Monster City: Welcome to the Human Farm

My second book, I hope it will be better than the first one. Trying to write about swords can be regarded as practicing my writing skills.

How come no one watched it? This book seems quite good, I'm currently at chapter 14

I think it's quite interesting and very beautiful. It actually makes me suffer and feel happy at the same time. But this is just my feeling. I don't know what you think about this book. But maybe this book is not on the list. Recommend it. I will recommend it later, but can the author leave you Youyou? ][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Crying][Crying][Crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying]

It's brain-burning and the author's outlook is good. I love it. I am a girl. I really want to spit out some bad comments and respect women, okay? There is also the background of the protagonist. Is there any heir behind him? Is there some eye in the sky looking at him? I don't understand. I hope I can write about it later. The world view is really great. I hope I can write it to the end. This book is really the second one I have read. My favorite is the knife. Please give the kids some candies. [I'm about to cry]

Five stars for encouragement. It can be seen that the writing skills still need to be polished and the plot needs to be considered. For example, for a passage of sorrowful memories, you can refer to some documentary literature so that you can more calmly insert the knife into the readers' hearts [Chigua] Some readers think it's brain-burning. Personally, I don't have to worry about brain-burning writing. As long as the logic is established, the more brain-burning the more people are willing to be burned.

Yes, you can also find foreshadowing, and the final BOSS is quite easy to guess. The subject matter is also good. I thought it was the protagonist who mainly kills and kills, but I didn't expect it to be a story full of warmth. I look forward to the next plot and the protagonist's counterattack. Come on, author! But there are also some shortcomings. I always feel that it wants to be sensational and reflect the bond between people, but I feel that the writing is a bit neither good nor good, which is strange. Also, the scene changes and narration at the beginning were very abrupt, and I was a little confused. Looking forward to the author's progress

For a change, it's not bad. Does this book use monsters to satirize humans? I feel like those monsters refer to people with bad intentions in life. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. Yes, everyone has their own tastes. Everyone likes radish and green vegetables. Some people like rational protagonists, while others like more emotional protagonists. No matter what, this is a style.

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The writing is good. Can the author add a character named Wei Likun? It's best to write it if you're a freshman in high school and hope to have a girlfriend. If you can't write it, forget it [smile]

I want to know if there is a real world outside of human hunting grounds. Everyone is a player, and every sun is a player. Then it is similar to the world in a box. How do the people in the box prove that they are in the box, and then the protagonist knows the truth. He kills gods. It must be a cross-dimensional kill. But the god he killed was also a VR player. He killed the player's consciousness, and the player outside the box became a vegetable? ? ?

I've read more than 170 chapters, and overall it's pretty good. The first few chapters (to be precise, the plot up to the skin louse) are a bit difficult to guess. The author may have given too many hints, and there are too many sensational plots. Later, the world view is still okay. You can feel that the author is slowly growing up. In the later period, the life experience of the protagonist is becoming more and more curious. Moreover, it does not rely too much on plug-ins and has great reviews! No love line, no ambiguity, oh yeah! ! I've seen Chapter 287, and I'll give you a follow-up review. The author feels that he wants to write a book that contains many chains of suspicion and foreshadowing nested layer by layer. He may want to write a type of book that is similar to the synthesis of Tokazy and Alien Beast MC. There are some funny plots, and the world view can probably stand up, but at present, most of the world background is constructed through various characters. The construction of each character itself is not full and a bit flat, and the world view has not been fully developed. The sense of substitution is not very strong. It is more suitable to watch when passing the time, but it is not as urgent as Toka and Alien Beasts.

The emotional line is a bit lacking, and the feelings of family and country are a bit poorly written. But the three views are indeed very correct. Unlike other Tomato books, there is no particularly obvious plot development line. And you have to watch the plot at the beginning carefully, otherwise you will easily get confused. The style of the whole book is a bit drama-like, and it can be seen that the author really put his heart into it. But the author hasn't finished hundreds of chapters yet, and someone like me who is interested in the three-minute novel can't stand it. I like to read long articles, so I can give it a try. It's not bad. Actually (´∀｀*) Come on, author~ If you like reading long articles, you can give it a try

So far, it's a very good sword. The parts about the sword are very good. Lao Duan's lines are very similar to those of Zhan Shen. Overall, it's pretty cool. Good luck to the author (^ω^)

It's very interesting to read, and the twists and turns in the plot are exciting. If it's a thriller, it's not very scary. The main thing is that the twists and turns in the plot are exciting. The author is still very good at keeping people's appetites. I'm sure no one can read a book at two in the morning later than me, right?

I've caught up on the latest, what can I say? Among the three events so far, I still like the first one, the one about escaping from the building. It's quite brain-burning, but it's handled too directly when revealing part of the truth. (It's like telling the result with a bang). The incident with the doll at the end feels like there are too few characters. In fact, the boss is easy to guess, so the story is a bit difficult to unfold? And it felt like it was too difficult for the male protagonist, he was stabbed in the back like crazy It's finally finished. This book is really not easy. Does the author plan to write 7 or 8 books? This story?

It's very interesting, a bit brain-burning, but some parts can be guessed later. Uncle Duan makes people feel uncomfortable, and so does Youyou. Wu You is not worry-free. "Uncle Duan, what's your most cool move called?" "I remember, it seemed to be called..." "Fire Dragon Roar!" Uncle Duan is really handsome. [Eat melon]

I would recommend it. The characters in the book are very carefully drawn and flesh-and-blood. Basically everyone has their own story and thoughts. In a world full of monsters, betrayal is a common thing, and you can recognize both sides of human nature. The world described by the author makes people want to explore. It is very similar to Ten Days to the End. If you like this type, you can read it. This kind of subject matter is still very interesting.

I was doing laundry, thinking how bored I was, and had my headphones on. When I finished listening to the novel for 15 minutes in silence. I feel like my cerebellum has shrunk a bit. How to say it? Come on, author! At your level, it's like the zombie novels my junior high school friend wrote for a while. How should I put it? It makes my cerebellum shrink a little. I'll give you a five-star support. By the way, let me go to Huohuo and other brothers.

Rare high-quality article! (Crazy monkey cry) (swinging back and forth) I don't know how long ago I last saw something of this quality. I've been poisoned so much that I finally got something awesome. Brain-burning + brotherly bond, I wrote the article all night, and I still can't bear to read it [crying] kneeling down and begging for more updates

The writing is great, but I don't know why. Why do you update a chapter every other day recently? What happened? I originally wanted to keep the book [thinking] [send heart] I hope you won't give up [face covering] I really like this book [love] [please update]

I want to write a book about learning to kill gods, something sensational, but it seems a bit awkward, and my writing skills need to be improved.

It feels okay. It doesn't seem like there's anything particularly embarrassing right now. You can take a look :)

It's okay, but there are still some areas that could be improved. Overall, it's pretty good, and I really like this type of setting (human beings are kept in captivity, trying to survive), and there are relatively few of them. So far, I have seen similar settings for Circle 18 and a Monster APP. Love reading all 3 books

It's a very good book, but no one has read it. The book has been in short supply for so long. It's rare to come across such a book, but there are just too few.

Come on, author! [Code hold]

Very beautiful, come on

It's better to kill... It's better to kill a god than this book

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha ok

The author's writing is adequate, but lacks vitality. It would be better to add some humor when describing the characters and plots. This is far from the best articles on Tomato, but it is already very good.

Why don't many people watch it? It looks good.