She Bewitched All Living Beings

It's really good to watch, and there is no uncomfortable plot (at least for me now, there is nothing that makes me feel uncomfortable). As a person who particularly likes to pursue rationality and logic, I will be captured. I didn't pursue too much in Tomato. I just hope that it can be reasonable. I thought there would be some outrageous plot. I have watched so many movies. An outrageous SB article with the banner of a strong female character without CP (I couldn't hold it back because I had read a very disgusting fic about a strong female character without CP, but it was still over nine o'clock, so I couldn't resist it). When I read this article, I didn't actually have high expectations, but after reading it, I thought he was really good-looking (I don't know what will happen next, to be determined) I quite like this book, keep it up!! 💕💕 I really like the description of the first plane. As a fan of people, I haven't encountered a satisfactory description of ancient times for a long time, so I couldn't help but comment on it (? Is it considered a heartthrob?) I don't even know what to say. I seem to have something to say, but suddenly my mind is empty. I delete it again and again. If my evaluation will make people feel psychologically uncomfortable, I can change it (I haven't commented online for a long time, and I am a little timid after seeing the horror of the Internet) 💕

I don't know how to put it, it just has a kind of hazy beauty, stream of consciousness but not completely. The plot is very ups and downs, but it just feels like reading it as a child when your mother was holding you on your lap and applying shower gel, warm water soaked from your scalp, and you yawned in ultimate relaxation. The author is capable, but the word processing can still be improved. Some modal words and appearance descriptions are a bit awkward, but to me, the flaws do not hide the advantages.

Support the cp-free female power article, I like the setting very much. But the writing style... It's hard to read, it's not smooth! It's too long-winded, all plots are carried out intermittently, and there are too many narrations. The dialogue breaks off after two sentences and begins a whole chapter of narration. Then continue the previous conversation and say a few words, Another whole chapter of narration begins. It's so uncomfortable╯╰I just can't bear to run away

The narration is too long.

This is my first completed book. Give yourself five stars and encourage yourself! The logic of the entire book should have formed a perfect closed loop, and efforts have been made to make it perfect. 😄😄😄 Hahaha, the author suffered from a literary disease in his early days. He read carefully and could not revise the text. It was originally a quick read, but then he was too busy three times and ended it in a hurry. There is only one world. 🍉[Working on manuscript][Smirking].

It has the feeling of a memoir, which makes people immerse themselves in it and is not emotionally strong.

Keep it up

It looks good but there are too few 🥰🥰[Admiration]

Damn, I really like your book. The writing suits my taste very much 😳