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Um, I've read all the chapters so far. Author, have you read re0? It feels like 486 and Rem (486 can't possibly like Rem who has killed him thousands of times, and he is always kind and righteous in rescuing people). Is there a plot to get to know each other again later?

Haha, you can write it

After seeing the latest chapter, I quite like Xiaobai. When will the protagonist also fall in love with Xiaobai? In my opinion, the latest Q version of Mo Zhen is a bit poisonous (in my opinion), and also has an independent consciousness. To avoid this poisonous point, it is best to turn the villain into something like Nascent Soul.

This book gives people a novel feeling. The image of the male protagonist is not good enough (maybe because the plot is too short now), but as a novice, it is very good to write like this. The expressiveness of the plot is also relatively full, which can be said to have caught my eye. The image the author wants to give to Bai should be biased toward poor Bai Tian, but I think The character change was a bit too fast. She gave the impression that she was a madman at the beginning, and the author's setting for her must have the word "smart" in it. I think this "The Raising of a Yandere" is a bit too fast, or maybe I can't adapt to this fast pace. In short, this book is well written and attractive enough, but the author is a bit short. . . .

The description of the yandere in this book is very detailed, and it doesn't give people the feeling that it can be solved overnight. Looking at the details of the protagonist's character and so on, it seems more reasonable. If it is written according to this situation, this time it will be a book around 8.5. And the following text shows that this is a fusion of fantasy and fairy tales. If you can grasp the subject matter of this book well, it can get a nine points at least in terms of subject matter (excluding those who are sailors). From the beginning, I can see that the author's writing style can be considered good. Later, it is recommended not to focus too much on the central theme of yandere, and be appropriately ruthless in terms of fairy tales. There is also the golden finger of the protagonist. I hope the author can improve it in the later chapters, otherwise it always feels a bit abrupt. Overall, the subject matter of this book can be rated 8 out of 10, and the writing style can be rated 7 out of 10. If you stick to it, it can be considered a good book. Come on

I hope the protagonist and Xiaobai are together

It's still okay to be emotionally involved

Great, the author died Condolences to the author

Well, not bad. But judging from this opening, it would be best to have a single female protagonist. The focus of the writing is on Xiaobai, so it may not be appropriate to have multiple female protagonists.

Not bad, very good for a newcomer

I would like to call it R0 survival in the wilderness starting from zero

Well written for a newbie author. Very interesting

It's pretty good. I hope the author won't be short and weak.

Come on, author, this book is beautiful

Can Lord Jue become stronger? The author is great

Ah♂It feels like it's completely in the shape of the author's book♂(bushi)

I'm leaving, take care of yourself, come on, author [salute]

Not bad, very nice. I would like to ask the author whether Mo Zhen and Xiao Bai are running in both directions later or he is escaping and she is chasing. @Little prince The author is too slow to update, and it is not enough to read. Others are reading two chapters a day, and reading one chapter feels like not reading at all. I want to raise books

It's very interesting. I hope the author will take good care of you.

A good book with a humorous style and self-consistent logic. Brain Online is worth reading.

It's really good-looking, but the front part is a bit unsatisfactory. It would be nice if the male protagonist could accept Xiao Bai quickly and slowly.

It's quite watchable, the details are pretty good, the characters' emotions are quite normal and logical, but it's just too little to watch.

When you write this book to 20,000 to 30,000 words, it will definitely become popular. If you keep writing it like this, the heroine and hero should not get together too early, otherwise it will be meaningless if they are all sprinkled with sugar. If this continues, it will definitely become popular. Shandong will get used to it [laughing and crying]

I really feel a little confused. I thought I had something to do so I stopped updating, but I didn't expect that I would start over again. I feel confused and time flies by.

It's a pretty yandere novel, but it's a pity that it's too late.

I was watching fine, why did it suddenly disappear?

Yes, I love you, author [Chigua]

It's a bit funny, but it's still very good. Good luck, author.

It's okay, but there will be a smaller version of the protagonist later, and there is a possibility of cuckolding.

The author's update speed is too short and feeble [smiles] and is very [angry], the author hurries to me [please update]