, the pig's feet are awesome but they are balanced and have no data crashes. What's better than other books is that they don't mess around. Men and women are equal, and they kill decisively. There is no illicit plot about men killing beautiful women and letting them go, written by some cowardly authors.

Damn, the writing is awesome. It's a pity to write about online games. If it's about cultivating immortals, it would be better. I've seen a lot of writers. It's rare to see someone who stays up late to watch and play like this. Please update soon.

The writing is very good so far, with rigorous conception, reasonable logic and clear structure. Personally, I think logic is very important. There are a lot of mindless articles with confusing logic. If you finish a lifetime of work in a few days, you can't stand it at all. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not suffer from the bad habit of "starting to fail in the middle and late stages". You must persevere and don't ruin a good article. Although the game attributes and skill data are a bit exaggerated, the flaws are not hidden. It makes sense to regard it as a perverted version of the game. The protagonist is unlucky and has a full set of top-notch equipment. The current perverted version of the game data is also very exaggerated. At present, it is very good to be able to write such articles on the Internet. Personally, I feel that the current setting of the article does not take the level setting seriously enough. This is inconsistent with most people's ideas. It is too trivial to drop levels in it. You can upgrade casually and no one pays attention to the level. This conflicts with the level list at the beginning of the article. The level is so useless. Why is there a registration list? Perhaps the reason for abandoning the level setting is to make killing more enjoyable. In fact, it may be more reasonable to set it so that experience will be lost upon death. If you die too much, the level will be suppressed by others. If there is an important person, the author needs to let him catch up, which can be filled through skills and equipment.

The book on NPC IQ Online is really good. I read an online game novel called Rebirth of the Reborn Warrior many years ago. The NPCs had flesh and blood and ideas, and it made me cry several times. Come on, author, come on!

This book is definitely going to be popular. Fortunately, I discovered it. Comrades, please show this book to other book friends and make it popular. To put it bluntly, Heizi speaks

Haha, the five-star review mechanism was triggered so quickly. The storyline is very good. Keep working hard. Remember to be careful and careful later. I am optimistic about you [making a face]

It's great. It's a masterpiece. I hope it doesn't get too cold.

To be honest, after reading a lot of books, I rarely read this kind of refreshing article. I took a few bites today and it feels good. Come on, keep it up and don't collapse.

There is really no need to get too hung up on the details, just read the text and see the pictures. This book is already very good, and the intrigues in the incident make the content rich. If the author can see it, I hope you can make some improvements in the following places: 1. You can make the protagonist troublesome, but you can't put the protagonist in any danger. The protagonist's strength must be strong, and the protagonist's strength cannot be improved by adding magical costumes without thinking. The newly obtained divine costumes should have anchors corresponding to the development of the story. The divine costumes should assist the protagonist's talents in various forms to improve the protagonist's strength. Don't forget the title of this book. Don't have natal artifacts that override the talents and skills. At present, the book of life and death is better. The Divine Whip does not contribute to talent, but readers of the Divine Whip can accept that it implements the "Shuangwen" Shuangzi, but there cannot be too many artifacts like this. 2. The story is very good, just the intrigue between NPCs and various characters. You wrote it very well and your thinking is relatively thorough. But! This may also cause criticism. Events cannot be too complicated, at least the overall situation cannot be complicated, and there cannot be too many things that readers cannot expect. In other words, there cannot be too many things that keep readers in the dark. And, a very important point: the protagonist must be able to think of things that are easy for readers to think of, otherwise readers will be anxious, and a cool article must not make readers anxious! For example: (Only a personal opinion) I feel a little uncomfortable reading this, because Zhumeng Yanxue's serial tasks are hidden a bit deep, and the reader (me) is a little unhappy because it threatens the protagonist, because unknown things are the scariest. A rich man's thinking is that even though he is rich, he cannot see the gap between the poor and him narrowing, so he will be unhappy, not to mention that the protagonist still has a little grudge against Zhumeng Yanxue. In fact, it's already very good. The author is great. I hope there will be more. As a fan, I will support you! ! !

The protagonist's talent is invincible. In the game, Invincible pushes and develops all the way. After waiting for the little Invincible, he brings his abilities into reality, and then the earth becomes Invincible. Then he arranges for aliens to attack the earth, and then he tortures the aliens. I think we can also postpone the appearance of mythical characters until later, turn Blue Star into a super giant planet with unlimited resources, and rebuild heaven and earth. Come up with a few million words and it will make me happy

It's above average, it's a relatively standard novel, and the rhythm control is okay. However, the cycle of routines is fun, but the characters are too stereotyped, including the protagonist, who has no personality charm. To use a popular saying recently, characters do not have their own lives. The world is irrational, and there is a kind of programmer joke about how it works. It's a common problem to cycle through cool pictures, hiding secrets behind secrets, hiding secrets behind secrets, this is totally unreasonable. For the brainless essay track, I can give a high score of 4.7 Or even 4.8. Overall, my personal score is only about 4.1 (Passing 3.7, On a five-point scale)

Better plot design than most books. The villain has his own logical thinking. Can see. Overall it was good, but I was not satisfied with the way the protagonist handled some things.

I think it's very good. Why are there so many bad reviews in the comment area [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I think it's okay if the article is cool. Why do you have to hold on to some bugs that you think you have? To be honest, I also think that sometimes the protagonist is a little sinister, haha, but it's harmless. Who dares to say that he is selfless and has no selfishness at all? And it's normal to want to become stronger, and he didn't make any mistakes in big matters. So don't keep giving bad reviews to the author. I think the rating is a bit low. I think this novel is pretty good, at least a 9.5.

The real questions in this book are pretty good. Although I haven't read many books, this book can still be ranked in the top 5. How should I put it? There are quite a few pitfalls in this book, but the author is amazing in that he has filled in almost all the pitfalls and buried a lot of foreshadowings. Moreover, the story about the infighting in the palace is so wonderful. I really didn't expect that I could read it in a block of online games. My cerebellum shrank, and I felt like I was watching Ten Days End [Petrified]

Not bad, the IQ drama is well written. Although there is no emotional drama, this also reduces the difficulty of writing. But there are still some details that are not so good. For example, the little girl in front also disappeared with his family. Then, for example, there are some skills that can continuously lose blood in a range. The stacked health points may soon reach hundreds of millions. And the most important thing is that there are so many skills and equipment like this that I forget them all in a few days. I have to update them quickly to read them, otherwise I will forget them and not be able to read them (｡•́•̀｡) I read Chapter 213 in one go. Overall it's pretty good.

Although some of the settings feel unreasonable and the protagonist is somewhat severely suppressed, overall it is relatively rigorous and there are almost no conflicts. If there are any doubts, there are reasonable explanations. This aspect can be ranked at the forefront of the entire online game series, and the storyline is also very good. It is considered a good book. I gave it 4 stars mainly because the monster's IQ is set too high. It's just NPCs or humanoid creatures. A low-level beast can still play tactics and know how to play dirty. This is too cruel. After all, the background is a game, so ordinary players really can't play it like this

The beginning is a bit like Thief Shadow Dance Nie Yan's book, it's well written, pay attention to the rhythm and scope of the story.

What a great book! I simply couldn't stop, I was fascinated by every page. The author's writing style is truly unique and makes you feel like you are right inside the story. The storyline is tight and interesting, full of surprises and suspense, keeping me guessing what will happen next. Moreover, the characters in the book are very vivid, and each character has its own unique personality and story, which made me have deep emotions for them. This book is not only an entertainment work, it also contains many profound thoughts and revelations. The author explores some important life values ​​and moral issues through the plot and characters in the story, which made me think more deeply about my life. At the same time, the book also incorporates some elements of humor and wisdom, which made me smile while reading.

It's good-looking, the main character's IQ is online, and most of the articles are logically fluent and not mindless. The protagonist's growth is not smooth sailing, it is very realistic. It's just that the author gave too many skills, which resulted in many bugs in the article (there were even so many skills that the author forgot about them, and basically didn't describe and use them later). In addition, the author was too obsessed with reversing for the sake of reversing, and some places were illogical. I hope these two points can be improved in the future. Hydrology is very serious. I read a few good articles while waiting for the update, and I realized that my vision is so narrow. The good foreshadowing and pitfalls were not described and forcibly distorted in this way, and the stars were changed specifically to avoid wasting time for future generations. Abandoned... I'm used to eating fine chaff and it's hard to taste the dross anymore

The plot is good and the NPCs are full of emotions.

An online game with a plot is not even remotely better than playing and fighting all the time.

Hurry up and update, it's so in line with my taste [adoration][adoration]

The book is good, and you can feel it. There are no clichéd slap-in-the-face plots, and the realistic descriptions are sparing. Instead, it focuses on the game, and the world it describes is also very grand. The NPCs are also written well. There is no detailed description of the transitional NPCs. Most of them just talk about the main experiences in a few sentences, and they are not subjective descriptions, just like the descriptions of bystanders.

This is the correct way to open Shuangwen

It's very good. It's the character of the protagonist who is very good in the online game novels I read. He is not a virgin and is not very brainless. There are no shortcomings in other aspects. Overall, it is very good, but [please update].