Star Dome************

Come on, author, the writing is great, come on, you can definitely do it ^ω^ It's hard for a new author to start, and it will take a while. Yeah, I hope this one has a perfect ending and is a little longer.

Come on, author. It's normal for new books to be low in popularity.

Not bad for a newcomer, but I still want to talk about a few bad points. Help you avoid pitfalls When meeting Bo Shizun in the Black Tower Space Station chapter of the prologue, the Wisdom Star God said that low dimensions cannot affect high dimensions. As soon as he said this sentence, the author wrote that the power of the tree of imaginary numbers is affecting the mind of the protagonist. It should be noted that the high-dimensional creatures mentioned here refer to the protagonist, not the tree of imaginary numbers. The tree of imaginary numbers is low-dimensional to the protagonist. Of course, if the protagonist is also a two-dimensional person like the Railway Universe, then there is no problem, but the author did not say it. The second point is that from the beginning of the chapter of Yaliluo 6 to Chapter 17, they are all the clones of the protagonist. This is the second poisonous point. The explanation here is that the power of the tree of imaginary numbers of the protagonist was separated at some point. This part is the power of time, which caused the protagonist's clone to appear ten years ago in Yaliluo 6. After Chapter 17, it belongs to the protagonist and is not a clone. To be honest, the author is really brave. One of the biggest poisonous points in writing fan fiction is the avatar, and he is really brave to write about it. Moreover, this avatar is different from the protagonist's main consciousness, which means that they are two people. Don't say that they are separated from the same person. Different experiences will turn the same person into different people. From the moment they separate, they are no longer the same person. They just wear the same name and face. I haven't read it yet, but I'm still reading it now. I will write down any poisonous points here later. Of course, there is a high probability that they are the poisonous points I thought.

It was a bit bad at the beginning, but it got better and better at the end. Please keep going, author.

Can the author please resurrect Kyouryu?

Is there a heroine? Who is the heroine? Single heroine or multiple heroines.

After reading Chapter 24, I couldn't help but have a question pop up in my mind: How can this be called invincibility?

Not bad, very pretty

Five stars must be given

Do you want a motorcycle?

Very good, very nice book, highly recommended

It can be pretty good-looking

Okay, I really like watching it

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work!

Good daily rice writing

I feel uncomfortable if I don't watch it for a day

I want to watch Honkai Impact III with Hurry Up

Gift package for newlyweds Temporarily 4 stars to prevent expansion That's it for now

It's very interesting. Does the author have any ideas about writing a female protagonist?

I'm thinking about whether to wait for Honkai Impact 3 plot to come back

The author is great, Chapter 145 exploded

Come on, come on, come on, come on!

So damn good looking hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Come on, the follow-up will be more and more exciting. I hope to write about Genshin Impact first.

The author writes very well, I like it very much. Come on!

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