At the last dinner after the college entrance examination, Xie Yu received a message from Xia Weiwei. She asked Xie Yu to meet in the toilet. He thought something like a youth novel would happen, but the reality turned out to be a horror novel. Xia Weiwei turned into a monster. Xie Yu died tragically.
The dead Xie Yu returned to the past. When he thought everything was a dream, he met Xia Weiwei again. He was killed again. When he was resurrected again, he finally understood that he was trapped in a death cycle... In the continuous cycle, the truth of this world gradually revealed...
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Reader comments
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Hmm... The author writes it well and it's very readable. You can use this ending to start a new book.
I believe that you have already had some experience writing this novel and know where your shortcomings are. Then when we know the problem, we must solve it.
If the author has no other plans, the next book will already follow the setting of this book, just like the first sentence I said, and it can also be seen from the last chapter of this book that the author has dug a big hole.
For example, Xiaoyu is reborn, but his identity is not the identity of his previous life. He has learned to be smarter this time and rarely uses the ability to load files, or plays the game and constantly updates the save points.
Or maybe a new player appears, he or she has inherited Xiaoyu's memory and knows to be careful when using the file loading function.
Or maybe a person who traveled from the normal world just happened to travel into that cemetery, came into contact with Xiaoyu's tomb, became a player, and accidentally obtained Xiaoyu's memory after a few files loading.
What is the final truth? How many pollution gods are there? What is divine grace? Are the top leaders of the Hunter Association aliens? Can this person who explores time and space be killed? Is the one who is unfiltered in this world the abnormal one? Why does the Mosaic man know about the player? Why do those people How do they know about the miracle system? Why did they embark on the path of wanted criminals? What are the settings of this world? What does the god in the final chapter mean? What is the past history of this world? Is this system really just a manifestation of divine grace? What could be so abnormal about this world...
These pitfalls, ah, not problems, I hope the author's next book can reveal them,
The author makes an outline and thinks carefully about how to write, how to present the content, what the main plot is, linear development, etc.
I hope the author can see this positive review! Also, remember to call me when you open a new book
Author, don't give up. Your writing is very good, very readable and in line with taste. Don't give up on yourself and readers. I hope you can see this good review!
The writing is very good. In the early stage, the protagonist wanted to use the ability to rewind to transform her back into the Unsullied. Later, the appearance of the time manager in sequence five revealed the connection between the player's abnormal reversion ability and the weird hand behind his back. It's a pity that it is gone at this point. I hope the author will continue to write.
Great👍I like this feeling of overwhelming powerlessness but there is still hope
I think there are too few sequences. There are billions of people in the world and there are only 128 sequencers. Countries have more than that. If it is divided equally, it will only be one sequencer for two countries. And I don't believe that 128 people can save the world. And the people are not united. But it is really interesting and beautiful, which is a must (this is my suggestion, don't criticize me). Great author, I look forward to your next book [Sending Hearts]
I was very happy to find a good book, but the author... [Crying] The protagonist will come back, right [crying] [crying] [crying]
It's very good. I can only say, keep up the good work, author.
It's really a masterpiece, it's a five-star review. It's a pity that it's too little, so I can't continue writing it. There are too many foreshadowings, and the twist is similar to that of the strange beast. If I continue writing it, it will definitely be more popular than that one. It's a pity. Let's write another article. If it can be a big hit, come on.
I'm addicted to watching it. Tell me it's gone.
It's obviously very well written, why is it like this? I'm crying that I finally found a good one [I'm about to cry]
Yes, but it seems like the author doesn't want to write it? I'm really impressed too, watching you update each book one by one [Petrochemical]
It's fun to play. It's obviously very good.
As soon as I got addicted, it was over [face covering]
Author, you better have a turn for the better [angry]
It's very well written, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch
Hunters can be set up to have abilities outside the order, and abilities obtained by sacrificing souls. Otherwise, with a world as big as 128, it would be unreasonable to rely on these people to maintain order.
Author, are you ready to stop writing? It's not easy to find a novel I like. Please update the author quickly. Don't force me to scold you!
It's good, why doesn't anyone see it?
Very good, come on
Not bad, cheers for the author
Congratulations to everyone who reads this book for discovering a treasure.
The writing is already pretty good. I estimate that I will have to write more than 200 chapters before I can achieve results. I can't always limit myself to a small place, I need to expand the world view.
It's really beautiful, I hope the author will stick with it
It's pretty cool and I'm looking forward to the reconstructed divine power.
It's okay, I like it a lot, but it's a bit off-putting to me, but it's nice.
I'll give stars even if it's a bad ending. The writing is really good on some details.
Players' graves
Really (hasty ending)
This author is too short
Damn, this is the ending after you've had so much fun watching it?
(Contains spoilers, read with caution) Hmm... The author writes it well and it's very readable. You can use this ending to start a new book. I believe that you have already had some experience writing this novel and know where your shortcomings are. Then when we know the problem, we must solve it. If the author has no other plans, the next book will already follow the setting of this book, just like the first sentence I said, and it can also be seen from the last chapter of this book that the author has dug a big hole. For example, Xiaoyu is reborn, but his identity is not the identity of his previous life. He has learned to be smarter this time and rarely uses the ability to load files, or plays the game and constantly updates the save points. Or maybe a new player appears, he or she has inherited Xiaoyu's memory and knows to be careful when using the file loading function. Or maybe a person who traveled from the normal world just happened to travel into that cemetery, came into contact with Xiaoyu's tomb, became a player, and accidentally obtained Xiaoyu's memory after a few files loading. What is the final truth? How many pollution gods are there? What is divine grace? Are the top leaders of the Hunter Association aliens? Can this person who explores time and space be killed? Is the one who is unfiltered in this world the abnormal one? Why does the Mosaic man know about the player? Why do those people How do they know about the miracle system? Why did they embark on the path of wanted criminals? What are the settings of this world? What does the god in the final chapter mean? What is the past history of this world? Is this system really just a manifestation of divine grace? What could be so abnormal about this world... These pitfalls, ah, not problems, I hope the author's next book can reveal them, The author makes an outline and thinks carefully about how to write, how to present the content, what the main plot is, linear development, etc. I hope the author can see this positive review! Also, remember to call me when you open a new book Author, don't give up. Your writing is very good, very readable and in line with taste. Don't give up on yourself and readers. I hope you can see this good review!
The writing is very good. In the early stage, the protagonist wanted to use the ability to rewind to transform her back into the Unsullied. Later, the appearance of the time manager in sequence five revealed the connection between the player's abnormal reversion ability and the weird hand behind his back. It's a pity that it is gone at this point. I hope the author will continue to write.
Great👍I like this feeling of overwhelming powerlessness but there is still hope
I think there are too few sequences. There are billions of people in the world and there are only 128 sequencers. Countries have more than that. If it is divided equally, it will only be one sequencer for two countries. And I don't believe that 128 people can save the world. And the people are not united. But it is really interesting and beautiful, which is a must (this is my suggestion, don't criticize me). Great author, I look forward to your next book [Sending Hearts]
I was very happy to find a good book, but the author... [Crying] The protagonist will come back, right [crying] [crying] [crying]
It's very good. I can only say, keep up the good work, author.
It's really a masterpiece, it's a five-star review. It's a pity that it's too little, so I can't continue writing it. There are too many foreshadowings, and the twist is similar to that of the strange beast. If I continue writing it, it will definitely be more popular than that one. It's a pity. Let's write another article. If it can be a big hit, come on.
I'm addicted to watching it. Tell me it's gone.
It's obviously very well written, why is it like this? I'm crying that I finally found a good one [I'm about to cry]
Yes, but it seems like the author doesn't want to write it? I'm really impressed too, watching you update each book one by one [Petrochemical]
It's fun to play. It's obviously very good.
As soon as I got addicted, it was over [face covering]
Author, you better have a turn for the better [angry]
It's very well written, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch
Hunters can be set up to have abilities outside the order, and abilities obtained by sacrificing souls. Otherwise, with a world as big as 128, it would be unreasonable to rely on these people to maintain order.
Author, are you ready to stop writing? It's not easy to find a novel I like. Please update the author quickly. Don't force me to scold you!
It's good, why doesn't anyone see it?
Very good, come on
Not bad, cheers for the author
Congratulations to everyone who reads this book for discovering a treasure.
The writing is already pretty good. I estimate that I will have to write more than 200 chapters before I can achieve results. I can't always limit myself to a small place, I need to expand the world view.
It's really beautiful, I hope the author will stick with it
It's pretty cool and I'm looking forward to the reconstructed divine power.
It's okay, I like it a lot, but it's a bit off-putting to me, but it's nice.
I'll give stars even if it's a bad ending. The writing is really good on some details.
Players' graves
Really (hasty ending)
This author is too short
Damn, this is the ending after you've had so much fun watching it?
No, is this about changing the protagonist?