Naruto****************

What can I say about this book? It's broken on one hand. It's short and fast on the other hand. [Thinking] However, if you ignore these shortcomings and consider the overall plot structure, it's not bad. In my personal opinion, it's more about the vagueness in the description of the characters, which makes the characters not three-dimensional and plump enough. I have one thing to say, having more original plots is actually not something worth criticizing. , Everyone comes to read the fanfic. It's not to recall the original work [eating melon] (I don't rule out that there is such a treasure), but the original plot's interweaving, logic, and compatibility with the timeline need to be considered more. When I first saw the original plot, I was confused for a while, but it was only after reading that my doubts were solved, and I actually doubted my own memory [face covering]. Based on the comprehensive evaluation, those who are not yet in the book world should not consider it. Those with strong receptive ability should consider it as appropriate.

2023.8.24 (End) Although it is over, I still hope that the author will continue to work hard. His writing is very good. Don't give up. The same goes for doing things. You can't deny yourself because of other people's comments. Come on😊

If you are not allowed to change it, just read the original work. This is a fucking novel. Just look cool

Even though it's a mess, I still want to express my guilt that I shouldn't keep reading books.

Oh, actually I quite like it. Although the writing is not that good, it has its own style. It has an original plot, which I actually think is pretty good. Maybe readers who have watched Naruto don't want too much deviation from the Naruto fandom, but for me personally, I think your writing is pretty good. I hope you'll do the best for the next book [Blow kiss]

@ Orange flavor sweet potato I don't have anything to give, so I'll give you a power generation for love [laughing]

Come on come on come on come on

Five stars must be five stars!

A very good book.

This book is very well written, come on✊

I just hope Sasuke takes it, otherwise it will be divided into installments, once a year.

It doesn't look very good from the front, but it's okay later [sending my heart] The author will update it quickly [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] It's over [almost crying]

Author, please don't force me to write more.

No, don't go Not enough to watch

If you don't get a five-star rating, it would be unreasonable.

Save Liu: A good book about being raised to death (anyway, I thought it was quite good, and then I read the update today... Blanch!)

@ Orange flavor sweet potato, I beg you, the author, to stay up until 200,000 words! ! ! ! As long as you make it to 20w, there will be recommendations from time to time! ! ! !

Woohoo! ! ! Why is such a beautiful novel discontinued? Woohoo! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's hard to calm down. Good books that have been sprayed by sandbirds are pursued every day. It's a pity.

Although I have not finished writing it, it does not affect my five-star praise. Anyway, I personally think it is pretty good [laughing]

The writing is actually quite good. I hope the author won't have to pay too much attention to some bad reviews in the future. It's difficult for everyone to agree. Just write what you want carefully.

Okay, I think it looks good

Damn~ I just think it looks good.

It's a pretty good novel, but it's a pity that the author was hurt by some people with immature brains and didn't finish the story.

Really pretty

Still very good

Very nice. I love so much.

Such a good book, why not write it again?

I think it's well written? There are no more than twenty books on my bookshelf, and this one is among them!

Is there a group? I can post some chapters in the group.