The Witch’s Death

The overall character creation is very good. The growth and personality changes of the two protagonists and the development of their emotions are quite reasonable. It's not the kind of vulgar work that only labels characters (tomatoes are too common in this type of work.) Love this work quite a lot. Come on, author, don't give up. (≧∇≦)/

It took me one night to read it, it is really an excellent work. It's just a bit short, I feel like it might be better if I add tens of thousands more words. I'll come back for a second brushing when I have time. ---Leave at 23:55 on April 8

I stayed up late to finish reading it, it was so well written 😢😢😢 Every time I finish reading a book, I feel empty in my heart. I think I will suddenly think of this book again at some point in the future. The story of Locke and Aristine (Churtelia, Chrissy) has been deeply engraved in my mind.

I hope everyone will comment more [sending heartfelt wishes] Quote PS: This book was completed during the author's sophomore year of high school. At that time, he never thought of posting it online and used some sentences from other people's works. After I finished writing, I suddenly wanted to publish it on Tomato. It took me two or three days to upload it and complete the application. After a long time, I realized that I had forgotten to modify the "borrowed" part. After the work is confirmed, the author himself cannot modify it. Even after asking customer service, he said no, so he had to annotate it here (at the same time, he also annotated the paragraph comments of each sentence, the "author's words" of the corresponding chapter, and the book circle of the work). Thank you for your understanding. Note: 1. In Chapter 2 of Volume 2 of this book, "Magic", the sentence "We plunge headlong into the twilight, regardless of day or night" is quoted from Kafka's short story "Children on a Country Road". 2. In the first chapter of Volume 7, "The Chase", "Through the long tunnel across the city boundary, there is Avadia. A vast expanse of white under the quiet sky" pays tribute to the beginning of Kawabata Yasunari's novella "Snow Country". 3. In Chapter 4 of Volume 7, "The Devil of Fire Comes", "They will walk through mountains, through water, and rely on everything to get past each other." This is a reference to Shi Tiesheng's "Retreat Notes". The original sentence is "I have walked through mountains and through water, but I only use them to walk through my life; I look at the sky and the earth, but I only use them to determine my position." "Her face will be buried in his arms forever, and nothing can separate the two of them anymore..." Drawing on Kafka's "The Castle", the original sentence is "My face is hidden in your arms, your face is hidden in mine, no one will see us again." "She and I met on a certain day of a certain year and a certain month." From Nasu Mushroom's "The Realm of the Sky", the original sentence is: "In April of 1995, I met her."

I finished reading it in one go. It's very good. I like the writing very much. The plot is also interesting. It's a little sad. But I personally think it's a bit messy. Anyway, it's considered a masterpiece on Tomato. The author is so short.

It's very well written. I really like this type of book. Keep up the good work, author.