Reborn in 1980: My Educated Youth Wife Refuses to Divorce Me

Apart from the criticism of borrowing money in the early stage, if you think about borrowing money for gambling, you can imagine that almost no one will lend it to you! The rest of it is generally very good, but it's just a blessing. Come on, the author will add a few more chapters.

Didn't write a sense of age

Not bad, very to my liking [Like]

To be honest, borrowing money is the biggest failure. It does not express the style of the reborn person at all. Rebirth plus space cheats, why do you need to borrow money?

The rebirth at the beginning is blurry, and you can rebirth after shedding a few tears. This joke was not written well. The third person is too heavy, and it hurts to look at it. The space of rebirth is like a dead thing. It would be much better if it was written directly as a system text. I have to continue to correct it. Next time, don't write the first word. Always be careful to add third person, or first and second person. After writing ten chapters, you don't know how to find a friend or family member to try it out? The rating is bad at first glance. The whole novel is just a running account. It's extremely bad. Important things are mentioned three times. It's a bad review! Bad review! Bad review!

The protagonist is not like a person who can repent, because Chen Xiulian next door gave them food when they were in trouble, but he spent a lot of money and didn't think about others. This person is selfish, will he repent?

I feel average. I have written more than 20 chapters to cook and deliver meals to my wife. I have read more than 40 chapters and haven't spoken to my wife yet. Moreover, the male protagonist has space and wants to open a restaurant but has no capital. The first thing he thinks about is borrowing money. He has no character at all. How did he use billions of assets in his previous life?

Do you think it's ridiculous? You meet the heroine, you have diarrhea, you meet the heroine again, the boss asks her to leave, and then nothing happens. You've gone through more than 20 chapters, and you haven't met the heroine yet, and you haven't said a word to her? You are reborn and go back to the past. If you don't see your beloved first, I will lose. I won't accept any rebuttal.

I discovered another way to reduce word count! ! His daughter, his wife! Braised chicken, scrambled eggs with tomatoes! ! ! A paragraph is always repeated!

What's cool to watch is that the layout is a bit small and I don't know how to make a fortune.