Time Travel and Rebirth Part 2: Marrying the Princess

Overall, there is nothing wrong with it. I say good things first and then bad things. The writing is okay, the writing is smooth and not laggy, and the plot is compact and not pretentious. The bad thing is: some of the logic is really confusing. If the identity of the heroine and the identity of the villain are swapped, the logic will be smooth. Otherwise, it is too outrageous, and it will be on the moon from reality. I am the eldest daughter of General Quan, and I am deeply loved by the generals of the Zhu Kingdom. How can I allow the second child and my younger sister who have not yet become regulars to make trouble? ?

Thank you all for your criticisms and corrections. This is my first time writing a novel, so I hope you can correct me if I have any shortcomings. It must be corrected [send heart]