[No cp, the heroine is only beautiful]
Luo Wumu is the proud son of heaven and the pearl in everyone's mouth.
In an accident, she was confirmed "dead" by Little Confusion System 418 and was forcibly brought into the mission world.
"Host, your mission is to eliminate the factors that destroy the peace of the world."
"They may be villains who defeat the protagonist with their abilities, they may be crazy protagonists, or they may be those beings who destroy heaven."
"They have turned the world upside down, and the world is in ruins. World peace is the purpose of our system."
Luo Wumu said: Haha, do I look like someone who can help others?
But she didn't want to lose her original life in a daze, so she had no choice but to help Xiaomou complete the task and accumulate energy to return to the original world.
Little Confused System 418 thought stupidly: My host is really a little angel, so weak, I want to protect her!
Until they saw a group of crazy and powerful suitors behind the angel host, and they begged the host to look at them.
Their "weak" host kept them docile and unable to move.
System 418 held a small handkerchief, shocked and shocked.
Reader comments
It's really good to watch, and there is no uncomfortable plot (at least for me now, there is nothing that makes me feel uncomfortable). As a person who particularly likes to pursue rationality and logic, I will be captured. I didn't pursue too much in Tomato. I just hope that it can be reasonable. I thought there would be some outrageous plot. I have watched so many movies. An outrageous SB article with the banner of a strong female character without CP (I couldn't hold it back because I had read a very disgusting fic about a strong female character without CP, but it was still over nine o'clock, so I couldn't resist it). When I read this article, I didn't actually have high expectations, but after reading it, I thought he was really good-looking (I don't know what will happen next, to be determined)
I quite like this book, keep it up! ! [Send heart][Send heart]
I really like the description of the first plane. As a fan of people, I haven't encountered a satisfactory description of ancient times for a long time, so I couldn't help but comment on it (? Is it considered a heartthrob?)
I don't even know what to say. I seem to have something to say, but suddenly my mind is empty. I delete it again and again. If my evaluation will make people feel psychologically uncomfortable, I can change it (I haven't commented online for a long time, and I am a little timid after seeing the horror of the Internet) [Sending Hearts]
I don't know how to put it, it just has a kind of hazy beauty, stream of consciousness but not completely. The plot is very ups and downs, but it just feels like reading it as a child when your mother was holding you on your lap and applying shower gel, warm water soaked from your scalp, and you yawned in ultimate relaxation. The author is capable, but the word processing can still be improved. Some modal words and appearance descriptions are a bit awkward, but to me, the flaws do not hide the advantages.
Support the cp-free female power article, I like the setting very much.
But the writing style... It's hard to read, it's not smooth!
It's too long-winded, all plots are carried out intermittently, and there are too many narrations.
The dialogue breaks off after two sentences and begins a whole chapter of narration.
Then continue the previous conversation and say a few words,
Another whole chapter of narration begins.
It's so uncomfortable╯╰I just can't bear to run away
The narration is too long.
This is my first completed book. Give yourself five stars and encourage yourself!
The logic of the entire book should have formed a perfect closed loop, and efforts have been made to make it perfect.
[Laugh][laugh][laugh]
It has the feeling of a memoir, which makes people immerse themselves in it and is not emotionally strong.
It looks good but there are too few [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Keep it up
Damn, I really like your book. The writing suits my taste very much [shy]
It's really good to watch, and there is no uncomfortable plot (at least for me now, there is nothing that makes me feel uncomfortable). As a person who particularly likes to pursue rationality and logic, I will be captured. I didn't pursue too much in Tomato. I just hope that it can be reasonable. I thought there would be some outrageous plot. I have watched so many movies. An outrageous SB article with the banner of a strong female character without CP (I couldn't hold it back because I had read a very disgusting fic about a strong female character without CP, but it was still over nine o'clock, so I couldn't resist it). When I read this article, I didn't actually have high expectations, but after reading it, I thought he was really good-looking (I don't know what will happen next, to be determined) I quite like this book, keep it up! ! [Send heart][Send heart] I really like the description of the first plane. As a fan of people, I haven't encountered a satisfactory description of ancient times for a long time, so I couldn't help but comment on it (? Is it considered a heartthrob?) I don't even know what to say. I seem to have something to say, but suddenly my mind is empty. I delete it again and again. If my evaluation will make people feel psychologically uncomfortable, I can change it (I haven't commented online for a long time, and I am a little timid after seeing the horror of the Internet) [Sending Hearts]
I don't know how to put it, it just has a kind of hazy beauty, stream of consciousness but not completely. The plot is very ups and downs, but it just feels like reading it as a child when your mother was holding you on your lap and applying shower gel, warm water soaked from your scalp, and you yawned in ultimate relaxation. The author is capable, but the word processing can still be improved. Some modal words and appearance descriptions are a bit awkward, but to me, the flaws do not hide the advantages.
Support the cp-free female power article, I like the setting very much. But the writing style... It's hard to read, it's not smooth! It's too long-winded, all plots are carried out intermittently, and there are too many narrations. The dialogue breaks off after two sentences and begins a whole chapter of narration. Then continue the previous conversation and say a few words, Another whole chapter of narration begins. It's so uncomfortable╯╰I just can't bear to run away
The narration is too long.
This is my first completed book. Give yourself five stars and encourage yourself! The logic of the entire book should have formed a perfect closed loop, and efforts have been made to make it perfect. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]
It has the feeling of a memoir, which makes people immerse themselves in it and is not emotionally strong.
It looks good but there are too few [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Keep it up
Damn, I really like your book. The writing suits my taste very much [shy]