Why Can't a Common Girl Be a Heartthrob?

In fact, overall it's pretty good. I like all the ideas about the hostess that the teacher wants to write, and I'm very happy with it. Those bros, little mothers, literary husbands, professors, poisonous tongues, landlords, riverside uniforms, and seductions are all so imaginative. I feel that every single one I write is delicious, and it's the male character who wants to be fucked. There are a lot of colors, the pace is a bit fast, and many details are not written. For example, the heroine previously described that she likes painting, but the reason why she lost her job was only mentioned because Xiao Xu lost it. After the heroine made a wish, the psychological changes of the male character falling in love with the heroine, and the description of the male character's side are very It seems that the image of these male characters is very thin and one-sided, which makes it not so enjoyable to watch (the professor I really like, I just ate it twice, and the expected Daddy Xu is not the mature, tolerant and entangled adult I thought he was. The feeling of the superior bowing his head is too fast. Who knows. After reading the first world, I feel that there are more important nodes in the first world, such as making a wish to become a heartthrob, discovering that I am a mission holder, and wishing to be a baby mother, etc., But it is too fast, and all 32 chapters of such an important first world are completed (laughing and crying) Damn it, I feel like if I write it down in detail, it will be very good and delicious. Wuwuwuwu, the teacher's ideas are really delicious.

The author's writing is good, but it's not like fast travel. I read it as a short story.