Lao Si*******

It's beautiful. The only drawback is that the heroine Zhao Miaomiao doesn't feel like a best friend or a friend. The word friend only appears once in the heroine's part. She moved out of the dormitory and never wrote about roommates [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Just the age difference alone makes me look really good, my dad-like boyfriend, great [blowing kiss]

It's pretty good, but the rest is basically a monologue [face covering]

It started to feel a bit like a running story in the middle, but it's very sweet. I hope the author can improve it in his next novel. I'm looking forward to the author's next novel [Blow Kiss]

It's really beautiful, the process is not long-winded and very sweet.

After reading half of it, I gradually realized that the writing style feels a bit like writing a composition. Please support it with five stars [please take a closer look]

Compositional novel. Overall, it's okay. After all, it's a short story and fast-paced. Needless to say, some of the emotional descriptions are very realistic. But... This kind of male protagonist is limited to the world of novels. In reality, he will become an "old and perverted" person. "Finally, I hope that all women and men can meet a partner who will grow old together in real life!"

I really like short stories without so many bloody plots [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

I fell in love after reading only a dozen chapters. Who knows? Age difference, daddy, super doting! ! !

I like to read novels with fewer chapters. I am too lazy to read them if they are too long. This kind of novel is very suitable. The first half is very interesting, but I don't like it very much from the 20 chapters onwards. The rest is like writing a diary when I was a child. What did I do in the morning and what did I do in the afternoon? It is very boring. It also pursues gorgeous words like the composition. The male and female protagonists have good personalities and the characters are okay. I saw the author said that this is the first book, which is also very good.

Like lightly, love deeply

A sweet article that is plain and unmistakable!

The narrative style and vocabulary are like writing a paper [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

How should I put it, the writing was good at the beginning, but after more than half of the progress, you can see the author's immature writing style. However, in order to encourage the author's cuteness, I still give it a good review. Keep up the good work, little cutie! !

It's intentionally short, but it's also pretty. . . Sweet article

It's beautiful, wonderful, and I like it very much.

It has a happy ending, but it feels a bit like a diary

This is the author's first time writing. Overall it's okay, especially the beginning. It would be better if there was some character interaction and less narration later.

This book is very beautiful and heartwarming. However, the author's writing style is a bit immature. I hope the author will continue to work hard and improve himself.

Completed on October 23, 2023. It is a standard sweet article and a standard smooth sailing life. It is a role model for the new generation of young people. I don't know why I always feel that something is missing?

It's a sweet short article, but it seems a bit immature and not compact, but it's not easy to create. I support the author.

It's pretty good for my first time writing.

The first part is good. Are you writing a composition in the middle and last part?

Very nice little sweet article

Very nice little sweet article

It's really beautiful, I like it very much!

This should be the beauty we all imagined in the beginning, right?

It's still very beautiful, very sweet, no misunderstanding, very doting, but the last few pictures are very wordy.

The novel is written very realistically and is a beautiful sweet article!

The author's writing is really beautiful. I like this kind of writing. I love the author so much. I basically read sweet articles [Adoration]