JOJO: Black Line of Fate

The theme is okay, but the author clearly said that the protagonist saw the scene where Iqi died, but the protagonist in the article acted as if he had never seen it at all.

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Okay, I like it very much. When I have time, I will help you find a few posts to push. The protagonist's stand-in ability is pretty good and very reasonable. JO's daily life is a path that I have never thought of. There is no daily life in the early stage, mainly playing DIO. In my opinion, there is no poisonous point. The decisive battle is a plot that I have never thought of, but there are a few people reading it, so the rating is relatively low. Come on.

Although there is a variety comic content, the author really doesn't want to write a variety comic. There are a lot of characters, but there are none related to the protagonist [face covering] To this, I said: It's pretty good! Don't engage in those useless emotional lines, Euler is the last word. I just want to know how Johnny will deal with it. Is it set to be Er Qiao's illegitimate son? Is Jello the posthumous son of Caesar? I hope the author won't destroy these two characters. Please, please, I like these two characters very much [sending my heart] Finally, come on, author, we must stop using eunuchs! [Code hold]

What will happen next to Sister Legs? I remember that in the last episode of Little Lao Di, she seemed to be married to a supporting actor named Kenny G? What will happen here? (Kenny G was the one who was defeated by Iggy in Dior's house and appeared for less than half a minute...)

Very nice! Black Funeral is really good, especially the missing part of the funeral line in the shuttle line. I was moved by it. Personally, I don't think it is poisonous. If you don't want to watch Jotaro and Joseph's shuttle lines, you can skip it. It basically has no impact, but you will not understand the last sentence of the extra chapter.

This is a good Jojo fanfic. The first half is the third Star Fighter, followed by loose writing and part of the plot of Eye of Heaven. The author's creative techniques are very good, and it has a Jojo feel. Not only does the design of the stand's name draw on Araki's style, but the design of the new stand and new characters is very close to the original work. The innovative plot is also well integrated without any abrupt feeling. However, the author's description of daily life is somewhat lacking. The later creation of the plot of "Eye of Heaven" felt very rushed and not as good as the previous ones. But in the end, it has a happy ending, which is quite good.

The writing is very good, and some of the second-generation fics I have read have also been added to it. For example, the ending of the young Erqiao fighting Seth is a bit sloppy, giving people a feeling of unfinished business. The characters in it also have their own highlights and their own growth, especially the growth of the protagonist. In my opinion, true growth is only after experiencing your own cat being annihilated by the president. After all, there is nothing more mature than painful growth.

I think it's really good

The JOJO chapter feels good, but it's too short. The daily chapter is not particularly exciting so far. I hope it won't get lost halfway through.

Kakyoin looked at you calmly, smiling without saying a word

I think the protagonist's avatar can be developed in the early stage. Isn't it possible to attach the entrance to the shadow world to the surface of an object? You can put some relatively hard objects into the shadow world in advance, and before the opponent can react, release this thing from above the opponent, which may kill him. At least it can delay it for a while, so that the substitute can hit him.

Highly recommended, but I want to ask a question about [Soft and Wet] Transcendence. He is infinitely small and cannot interfere with any substitute ability, so can Valentine destroy him? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Overall, I'm very satisfied with it, but the ending is a bit rushed. If the author hadn't been so anxious to write the ending, I believe it would have been better! ! ! !

2025.2.26 (End) It's the first time I read JOJO's article, I'm so happy [sending my heart] It's just that the ending is a bit rushed

An excellent fan work with a bit of creativity of its own.

It's a second creation that I like. It doesn't forcefully insert into the main plot, and it doesn't overwhelm the main character. It looks like it's just a person added, and that's it.

How many heroines do you plan to recruit on a daily basis? It's not a good review. The author doesn't know where his writing focus is. It gives me the feeling that he is writing a jojo under the guise of a comprehensive comic and trying to sell someone else's meat. Many people who clicked in to read this book definitely didn't write "jojo" for "jojo". Author, you also know what attracts people, which is "complex comics", because the themes of "jojo" and "complex comics" are not common in Tomato. There are almost 50 or 60 pictures. "Zong Man" was mentioned at the beginning. Of course, it is still remarkable. Speaking of "jojo" alone, the writing is quite good, and the details of the characters are all remarkable. I think the focus of your writing is more "comprehensive comics", rather than having fifty or sixty chapters to pave the way for "jojo" because there are so many jojos written about it. The advantage of your book is that it has the "comprehensive comic" aspect which is very innovative.

Author, this is my last five stars! Take it! ! ! ! I retract my previous comment, and I admit that my previous comment was a bit impulsive. The author seems to have a strange obsession with refusing to trick the protagonist, so much so that he almost opens it to everyone except the protagonist but does not open it to the protagonist. Growth A is just like a decoration. Even if he takes an arrow, he can't stab himself. Maybe it will be opened later, but I can't see it anymore. I guess it will be rubbish if it is opened.

Good good good good [fly kiss] [fly kiss] [fly kiss] it's so short

"You can't leave me alone this time, Sike..."

It's good, but the title of the manga is obviously not right. The characters from other anime only appear a few times, and the rest are basically Jojo content.

Good, good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, I will keep up with it forever!

It is very consistent with the original setting of JOJO and looks good.

It must be full marks, it combines all the elements I like, the stand-in + the comprehensive comic is the perfect match

When will the author's new book be released?

Come on, come on, come on!

The author is so awesome! ! ! , Super beautiful!

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Okay, quite nice