Picking up Broken Jade: Eldest Brother Wan'an

Objective evaluation: Is it good for ancient Chinese texts to be rolled up according to this standard? Every sentence is full of poetry, and the writing style is really excellent. It can also be seen that the author has a profound cultural background. The advanced vocabulary makes me feel that this is not the quality of 🍅. Just looking at the text, I can imagine the Jiangnan water town, the snow light in the north, and the scenes of the Western Regions. There may be few people who read it, and the rating has not come up yet, but I believe that the treasures will always be dug out [Love] Subjective evaluation: Who doesn't love the cold and gentle male protagonist! Ah ah ah help me, this is the material for my dream tonight! [Adoration] There is a sense of proportion and thoughtfulness, and some twists and turns of emotions make the novel rich and interesting. The regret for me is probably Jin'an's hard work and persistence, and the prince's extra story. I also hope that the author's next novel will be more progressive, and there will be more extra stories. The child is so upset [crying]

The author's writing style is excellent [admiration][admiration], and the description of the girl's emotions is also delicate enough. The excitement and shyness of seeing the person you like is mixed with the dull pain in your heart caused by knowing that the other person will finally be a perfect match for her. It makes people have a kind of thought of "I knew this was so close to my heart, why did I know each other before". The character of the male protagonist is like a flower on the high mountain who was pulled down from the altar by the female protagonist. I also think the handling of the human fireworks is very good. It makes people feel that this man is slowly walking out of the book with the fragrance of bamboo. It is much better than the many books I have read before that wrote the male protagonist as a god who does not eat the fireworks of the world. But the handling of emotions in other places is a bit unsatisfactory. I think the change of feelings between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is still a bit abrupt. And I think it might be more natural to make the other characters more fleshed out and write about the impact of the love, hate and hatred of the little characters on the protagonist, so that the protagonist can understand his own emotions and the principles of doing things. However, I still like this book very much, and I look forward to the author writing better! I'm stupid, and I came up with this idea after reading the author's big book. If you don't like it, don't criticize it, it's offending. [Shy]

The author would like to give more support, I look forward to seeing the male protagonist be really good in the future! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] I've been following it and I have to say that the author's views are really upright. The heroine feels that she does not want to break the world order in the novel, but Zundu is very angular and takes revenge when she can. Although there are not many golden fingers or anything like that, it actually suits her setting of traveling through books, because there are actually only so many words in a book. After reading it, it will not be of much help to her in ancient times. At most, she will know who is the good guy and who is the bad guy. Alas. As for male characters, Konyasu is actually quite good and loves to play straight. But I think his current liking for her is due to a feeling that the female protagonist is different from the women he has met, that kind of vague affection between the opposite sex. So I still choose the male protagonist because I think the male protagonist can actually give the female protagonist a sense of security, even though I hate him now for being a piece of wood! But it's understandable. After all, emotional changes also require a process [Cool] I've finished watching it, it's so beautiful [crying][crying][crying] I can't bear to leave it.

Wow! It's really beautiful! Very to my liking! I just like the coolness and self-control of the male protagonist, and I like Yazi who doesn't know it yet. I really like the jealous look, especially when the hero's mother asked him to help introduce the heroine to a partner. He was so angry that he started talking nonsense, and then immediately chased the heroine out to coax her. Zundu really likes this kind of plot. I have never been able to resist this kind of pseudo-brother-sister love! ! [Shy][shy][admiration][admiration]

It's so beautiful. The author's writing style is really amazing. Unlike other ancient romances, it doesn't have any ancient flavor at all. It doesn't make sense. This is really amazing.

The content of the book is very interesting. I would recommend it.

It's so beautiful, I don't know how to describe it. Every word, word, sentence and paragraph written by the author is written in my heart. Every character in the author's works has its own personality characteristics. Looking at this article, it seems that this is not a novel, but a real small world. Their joys, sorrows, sorrows and joys all affect my mood. Finally, I hope the author will continue to improve.

The author's writing style is really very good. Every word can create a good atmosphere. Although the plot of the story does not have many ups and downs, it makes people feel comfortable reading it as a whole. You will not have the idea of ​​abandoning the article. The author's writing style is really great [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The characters and settings are quite good, and the book is also very interesting.

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To be honest, the writing style is pretty good. For older readers, you can give it a try. The only minor flaw is the male protagonist's emotional process. Overall, it's pretty good! ! ! Very well written! I really like this kind of delicate writing style and non-protracted plot. Watch it!

Falling in love is also an achievement Although there is separation between the male and female protagonists, it is not a kind of independent growth for both parties. Yu Zhi is resolute and independent, which makes people sympathize. In the era described by the author, women become officials and businessmen, which is the awakening of the mind and the progress of the times.

It's really good to read. Although there is a bit of misunderstanding between the male and female protagonists in the middle, which is a bit cruel, the ending is sweet and really good to watch. It is the first time for the author to write an article, but the details of the writing are pretty good. I hope to write some extra stories about A Zhi and A Yu and their marriage in the future. I am looking forward to the next book. Come on! Wow wow wow, it's really good to watch, but it's too short. I stayed up late to watch it for four hours, and I finished it in two hours during the day. I didn't get enough.

Only when I saw the finale did I realize that this is the author's first book. It is true that some plots or small details are not that mature, but it is already very good to be able to write a book like this for the first time. The author's writing style is also very good. Many of the descriptions in the book also make us feel the same. The words are not gorgeous and not piled up. It is very comfortable. I am fortunate to witness the love between A Zhi and her brother. Ah Zhi has reached the perfection that belongs to her, so good

It's quite interesting and not as fast as others' plots. It's very detailed. It may have only been a few days since I started writing it. Come on, keep an eye on you.

This author is really good at describing scenes, and you feel like you are actually there when you read the article. The character of the young lady Yu Zhi is quite three-dimensional and full. The author has written about her conflicting feelings. In the early stage, she has been living in the world of the novel and always thought that she knew the fate of everyone. It was not until she learned that Huai Suiyu liked her that she slowly changed this perception. In the middle period, Suiyu was afraid that she would die tragically at home like Mrs. Su after marrying him, so he voluntarily gave up on her. She waited for two years but was disappointed. In the later period, Suiyu came back and begged her for forgiveness. She was unable to respond for a long time due to inner conflicts. This contradictory feeling is very consistent with the setting of modern young women, that is, the heroine. Although the male protagonist has regrets, the ending is happy. After all, there is not only beauty in life, but also some troubles. Overall, it's a very good article. Recommended to watch, and wait for me to come back and watch it again.

Very nice novel! ! Book friends who are still waiting and watching can jump right in! As an ancient proverb, the language of this book is very antique, and the logic and common sense are basically OK. The male and female protagonists' IQs are online throughout. The male protagonist is cold, polite and affectionate, while the female protagonist is docile but not weak. She is assertive, dares to love, hate, and is brave and strategic. The male protagonist gradually fell in love with the female protagonist through constant contact with her. I really like this setting. It's just that the relationship between the male and female protagonists at the end is a bit twisty, which made me a little upset. And it ended too suddenly. It ended without ordering the extras. I was really disappointed. I felt like it wasn't enough! [Cry][cry] All in all, this book is really good and worth reading!

The writing is very beautiful and very ancient. Although the heroine has traveled through time, it rarely reflects her modern sense of value. It is more like a sudden change in temperament that attracted the attention and intimacy of the male protagonist. The male protagonist's liking for the female protagonist feels a bit abrupt. After all, the female protagonist didn't have anything particularly outstanding at that time that could arouse the male protagonist's favor. (Reading completed on January 6, 2024)

Article The writing style is very delicate, and the ancient love is very subtle. The protagonist's love is not a vigorous love, but comes from ordinary life. The male and female protagonists are perfectly portrayed. I think the last ordeal, the plot of the male protagonist's injured hand, makes the love between the male and female protagonists better. Pushed to the top, their misunderstandings disappeared. The design of this plot is very perfect. The overall storyline has ups and downs. Only the secondary characters are not described enough and the shaping is not so perfect. The author can practice more. I look forward to the second part (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

The author's literary talent is very good. What is love? Love is perfection, it is wholeheartedly making the other person happy. The love that is forbearing, restrained and unrequited is true love😭😭😭. Please A Zhi and Huai Yu must be happy [cry] [cry] [cry]

The writing is very good and has a lot of foundation. It surpasses most online articles in 🍅. I read it for a long time just to appreciate the writing. It is the best-written novel I have read in 🍅 so far. Some sentences are really beautiful and not pretentious. However, the plot is relatively average, the twists are a bit blunt, and the emotions are not strong enough. I feel that the opportunities and reasons for the male protagonist's departure and reunion are not explained in depth enough, which makes me feel that it is a bit torture for the sake of torture, and a twist for the sake of a twist. For example, the male protagonist's emotions when they reunite should also include feelings of failure to love, low self-esteem, guilt, etc. The lack of these foreshadowings in the article made me a little bit intolerant, and even felt a bit sloppy and not as good as the second male lead. But overall it's still pretty good. It's worth viewing with appreciation.

To be honest, after reading this novel, I feel that the author's writing style is quite good, such as the description of the environment at the beginning of the first chapter, the ancient poems and sentences in the novel, etc. The descriptions are very detailed, beautiful and easy to take in. It is the kind of scene that reminds me of the Jiangnan water town and the style of the Western Regions as soon as I see the text. Both the male and female protagonists of the novel have very upright views, and their emotions are very detailed. The emotional lines are also developed very delicately. Anyway, it looks good! ! ! Nice! ! ! Nice! ! ! Can't look better! ! !

The emotions are written very delicately. I really like the author's writing style.

It's really beautiful, but I feel a little sad for the heroine.

Yu Zhi × Huai Suiyu A little cruel, but still pretty good-looking. The novel is about↓ The heroine travels to ancient times and becomes a cannon fodder female supporting role. After waking up, he no longer clings to the male protagonist like the original one. However, the male protagonist noticed this adopted sister and became interested in her. The relationship between the male and female protagonists has also become increasingly close, and they went to Ye County together (the male protagonist went to deal with the affairs of the Huai family store, and the female protagonist went to improve the Jiangmuzhai left by the original protagonist's parents). The female protagonist knew her feelings, but she stayed away after knowing that the male protagonist had a plot and an official match. Later, the male protagonist and the female protagonist expressed their feelings, but because the master's wife was killed, the male protagonist was afraid that the heroine would end up like this, so he betrayed the heroine. After that, they had two minor love setbacks before they got together. We got married at the end. It's really tortuous.

The plot has ups and downs and the characters have distinct personalities. Here are some of my thoughts 1. Although the heroine is not good enough in some aspects, she has a very upright outlook on life. She is a little scared and wants to run away when encountering danger, but she still faces it bravely. 2. In the early stage, the male protagonist abandoned the female protagonist in the name of love, but fortunately he came to his senses, otherwise he would have regretted it. 3. I have to say that without Mo Bai, the two of them would break up sooner or later. 4. Finally, there is Chu Jinan. This enthusiastic and enthusiastic young man was very good to A Zhi, but in the end he still missed it. I hope he can find someone who loves him with all his heart and eyes.

I stayed up late and watched it at around three in the morning. It was really good to watch, and the plot transitions naturally. Many people may wonder why the male and female protagonists don't directly express their feelings at the moment, but I feel that if they did, it would go against their characters. It is precisely because the two of them are very cautious about their feelings and it is pure and beautiful love that I feel that there are such vivid and flexible characters. There is no abuse for the sake of abuse. It's really good-looking, and it's really sweet when it's sweet. Great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great. Especially love to watch! ! !

The author's writing style is good, and the words and sentences are all characteristic of ancient Chinese. Unlike ordinary ancient Chinese, modern expressions pop up from time to time, which can make people feel uncomfortable. The male protagonist's feelings are a bit of an afterthought and a bit sadistic in the middle, but the ending is good, but the ending is a bit sloppy. I really like the attitude of the female protagonist. Degree, women should not just rely on love, men or others to live. They can stay with the person they love for the rest of their lives. They can also have the ability to stand on their own, be able to take care of and accompany their relatives, and enjoy family happiness. Relationships are not limited to love, but family ties are the most lasting.

It's very beautiful and the writing is very good! ! The description of the environment is really delicate and has a real sense of literature and art. Ahhhhhhhhhhh, I like it so much. But I originally thought it was a sweet cookie, but ended up being tortured a few times. To be honest, I think it would be better if the plot of those episodes of abuse could be solved in a different way. It seems like torture for the sake of torture. "She subconsciously looked at the girls who were hiding timidly behind their mother, and felt a kind of sourness and compassion that transcended the times and resonated sadly." "The breeze was blowing, and above the eaves in the distance, copper wind chimes hung on the four corners, tinkling at the moment. The tiles were loose and made a few crisp sounds, like someone's raccoon slave passing by with his feet up, or like overripe fruits hanging down."

I really appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese prose, and one can feel its charm in every word. I really like the male protagonist. His coldness and gentleness are really suitable to describe him. He is gorgeous, strategizing, outstanding in martial arts, talented... There are more beautiful words that cannot be described, but he is the brother who has always protected the female protagonist. Although many people say it's okay to have this high-spirited young male lead and the female lead together, I have never wavered in my heart. I often think about the life of the male protagonist. I don't know what kind of ecstasy this guy has given me. I just love him so much. Finally, big cheers to the author! Let me see other people's stories. Then, the first part was a bit scary for me at first, but things will get better later on. Friends, if you have patience, I really hope you can continue reading it. The story is very sweet, so I'll just enjoy it a little bit.