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Your novel is Brodsky's unruly aesthetic style, Is Mandelstam's proud pride of freedom, It is Strickland's one-way persistence and romance, It is the truth that Tranström's poetry calls for, No matter how absurd and weird it is, the forest is foggy, It was all under the light of the bright moon, Romantic, dazzling, everlasting love, It's not about quantity but quality. All in all, it's really super pretty\(//∇//)\

Not bad, not bad, finally we are not in love for pure blood reasons. I am a real Slytherin, I love you so much [please update] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

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Holy shit, the hero's character makes me crazy! Cold, noble and elegant, this is my ideal male protagonist's character. Well, the author can't see enough, not enough, not enough at all. I hope the author will update more, and the last and most important sentence: Don't let it end! [Please update]

Gaga is good-looking, Draco is so cute, and he can grow up slowly under the protection of Grus. Let him be Draco first, then Malfoy.

Nice! ! I really like Grus' character! Focus on your career, be gentle and attentive to girls, be proud but not arrogant. He uses the appearance of a humble gentleman to cover up his domineering and powerful inside, and he has no CP or love brain! I really like it! ! It's just a new book, I can't get enough of it! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Refresh*n Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! For! Varied! What! Yes! Book! New! Book! The author, I hope to read again to see the perfect completion of Chapter 123456 of this book😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

The writing is very good. I hope Xiaolong will always be happy until the end. Oh my God, [cry][cry][cry]

It's super good-looking. I like the character of the male protagonist so much. He is cool and rational, noble and elegant, and he also protects his shortcomings [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] I also especially like the interaction between the male protagonist and Draco. It is my favorite book at the moment and the best-looking book I have ever read in which the protagonist travels and becomes the Malfoy family [Blowing Kiss] As long as it doesn't end badly, I would call it a HP masterpiece.

Good-looking, career-oriented, the protagonist has a good character, a qualified Malfoy heir, an excellent Slytherin, the current plot is very good, not inconsistent, no typos, more updates [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's really good-looking. I read this HP fanfic. The original protagonist is the most intelligent and emotionally intelligent, unlike other works of the same type. It doesn't have an unreasonable protagonist halo. Although there are some flaws, this is the first fanfic I can find on Tomato that is both good-looking and reasonable. [Sending my heart]

Subjective: It's really good to read. It ranks among the top HP books I've read. Mainly because I only like books where the protagonists are Slytherin or Ravenclaw. They must be free of CP! I also don't like having too many connections with the protagonist group (I can't say no at all), and I can't read novels that use magic from other worldviews in Hogwarts. I feel that the sense of separation is too strong, so I just brushed out most of the novels. Among the remaining ones, this one really stuck with me. The importance of the Malfoy family really touched my heart. The protagonist dotes on Draco very much, and will not change or train him in particular, nor will he let him stop being a proud peacock. Instead, he will protect him behind him and let him develop as he pleases. At the same time, Draco is also very good to the protagonist. In short, I like it very much! Objective: The emotions of the characters are well described, the text is very delicate, and the plot is very compact. Each character has his own thoughts and feelings, and not all of them serve the protagonist. The protagonist's personality is very likable.

The author's writing is very good, and the characters are basically non-OOC. Each character has a distinct personality, and getting along with the protagonist is also very interesting. I also like the character of the protagonist, he is a standard Slytherin and Malfoy. I hope the author will continue to do so. [Laughing] Happy New Year, everyone [laughing]

Come on, author, please update. I really like the character and identity of the male protagonist in this book. I haven't seen such a beautiful hp fanfic for a long time. It's really good. Update soon.

The male protagonist is really handsome, very calm, ambitious, with a high IQ, an excellent Slytherin. Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Great cheers to the author! ! ! ୧( ⁼̴̶̤̀ω⁼̴̶̤́ )૭

It's so beautiful. The setting is one of the best I've ever seen. In addition, the logical thinking is quite clear. As a Slytherin, I highly appreciate the protagonist's character. It's definitely going to be popular. Why isn't it still popular? It's becoming popular.

Gruss is a well-rounded and profit-oriented man. He is an out-and-out careerist. His writing style is very good. The subject of being reincarnated as the eldest son of the Malfoy family is also very attractive. At present, the protagonist does not seem to have a bad personality. I hope he can continue writing. I like this book very much [Adoration]

I just watched those Harry Potter movies briefly and roughly understood the plot. But the protagonist setting of this book really touched my heart! The image is created with rational ambition and action, and now the character does not collapse but grows as things develop. At the same time, the characters affected by the protagonist are also growing. It's reasonable. The protagonist is not the only one who is strong. There are "partners" who pursue the same ambitions, and there are also untouchable weaknesses - family members. The content is rich, the world view is complete, thoughtful, and the plot is easy to grasp and attract readers. Affected by this book, I am very interested in Harry Potter. I will buy the complete set of Harry Potter books and read them. I am very grateful to the author. It also adds some fun to my life.

I like it hehehe (ºº) It's really good and I want to read this type of article, but I can't find it (＞º)

It's really beautiful. I rarely rate books, but the plot of this one really surprised me. I would like to give you a five-star review and encourage you to update it soon! ! !

A belated book review. -About the current situation. I haven't been chasing this book for a long time, but I think I still invested my feelings in it and got a satisfactory return. The unfinished stories may not be followed, but that doesn't matter, they will shine in places we can't see. -About this book. There's no question that I love Groos. The perspective of this book allows me to see another future of the magical world and the possibilities of another HP worldview. I like Gross's view on friendship. Friendship is an exchange of benefits, but the difference is how much loss there is. I like Grus's conduct as a person, although normally, at his age in HP, he shouldn't be thinking about family interests and the like. I hope that Grus can be a little more free and cheerful like Draco, be able to trust others more, be able to act like a spoiled brat, ask for things from his family, and show more of the character a little wizard should have. But now that Grus has made his choice, as a bystander I will not comment much. I hope that Gruss and his friends can shine brightly in the future that we cannot see.

It's really good-looking! Finally met the real Lestatlin! Ambitious, good at calculations, always polite, he will make use of everything within his field of vision, not letting go of any details and clues, and using all means to strive for the greatest interests for himself and Leistlin! I like the main character's character! Finally, we don't use the stereotypes of the academy to fall in love (it's not that you can't fall in love, it's just that some of the writing is too outrageous)! Big cheers for the author! Love you so much! ! ! ! ! ! ! Why was it taken off the shelves? Is scoring useful? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! My favorite hp fan! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's just gone! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Tomato yousssssssssssssssssssssss! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I really think the writing is super good, and the Malfoy family's family-oriented approach is very, very good. In the male protagonist, everything the male protagonist does is for his family. I think this is very well written, and the male protagonist is really shrewd, ambitious, and smart. Although there are a lot of comments with different opinions, please don't take those comments to heart. Your writing is very good. I really like it. Don't give up. Don't give up on this article. Please, it's really hard for me to find a good one.

The Malfoys are great babies. . . Write more about the interaction between twins. I love to see the interaction between () and it's really cute. Twins are very, very good, and they have a double standard of preference for each other. . Also, Lulu, tsundere has become outdated. Quickly give up your resistance and let me touch you (shock sound)

It's very beautiful. I like Grus and Xiaolong very much. My favorite is the sentence "Why do roses grow into cypresses?" Pansy is also very popular. It truly embodies Malfoy's "family first"

I suddenly found a book two days ago. The plot is very good and the characters are good. The whole text is very smooth and there is nothing I can't understand. The protagonist is an original character and is very consistent with the ambition and desire of being a Slytherin. What is commendable is that I wrote Slytherin for the sake of writing Slytherin. As a member of the Malfoy family, I also maintain the protectiveness and love for family and family. I am very sorry that this book can only end here. I was still reading the last chapter yesterday, and I was looking forward to whether Gruss' story tomorrow would be a step closer to his goal. But I didn't expect that today I found the update point and saw that it was a farewell. The emotions in my heart are very complicated. I originally wanted to watch it together, but I couldn't help but click on the message that I would never see it again. I'm very sorry that I can only accompany you here, Gruss. I hope you can make great achievements in your magical world. Although we can only part ways here, maybe this is also destiny. Let me say a formal farewell to you, Gruss. Goodbye, Gruss.

Leave a comment, I have become a long-time fan of this book after it became popular. The author can write well, the writing style is smooth and non-toxic, and Slytherin is much better than those Gryffindor nannies. The author has his own ideas and novel viewpoints, and he can be ranked high among HP fans, so far. The author updated to Chapter 46

This book is really good, especially the author's understanding of each character is really rare! Every character is very reasonable, the author is also very responsible, and his understanding of HP is one of the best I have ever seen! Moreover, the author carefully researched the information, and the plot is very smooth. In short, it is very comfortable to read! I haven't seen such a good book in a long time, good luck to the author! The protagonist's character is also great! Not only did he inherit Malfoy's family-first mentality, he was really nice to Xiao Long! Zundu looks great! The author should update quickly, preferably ten updates a day! Come on, I'm optimistic about you! Author!

Gruss Slytherin is ambitious and scheming, and can do whatever it takes to pursue his ambitions, but his family is always an exception. The confrontation between Gruss and Old Bee, the establishment of the Hogrotz Daily, the arrogance under the gentle elegance, and the undercurrent under the smile Score points. . . . . . It seems useless

It is a book with very good content. I have read several books on the subject of HP. I feel that this book still has its own characteristics. I don't feel that it is "boring and the content is the same." Where should the author go?

Wow! I have actually read this book a long time ago. But looking at the title of the book, I was a little worried about what it was. . . It's a novel with a theme that's like a heartthrob, so I didn't dare to read it at the time... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! So crazy about the author! I hit a big wall for the author! The depiction of the character Grus Malfoy is not singular, on the contrary, it is vivid and three-dimensional! Wow! He is full of energy, fearless and sometimes a little childish. He loves the title "Lulu Baby" the most! He has this ideal of his, which is great and almost crazy. The Malfoy family comes first! I really love the way Grus protects his younger brother~ Hmm... Now comes the most important part! Ah... The three views in this book are quite good, ambitious, and the overall IQ is online! There is also a family line, which I recommend!