Apocalyptic Training, the Beautiful Goddess Becomes a Slave

5 Points for tomatoes, high-quality grain. The advantage is that the small scenes are well written, and the addition of new female characters to the new map is indeed fascinating. The plot of the story is excellent. It is obvious that the author has an outline and the stories are very closely connected. It is not like he wrote whatever he thought of and randomly inserted irrelevant copy. The main plot and branch plots complement each other, and the small dungeons in the early stage each have their own flavor. After the story of the Yellow Emperor begins, it obviously starts to advance, and the foreshadowing is recycled. The disadvantage may be that there are too many characters due to stamp collecting and not enough personal plots, but these are minor problems. The main thing that can be improved is that the female protagonist's emotions towards the male protagonist are too similar. No matter what attitude you have at the beginning, it is time to converge to your beliefs. After that, there is no room for change, which will lead to you being reduced to a tool and downplaying your personal drama. But this is also a common problem of Xiao Baiwen. Some people like to see this, which is known as the quick acceptance of girls. Personally, I think the process of one or two female protagonists can be made longer, instead of immediately reaching full affection for the protagonist at the end of the first scene. Otherwise, the subsequent scenes where she appears will be nothing more than a character competing for favor and adoration.

If nothing else, this is the best apocalyptic article I have ever read in Tomato. Regardless of his grasp of emotions or the main plot, it is impossible to tell that he is the author of Tomato. It's like other software from Emperor Shu. Five-star strength. I feel that in terms of evilness, this is probably the best evil novel in Tomato. It's on the same level as the Summoner of the Abyss of Doomsday. It's a pity that there are not many people there, and it has a shortcoming. Really, sometimes the chapters one by one don't match the overall look that well. I hope I can save two and send them out together as much as possible.

It's good to watch, take your time and give it a thumbs up, I like the rhythm [Sending my heart] I have been following it, how can I put it, the plot is very interesting, at least it suits my taste, the protagonist is like a normal person of flesh and blood, confused and hesitant, has desires and goals, it seems very comfortable, and it is worth reading. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. First, Taoist priests are not very compatible with the apocalypse. To survive in the apocalypse, one must kill decisively and almost become abnormal. The author has always used Taoism to suppress the violence of the protagonist, which is depressing. Second, there are too many female protagonists. Although they all have their own characteristics and have a lot of supporting characters, I can't even remember their names. It's best to add some drama to each important female protagonist. This is purely a personal suggestion. Just refer to the author. I don't want to disrupt your thinking. Finally, I hope the story will get better and better, and I will keep reading [Sending my heart]

The story is very compact, and there are many beauties with their own characteristics. However, the plot is too fast and the beauties are a bit unclear. You can slow down to highlight the characteristics of each beauties.

This is what a purely enjoyable article should be like, but I'm wondering why the rating is so low. Logically speaking, it should be at least 8.5+.

It's pretty good-looking, but the front feels a bit strange, and the heroine in the back feels like a tool, and her image isn't very plump. But the protagonist is pretty good, with flesh and blood. Personally I think the rating shouldn't be so low

This is the best apocalyptic harem I have ever seen. The plot design of "apocalyptic zombies and strange beasts + traditional Chinese mythology (modified version)" combines the two themes of "apocalyptic" and "fantasy". The author has a very profound understanding and interpretation of human nature, and he is definitely an experienced writer with rich life experience! The relationship between men and women is also described very delicately. In harem novels, the male protagonist must treat the female protagonist well, and the female protagonist must not be a supercilious person who goes both ways. This is the essence of harem novels! This article also suffers from a common problem of harem novels - there are too many female protagonists. Of course, the author also highlighted a few female protagonists, but because there were too many of them, some of the female protagonists never appeared again [face covering]. Overall, this article should be a masterpiece of apocalyptic writing, highly recommended! I stopped watching videos, doing tasks, and even stopped playing games while I was reading! Five-star praise is given, and I hope the author will continue to work hard and continue to produce high-quality products!

The protagonist was born as a Taoist priest in the beginning. The master died in order to save his apprentice from the backlash of heaven, and his identity took off immediately. And in the middle and late stages. The protagonist is directly introduced, the writing is exquisite, and the detailed description is a masterpiece. Each character is the most realistic reaction of reality in the end of the world. Maybe it's because of my preference for dark apocalyptic stories. It's a bit of a satire on today's social reality. If you like dark apocalyptic novels, this one is definitely one of the best ones I've ever read.

This book is really good and well done. It really feels like "having experienced the apocalypse". This is definitely not an exaggerated rhetoric. It may be a little unsatisfactory in the early stage, but the cuckold complex has been changed. You really need to look back. Looking back, you can find the decisiveness of killing Fating in this book.

A very satisfying post-apocalyptic novel. It was very small in the early stage. After killing Shengyun and the Ghost Emperor, the pace became relatively relaxed. I kept collecting pets almost all the time. The writing style is good and the text is quite concise. Later I wanted to like it when there were more than 1,000 pictures. I have accumulated them until now. It can be said that the author has written a chapter a day. The author's comments on the first few pictures I have read also show the author's success in studying. I am really happy for the author. And now the author has almost no income from writing the book. It is all for love. Finally, I hope the author will give you a lot of support. Come on, we will always support you!

It's quite good, but the first ten chapters are a bit mixed up. I think the plot has been greatly changed, but the rest is really good. You are the only one that I can follow slowly and patiently. I don't keep it, but I follow it every day. I am looking forward to the next chapter but not too disappointed [Thinking][Thinking],

It's very good, but the beginning is not very attractive, and the scene changes are not coherent enough. The rest of the book is very good, especially the downplaying of superpowers and fighting scenes, which makes it look different and not cumbersome. The subsequent environment, characters, and events are all very well portrayed. Tomato ranks this book high

I've been watching it for a long time, and I keep updating every day [face covering] Author, please come on [please give me more updates] I don't understand why the rating is so low, and I really couldn't stand the Qian Yue episode. It is said that in the last days, the Virgin must be killed first, but the one who saves you when you are in despair is the Virgin. I don't know how to feel [Code]

I think the protagonist's mental journey is described quite well. At least I don't think there's anything particularly toxic or perverted. I quite like it (it's a bit watery, and it feels a bit cliche. It's a good car, but it's been edited a lot. It's an uncut version, and there seems to be no pictures at the back)

The overall reading experience is very good. It can express the truth of some events in real life in an acceptable way. It uses the apocalypse to write about the social phenomena caused by the gap between rich and poor in reality. It can express the ugly side of people's hearts and promote the cultural heritage of our motherland at all times. However, I sincerely hope to support Taoism more, not because the protagonist is Taoist, but Every time in history, Taoists from hundreds of schools of thought entered the world when the country was in turmoil and danger. Just as the old Taoist priest said, "Troubled times are coming, Taoists must not hide from the world." In addition, there are also inheritances from hundreds of schools of thought. They are precious treasures of our Chinese nation and should not be buried. Moreover, the author repeatedly uses stories in the book to tell readers that there is no harm in reading more books at any time, because knowledge is power.

This book is definitely delayed by the name [facepalm]. It's a bit weird to mix superpower inheritance into upgrades, but the plot is better than most books in Tomato. It can be seen that the author has done a lot of homework on the details of the system. It is very interesting, but there are too many girls along the way. Many female characters in the front are well portrayed and have no role in the later part [facepalm]

I have been reading it for a long time. Although the first few chapters seem a bit discouraging, I can clearly see the progress in the author's writing style. Whether it is the plot or the characterization, I can see that there are many imprints of painstaking efforts carved on it. Finally, congratulations to the author for being admitted to China Overseas Chinese University! I wish the author a bright future and keep writing.

This book creates a different apocalypse. The author's writing is very good. The content is novel and rich. The plot is reasonable. The characterization is perfect. Some seemingly mindless behaviors actually have other reasons. Even a Holy Mother actually has another purpose. The protagonist has a brain. Be strong and never put yourself in danger.

I have read a lot of apocalyptic novels, but the setting of the male protagonist and the inheritance of heaven in this book really gave me a shocking feeling. It is different from other apocalyptic novels. Other apocalyptic novels are all about this superpower and that superpower. This Taoist law is really well written.

The novel won my love with its rich characters and clever plotting. During the reading process, I found that each character has its own unique personality and destiny, which makes the story more fascinating. At the same time, the characters' decisive decisions also show their wisdom and courage. Overall, this novel is a work worth reading. It is a pleasant reading experience for both players who like strategy games and readers who like in-depth plots. I highly recommend this novel.

It's pretty, interesting, and tops the tomato list. Countless good books on apocalypse. Really recommend. Watch how long I last. I think it's really good

At least it is one of my favorites among the apocalyptic novels I have read. The character creation is considered unique. Some people think that the character creation is contradictory, but I personally think that contradiction is human nature. In the apocalyptic environment, everyone is a story, and it is even more unrealistic to give each character a fixed mask. As for the rhythm, it is indeed not stable. I personally feel that I can still accept it. At most, I will wait for a while before reading.

It's a very good book. I admire the author's control over the overall situation. The car drives very well. The wheels of the car flew off my face. After getting through the plot foreshadowing in the first few chapters, it was pure joy.

The layers are clear, the writing is cool but not brainless, each character has distinct characteristics, but there are too many harems, and I don't want to be a boy who understands instantly. I like it [smile][smile][smile]

It's really beautiful! Although the previous plot is a bit confusing, it can still be sorted out after careful analysis. There are a lot of foreshadowings. If you keep reading, you will find that this is a good book. I believe that the author can write better and better. Come on, author!

It is a very novel power system. To me, all the characters have their own characteristics and the character creation is relatively full. However, the rhythm of some parts in the later part is too fast and has no outstanding effect. The inheritance is very powerful but has never been used. It feels a bit like a pure vase, which is not very good.

I have read Chapter 1376 so far, and overall I feel good. I really like books with this writing style. The writing is concise and the ideas are clear. I don't need to brainstorm to think about this why or that why, because the author said there is no why [laughs evilly]. It's just a fun read, just make yourself happy. Also, go to bed early. Let me see how many hours it has been [laughing]

A typical cool article, but not brainless, highlighting the distortion of human nature in the last days.

Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ You might not be able to stand it when you read the front part, but you'll get better once you get to the back. It's a very beautiful book. If you can't stand it at the front, you must insist on reading the back. It's very good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, and there's everything you want to read (ºº ). The update is so slow. Why does it become one chapter a day? Wasn't it two chapters a day before? (6 In the morning and 6 in the evening) It's not enough to watch [crying][crying][crying]

I must have made a mistake in writing a cool introduction in the introduction. It is a slow-burning story, and I only started to feel happy after a hundred chapters. The writing in the front is a bit bad, but the writing in the back, especially some parts, is very good. Even the part about Xiaobei made me feel a little hot in my eyes. Overall, it is very good. I just need to be patient to read it [laughs]