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5.8Score
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All I can say is that the pace is too fast, and the descriptions are not clear enough in some places. I hope the author can improve. After thinking about it, I will give you one more star. It can be seen that you are a novice, but you still need to practice. By the way, the other thing is that the portrayal of the characters is not vivid enough. That's it. I hope the author will work hard.
The first volume was indeed a bit disappointing, haha. But I made a lot of progress later on and it seemed quite relaxing, so that's fine. I wish the author better and better grades and find a good job after graduation! Multiple female protagonists yyds! ! !
Not bad, not scratchy. Why don't you recruit more subordinates and increase your strength?
As a novice author, the book is okay, it feels like a running account [laughing], but it's not bad. I hope the author will make an outline and improve the bytes of his next book. I look forward to your new book. Thank you for accompanying me2023.11.2
Nice villain article!
Yes, it's pretty good. It's a brainless and refreshing article. There are probably some details in it at the beginning, but at the end, it's basically just about letting yourself go. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][send heart]
Come on, author, I really like this novel
Well written! Serious villain, why is it that only the protagonist has a harem?
It looks great, keep up the good work!
It feels okay! Look!
It's okay, it deserves a thumbs up
Is there no master in a family as big as the protagonist's? Why does the protagonist need to do it himself? Why is there no son of luck in the world of immortality who appears to fight against the protagonist?
Quack,
It was pretty good, but it ended so suddenly, I thought it would continue.
It's okay, except that the pace is too fast. There's nothing wrong with it.
I think it's pretty good, but it's a pity that the author didn't explain how the system came about? The system seems to have never appeared again after the protagonist ascended.
It feels good. The story could be 1/3 to 1/2 longer and it would be perfect.
Thanks to the author. The content feels good, the pace is relatively good, and it's fun. But it would be nice to add a little more to some details and give a little bit of reverie!
This is my favorite harem, but the writing style needs to be improved.