With the Heavenly Dao Legacy in Hand, I Make Goddesses from the Three Realms My Slaves

5 Points for tomatoes, high-quality grain. The advantage is that the small scenes are well written, and the addition of new female characters to the new map is indeed fascinating. The plot of the story is excellent. It is obvious that the author has an outline and the stories are very closely connected. It is not like he wrote whatever he thought of and randomly inserted irrelevant copy. The main plot and branch plots complement each other, and the small dungeons in the early stage each have their own flavor. After the story of the Yellow Emperor begins, it obviously starts to advance, and the foreshadowing is recycled. The disadvantage may be that there are too many characters due to stamp collecting and not enough personal plots, but these are minor problems. The main thing that can be improved is that the female protagonist's emotions towards the male protagonist are too similar. No matter what attitude you have at the beginning, it is time to converge to your beliefs. After that, there is no room for change, which will lead to you being reduced to a tool and downplaying your personal drama. But this is also a common problem of Xiao Baiwen. Some people like to see this, which is known as the quick acceptance of girls. Personally, I think the process of one or two female protagonists can be made longer, instead of immediately reaching full affection for the protagonist at the end of the first scene. Otherwise, the subsequent scenes where she appears will be nothing more than a character competing for favor and adoration.

If nothing else, this is the best apocalyptic article I have ever read in Tomato. Regardless of his grasp of emotions or the main plot, it is impossible to tell that he is the author of Tomato. It's like other software from Emperor Shu. Five-star strength. I feel that in terms of evilness, this is probably the best evil novel in Tomato. It's on the same level as the Summoner of the Abyss of Doomsday. It's a pity that there are not many people there, and it has a shortcoming. Really, sometimes the chapters one by one don't match the overall look that well. I hope I can save two and send them out together as much as possible.

It's good to watch, take your time and give it a thumbs up, I like the rhythm [Sending my heart] I have been following it, how can I put it, the plot is very interesting, at least it suits my taste, the protagonist is like a normal person of flesh and blood, confused and hesitant, has desires and goals, it seems very comfortable, and it is worth reading. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. First, Taoist priests are not very compatible with the apocalypse. To survive in the apocalypse, one must kill decisively and almost become abnormal. The author has always used Taoism to suppress the violence of the protagonist, which is depressing. Second, there are too many female protagonists. Although they all have their own characteristics and have a lot of supporting characters, I can't even remember their names. It's best to add some drama to each important female protagonist. This is purely a personal suggestion. Just refer to the author. I don't want to disrupt your thinking. Finally, I hope the story will get better and better, and I will keep reading [Sending my heart]

The story is very compact, and there are many beauties with their own characteristics. However, the plot is too fast and the beauties are a bit unclear. You can slow down to highlight the characteristics of each beauties.

This is what a purely enjoyable article should be like, but I'm wondering why the rating is so low. Logically speaking, it should be at least 8.5+.

It's pretty good-looking, but the front feels a bit strange, and the heroine in the back feels like a tool, and her image isn't very plump. But the protagonist is pretty good, with flesh and blood. Personally I think the rating shouldn't be so low

This is the best apocalyptic harem I have ever seen. The plot design of "apocalyptic zombies and strange beasts + traditional Chinese mythology (modified version)" combines the two themes of "apocalyptic" and "fantasy". The author has a very profound understanding and interpretation of human nature, and he is definitely an experienced writer with rich life experience! The relationship between men and women is also described very delicately. In harem novels, the male protagonist must treat the female protagonist well, and the female protagonist must not be a supercilious person who goes both ways. This is the essence of harem novels! This article also suffers from a common problem of harem novels - there are too many female protagonists. Of course, the author also highlighted a few female protagonists, but because there were too many of them, some of the female protagonists never appeared again [face covering]. Overall, this article should be a masterpiece of apocalyptic writing, highly recommended! I stopped watching videos, doing tasks, and even stopped playing games while I was reading! Five-star praise is given, and I hope the author will continue to work hard and continue to produce high-quality products!

This book is really good and well done. It really feels like "having experienced the apocalypse". This is definitely not an exaggerated rhetoric. It may be a little unsatisfactory in the early stage, but the cuckold complex has been changed. You really need to look back. Looking back, you can find the decisiveness of killing Fating in this book.

The protagonist was born as a Taoist priest in the beginning. The master died in order to save his apprentice from the backlash of heaven, and his identity took off immediately. And in the middle and late stages. The protagonist is directly introduced, the writing is exquisite, and the detailed description is a masterpiece. Each character is the most realistic reaction of reality in the end of the world. Maybe it's because of my preference for dark apocalyptic stories. It's a bit of a satire on today's social reality. If you like dark apocalyptic novels, this one is definitely one of the best ones I've ever read.

A very satisfying post-apocalyptic novel. It was very small in the early stage. After killing Shengyun and the Ghost Emperor, the pace became relatively relaxed. I kept collecting pets almost all the time. The writing style is good and the text is quite concise. Later I wanted to like it when there were more than 1,000 pictures. I have accumulated them until now. It can be said that the author has written a chapter a day. The author's comments on the first few pictures I have read also show the author's success in studying. I am really happy for the author. And now the author has almost no income from writing the book. It is all for love. Finally, I hope the author will give you a lot of support. Come on, we will always support you!