People Who Like to Be in the Limelight Tend to Lose Their Heads Easily.

Just like others said that punctuation is a problem, then, isn't your plot arrangement a bit twisted? In the slime beast, you said you didn't want to attract attention, but why did the corners of Eleanor's mouth twitch? Didn't the protagonist tell Salad? But if the person's name is written incorrectly, it was you who bought Salad, and you were very kind to her. When Sala heard that you didn't want to attract attention, it's impossible for Salad to have a speechless expression like twitching the corner of her mouth. [What] I went back and read it, and what you wrote was not about the protagonist reminiscing about the past, so what you wrote is quite confusing.

I can't even understand the punctuation marks.