Death Loop: Surviving Amid the Contamination

(Contains spoilers, read with caution) Well... The author wrote it very well and it is very readable. You can use this ending to start a new book. I believe that you have already had some experience in writing this novel and know where your shortcomings are. Then when we know the problem, we must solve it. If the author has no other plans, the next book will already follow the setting of this book, just like the first sentence I said, and it can also be seen from the last chapter of this book that the author has dug a big hole. For example, Xiaoyu is reborn, but his identity is not that of his previous life. He has learned to be smarter this time and seldom uses the ability to load files, or he plays the game and constantly updates the save points. Or maybe a new player appears and inherits Xiaoyu's memory and knows to be careful when using the function of loading files. Or maybe a person who has traveled from the normal world just happened to travel into that cemetery, contacted Xiaoyu's tomb and became a player, and accidentally obtained Xiaoyu's memory after experiencing a few files. What is the final truth? How many pollution gods are there? What is divine grace? Are the top leaders of the Hunter Association aliens? Can the person who explores time and space be killed? Is the one who is unfiltered in this world the abnormal one? Why does the Mosaic man know about the player? Why do those people How do they know about the miracle system? Why did they embark on the path of wanted criminals? What are the settings of this world? What does the god in the final chapter mean? What is the past history of this world? Is this system really just a manifestation of divine grace? What could be so abnormal about this world... These pitfalls, ah, no, problems, I hope the author can present them in the next new book. The author will make an outline and think carefully about how to write, how to present the content, what is the main plot, linear development, etc. I hope the author can see this praise! Also, remember to call me when you open a new book Author, don't give up. Your writing is very good, very readable and in line with taste. Don't give up on yourself or the readers. I hope you can see this good review!

The writing is very good. In the early stage, the protagonist wanted to use the ability to rewind to transform her back into the Unsullied. Later, the appearance of the time manager in sequence five revealed the connection between the player's abnormal reversion ability and the weird hand behind his back. It's a pity that it is gone at this point. I hope the author will continue to write.

Great👍I like this feeling of overwhelming powerlessness but there is still hope

I think there are too few sequences. There are billions of people in the world and there are only 128 sequencers. Countries have more than that. If it is divided equally, it will only be one sequencer for two countries. And I don't believe that 128 people can save the world. And the people are not united. But it is really interesting and beautiful, which is a must (this is my suggestion, don't criticize me). Great author, I look forward to your next book 💕

It's really a masterpiece, it's a five-star review. It's a pity that it's too little, so I can't continue writing it. There are too many foreshadowings, and the twist is similar to that of the strange beast. If I continue writing it, it will definitely be more popular than that one. It's a pity. Let's write another article. If it can be a big hit, come on.

I was very happy to find a good book, but the author... 😢 The protagonist will come back, right 😢 😢 😢

It's very good. I can only say, keep up the good work, author.

I'm addicted to watching it. Tell me it's gone.

It's obviously very well written, why is it like this? I'm crying that I finally found a good one 🥺

It's very well written, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch