I'm Making a Movie in the Apocalypse

First of all, I want to praise you. Your subject matter is very good, and then there is the protagonist's mental journey and growth experience. Some people say that diaosi feels like a normal growth experience for ordinary people. And for the protagonist, he has never encountered any fatal crisis at all. I think the early stage is quite reasonable. So far, I have read more than 30 chapters. I don't feel anything? Many people said in the comment area: The protagonist is a diaosi and has a strong diaosi smell. But I think this is the end of the world for ordinary people, without golden fingers. Any shock poses a fatal risk. When I make money, the protagonist's mental journey and his growth experience are a very good coming-of-age story for me. Who? You may say that you cannot compare with those top writers, but I will say that you are a tomato. As long as your book lasts long enough and the plot doesn't collapse later, the 9-point rating will of course remain the same, okay. There are relatively few people, and the results cannot be seen. As long as there are no major problems in your future writing, the minimum will be 8.8.

Very mature writing method and good creativity. It uses filming the apocalypse to increase the golden finger ability and advance the plot in both directions. It is not boring and does not suppress the protagonist. He is weak, but he can protect himself. The characterization is rich.

The writing is very good. At least I can always read the latest chapters. I hope the author can continue to write according to your original outline and filter out some negative reviews. At least I think this is actually pretty good for a wasteland apocalyptic novel. But I still have a suggestion. In some chapters, Z's fond expressions for the protagonist's actions are always described as the plot progresses. This description is repeated many times. This should be a hook for the subsequent plot, but I think this kind of description appears very deliberate if it appears too much. At the same time, I found that the author's emotional advancement was a bit stiff when describing Xiaoshuai, and later Satan. First of all, he is the lord of hell and the real owner of Acropolis No. 13. However, when the black hand dealt with him, I couldn't see the strong character of a powerful boss. It can be seen that the author is still a little weak in writing skills, so I hope the author will not introduce emotional lines too early. Many novice authors tend to fall apart emotionally. Finally, I hope the author can continue to update.

Generally speaking, it looks pretty good. There are some unreasonable things, but if it's OK, it's relatively large. There's an apartment with an invincible space and a mall that surpasses the technology of this world and the apocalypse. The protagonist still has a bit of a growth process, from modern society to adapting to the apocalypse. The current world is before the apocalypse, but it's also It may be reincarnation or being transported to parallel time and space. Before the protagonist reaches the end of the world, there are even one or more people with the same personality, appearance, and name as the protagonist. They are active in the end of the world. This is a big pitfall. Overall, it looks good, but the update is a bit slow.

It is a book with a very novel setting. At least I have not seen similar apocalyptic articles on Tomato. The author uses the very novel angle of making a movie as an entry point to tell about his experiences in the apocalypse and the various events he was involved in. If you pay attention, you can actually find that the author suddenly stopped updating after updating the first dozen chapters in 23 years, but suddenly updated it 25 years later. From the combination of the first dozen chapters and the subsequent plot, it can be seen that the author has speeded up. It should be that he did not want to waste the prepared setting and outline, but he did not want to write too long, so he just speeded up (personal opinion). This conclusion can be drawn from the perspective of combat power and credit points. Skipping the early development and fast-forwarding directly to the divine costume, and slowly showing the larger world view to the readers, I think this is a very smart choice. The author's writing power allows him to write like this, at least I can see that it is basically not broken now. Anyway, I am looking forward to what will happen next, the foreshadowing of the two Zhao Xings and how the old world will develop, and where the weird viruses and monster spawning towers come from. These mysteries are very attractive. I hope the author will update quickly. I am optimistic about you.

Author, you know, "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Establishing at Thirty: It is necessary to update thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website will praise you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, do what you want without going over the rules: if you can update 70 chapters in a day, you can do whatever you want! Update quickly! ! !

I rarely give reviews when reading books, but this one is really nice and has a great world view, but not many people have read it. I took a look and it seems that the author's updates are not stable. I hope the author will keep updating.

So far, the pace is very good, and the logic is complete and the plot is smooth. It seems that the pace is speeding up. If it is not controlled well, the plot may collapse after returning to Earth. If it is controlled well, it may be another high-scoring novel with a score of 9.5 Or above.

The subject matter is very good, don't be a eunuch, write well, I like you [like]

A good book that you can read without overthinking. Settings: time travel, mode, system, double time travel, and centralized settings are well integrated. The presentation of the exploration mode and the movie prepares the book for sublimation. The final height of the book depends on the author's final presentation of the results of the exploration mode. (Blind guess, the real world swallows/avoids the vanguard of the apocalypse?) Characters: The anime-style Dead City team and the movie-style protagonist should be a good fusion. If your word processing ability is above the passing line, there is basically no need to worry. Story: Currently, it is mainly focused on doomsday exploration driven by movie dreams and the system. In the later stage, the common force battles and domination should be added. The final movie is presented to see how to achieve the "shuangzhuangshuang" effect. Once you have the foundation of fire, it depends on the author's ability to handle the story.

Well, the protagonist's aura is relatively heavy, so I can only say that the power of luck is quite powerful. But one thing to say, I feel that the writing style is okay, maybe because the subject matter is more suitable. For example, the scenes he describes are really good, and the subject matter is indeed relatively novel. Maybe I have read less such books, so I think this book is really good. The aura of the main protagonist is too heavy, and he casually meets a powerful team with a strange background. Read the heroine of Experiment No. 2, Like the young master of Rose City who randomly meets good people. It's pretty cool without too many brains.

It's a very good book, but if you want Li Dang to read this single girl, you can't read it now. Zhuo obviously has more characterizations, and has a deeper relationship with the protagonist. Li has no connection except managing the protagonist's account. According to the current development, it is definitely inappropriate for the heroine to be Li. It would be better to switch to Zhuo as the heroine or directly.

I have read 111 chapters, and my personal rating is 9 to 9.2. There are no urine or poison spots. Except for chapters 72 to 79, which are uncomfortable to listen to, everything else is okay (otherwise it would be 9.5 Points). I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I read more than 100 chapters of this new theme and I didn't feel bored. The writing is good and there aren't too many bad words. Basically, I couldn't stop reading it. Unfortunately, it's still too short. The author should do his best👍Don't let the book get cold.

It's so beautiful😘 It combines doomsday with video bloggers, a relatively niche subject, but very impressive! The author will update it quickly! I would give it a 6.5 Out of 10 points. It is a unique post-apocalypse + two worlds protection + UP master. Keep reading. I will come back to review it if my writing skills improve.

The core has little to do with the title. It's an apocalyptic RPG. The mixed world of radiation has the energy of Macross, with an invincible space. The golden finger is relatively large, and the numerical design is a bit messy. The plot design is reasonable, the writing is online, and the characters are relatively full-bodied, but there is a problem with the connection from Xiaoshuai's part, which leads to a bit of a tear in the style. Personal evaluation: Liangcao has certain potential. Yes, I would be willing to raise points if I play with breeches and screws. What else can I do [make a face]

The subject matter is good! There is only one little poison point at the moment, that is, smoking in the granary. Is it serious? I smoke far away from these places. It is best not to write about this matter, but to write down the general reason. Forcibly inserting such a sentence feels like the protagonist is deliberately miserable for the sake of forgiveness. I hope the author can write better in the future!

An old author or old bookworm, a bit older, writes very well. It is definitely a good book, in my opinion it can be given 6 stars, far better than most tomato novels, and it is well worth reading. I don't know much about movies, and I don't really like apocalyptic themes. But what I especially noticed is that the grasp of emotions is well written, the temperature rises at an appropriate speed, and there are echoes before and after. The plot is smooth and light, and the rhythm is not abrupt, which is rare. The character creation is also very good, and the behavior, language habits, background, etc. Are all connected together. Although it is a common team with various hidden dragons and crouching tigers, the writing is relatively reasonable and harmonious, and the conflicts are also foreshadowed, which is very good.

The subject matter is not very new, but it is worth watching and can be watched continuously. The characterization is not a group portrait for sure, but the individual characters are well portrayed, maybe because it is a small protagonist. As for the protagonist himself, I personally feel that there are some things that are not in place. I hope the author can read the feedback from readers. There is nothing to say and it is boring. I like to watch the exchanges between the two worlds. This is it.

I will be the master of Up in the last days Written by Bai Xiaoling Goldfinger ensures basic safety, and the plot is not vague and relatively fresh. The wildness and uninhibitedness of survival in the apocalypse also give it a bit of flavor. In terms of character creation, the protagonists can be considered to have their own characteristics, and they are probably above average. New book issue, give it a five-star rating.

Not bad, relatively new, but a little lacking

Not bad, it's worth watching. If it keeps this level, it will be another good book. Come on, you can do it

The subject matter is novel, and the first dozen or so pictures are very well described. If it is a rare book about the end of the world, it will definitely be a first-class book. Good luck to the author.

I haven't seen a post-apocalyptic novel in a long time. The writing is fresh and creative. The plot is interlocking, but it is also light-hearted and funny, and there is also a climax. It is a rare and super good article. If the setting is not broken in the later stage, the author can become a god.

There are punk elements in the apocalyptic wasteland, and the main elements of Up account for a small proportion. The style is good, I quite like it. I personally think that in the doomsday tag, it can reach 9.4 [Of course, this rating depends entirely on my personal preference]

My imagination was wide open, and I had a lot of twists and turns and digging holes. At first I thought it was just a pretentious post-apocalyptic live broadcast, but it turned out not to be the case at all... Spoilers are involved later: The creepy feeling when the protagonist accidentally discovers that the gate is actually the gate installed in his own community before. It is simply the despair, destiny, and reincarnation of the old version of the movie Planet of the Apes when he finally discovers the truth about the world. Highly recommended, come on, hope it won't collapse later.

Overall, it's a good post-apocalyptic survival story. At present, the proportion of plots between the apocalypse and modern times is indeed very different, and the correlation between them is not strong. To be honest, I think the current world line can be deleted, but you should find your own rhythm. It will not affect the author's creation too much. The current level is very good. Come on👏

Broadly speaking, the future is bright so far, and there are no poisonous points. However, it is not clear what the use of the increased progress in video shooting is (maybe I missed it at a glance), the author, please keep updating [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Good looking Why do you feel like this apocalypse is caused by the male protagonist? He experimented with the whole world Evolve your own powers until you can travel through the past Then go back in time and kill yourself Erase the memory of your future Play your past self Then go save the world [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Evil cultivator sacrifices to humans around the world to help himself ascend

It's quite interesting. The author insists on updating it, which is guaranteed to be popular. (Update to at least 100 chapters, otherwise the quality cannot be maintained stably and the stream may not necessarily be promoted)