Another Possibility of the Northern Song Dynasty

This is not a time-travel novel that takes place every second. The plot of the story is reasonable and the relationship between the characters is well-understood. Unlike some time-travel stories, which feel refreshing at first glance, but stop and think about it, they feel absurd and completely unreasonable. This book is unhurried, has a slow pace, and the writing is clean and not sloppy. Worth a look!

Come on, the part that didn't change history is good too. Su Shi's writing is very real, and there are obvious shadows of "The New Biography of Su Dongpo". I look forward to seeing the growth of the protagonist, hurry, hurry, hurry! ! Zhe Zong should also appear soon!

The author is very attentive and very readable. It is the best Song fic I have read so far. Although it is a fan work, the author was not lazy and checked various information very carefully. Every word (exaggeration) can feel the strong patriotism and national will. The logical thinking is very strong and innovative, and the rhythm is actually very good. However, if you are more concerned about comments, it would be better to finish writing the court first, and make the household chores that have nothing to do with the court or have too little relevance as extras. This can make the characters full and three-dimensional without affecting the writing rhythm. (I feel that I am obviously nervous and concerned about the changing situation in the court, and the sudden insertion of family gossip will indeed cause controversy.) The scene switching is also done perfectly, especially the multi-line transition in the description of the war. The tacit cooperation between the court frontiers and the multiple fronts is more exciting and immersive. I particularly like this way of writing, and I also like this kind of author the most. While showing the original appearance of history, he also reasonably imagines another possibility. Not everyone knows every time point. Being able to narrate and explain directly helps reading and understanding the author's meaning. Those appropriate summaries also help keep up with the author's ideas. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good and will not give people the feeling that the word count of the original text is too low. Overall, it is a sincere work and very good.

When I first started watching it, I thought the protagonist was a cool guy who knew everything, but later I found out that the protagonist was just an ordinary modern person with strong abilities, who relied on his obsession with the Song Dynasty to change. Actively lobbying in the face of various objections from the elders and ministers of the DPRK. In other previous time-travel novels, there were always one or two paragraphs that we now find very famous and inspiring, and the veterans or elders were convinced! But it doesn't happen here. Just like when we face our elders, we are always told by our elders that we are still young and don't understand the seriousness of the matter, or simply ignore our words and go our own way, thinking that we think about things too simply, but in many cases we don't need to think too complicated, but sometimes it is true that we don't think comprehensively enough. Things never go smoothly for the protagonist here. All success is the result of the efforts of all parties, which is another very real possibility. Worth a look!

The writing is vivid, and the main characters such as Su Shi and Su Che have distinct personalities. The interaction between the protagonist and Wang Anshi and others, and the relationship with his family give people a warm feeling. The narrative rhythm is well controlled, the language is fluent, the expressions are clear, and it is very comfortable to watch. It can be seen that the author has conducted careful research. There is basically no problem with the official position and title, and it also reflects the social style of the Song Dynasty. However, sometimes it feels a little flat, and the conflicts are not intense enough. It would be more interesting if it could create some waves. Overall, the writing is good. I am looking forward to how it will develop in the future. Keep up the good work, author!

What I like is that the setting is in line with the traditional historical literature of the time. There is no brainless coolness, no cheating (system), and the characters are more three-dimensional. The author greatly continues to maintain [learned]

When I read Chapter 11, I was already in tears. The author's writing style is very good. It combines the powerlessness of the time traveler with the sad atmosphere, giving people a sense of desolation, anger and regret for the passing of Jing Gong, as well as a spontaneous admiration for Wang Anshi, who stood up and turned the tide under the oppression of the times. Jinggong was talented and heroic, and the long words of such a person will undoubtedly make people lament and lament him.

The plot and conception are all excellent, the characters are consistent with historical facts, the pace is slow, and it is a rare good article to be read carefully. The only thing I am curious about is that with such intervention, Mr. Dongpo's experience and mood in his later years must have changed. Will "Transcendent Taiwan Chronicle" and others appear again?

This article is so well written, why is the rating so low? What's the point? Is it because you don't understand or what? This is a very good book, and the description of Dongpo is better than what most people write. The literary foundation is so solid and the plot is relaxing. Aren't these advantages? Su Guo, isn't he a vivid person?

The writing style is plain and not boring. Some of the foreshadowing in the early and middle stages made me think that the book was at least a million words long, but I didn't expect that it ended in a hurry. In the early stage, I was told about Su Guo's hospital, the girls' school established for his wife, and the Gao brothers' voyage to find the American continent. I couldn't wait to read on, hoping to see the final result. It's a pity that many branch plots were not developed in time, which is regrettable. The book is a good book, without the stench of Internet articles. I feel that reading this book is not like reading Internet articles, but like reading literary realistic articles or biographies. The seemingly plain writing style contains rich emotions of the characters. The author did not go out of his way to write emotional dramas, whether it is personal feelings or family and country. The emotions of the book are not deliberately sensational. It is written like a piece of history. The emotions are only allowed for readers to experience and feel them themselves. In this way, everyone has their own resonance and association in their hearts, rather than following the content written by the author to forcefully unify the readers' resonance. The book is a good book, and the content and writing style have no shortcomings. The only regret is that there is too little written. This is a regret for readers, but it is also an endorsement of this book.

After reading the whole book, it is very well written. From the storyline, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into historical materials. The portrayal of the characters is also very good, especially the plot of Wang Anshi is particularly touching. The description of life in the book is also very detailed, and the interaction between the couple also made me feel their happiness outside the book (personally, I think these descriptions of life are a kind of spice and cannot be the main body of this kind of article, but it is also an indispensable part). All in all, this is an excellent time-travel novel. Maybe it's not very popular because of the title, but I think it shouldn't be buried.

There is never a shortage of people reading good books. I gave them all five stars when I read them. I will review them after I have finished reading them. 1. It writes about the late period of Shenzong of the Song Dynasty, when Zhao Yong succeeded to the throne, but I prefer to watch the period of Renzong, because the stars are too bright, and Zhao Zhen was forcibly promoted to the posthumous title of Renzong, Ouyang Xiu, Fan Zhongyan, Di Qing, Bao Zheng, Fu Bi, Han Qi, Wen Yanbo, Su Zhe, Lu Yijian, Zhang Fangping... Are too strong, I dare not think, if I have this hand, the Sixteen States of Youyun will not be a problem. 2. I always feel that the writing is almost meaningless. It should be because I am not happy enough. It is not that I am not happy enough and cannot write. It is too frustrating. Come on.

As a female reader, this is one of the few historical time travel novels that I can read on Tomato. Let's talk about the remarkable things first. The character creation and description of the relationships between the characters in this article are very good, and it portrays Su Dongpo in my heart, as well as Zhang Miao, Wang Anshi, Su Che, Su Song, etc. I really like the relationship between Su and Su in the early stage. It's really cute and lively. Later, the author was afraid of being scolded, so he seldom wrote about the love between children. I regret this, especially the lack of getting along with his daughter. In addition, the author also respects women, and there is no such thing as a plot that is free of charge. Du Ruo is also cute, and the protagonist encourages her to open an academy. The process of reform may be written in a relatively immature way, but I think it's pretty good. I don't know much about military matters and I don't have a map in my head haha. It's a pity that the author was under great pressure and couldn't continue writing. Many holes were left unfilled and the ending was too hasty. I suggest you add an extra chapter to talk about the subsequent development of the Song Dynasty, the changes in the life and social atmosphere of the Song Dynasty in Suzhou, the growth of the daughter and the influence of the academy, and the relationship between Zhao Xu and the protagonist in his later years (I have also been growing up, and I like this pair of monarchs very much)...[Note][Note] I still prefer the early stage, because they are all aspects that the author is better at writing, and his evaluation of historical figures is relatively objective. I felt that the process of reform and strengthening the army was not detailed, tortuous or intense enough. I really can't remember the troop movements and battles during the Xia and Liao expeditions. What impressed me deeply was Liu Jisun who fell in front of him, the eight thousand cavalrymen who were left with less than a thousand in the end, the dead soldiers who dealt with the aftermath in Guasha, Datong that exploded, and finally Yanjing... At the end of the song, no one can be seen, and there are several green peaks on the river.

A good Song Dynasty novel, a slow-burning historical novel with the Tomato mechanism. The points will be displayed normally if there are more ratings. If there are fewer people who rate the book, even if it is all five stars, the score will still be around seven. So the author should not be impatient and take his time. Tomato readers don't like reviews very much. They either give a low score and run away after seeing the disgusting parts, or silently pursue updates, or keep reading and wait to read more, so it is normal.

Speaking from the perspective of a nine-year-old bookworm, this book was right up my alley. There are not many well-written historical texts, and there are even fewer that are easy to read. There are even fewer of them with unsystematic protagonists. They also have positive outlook on life, humorous language, and lively characters. It can be seen that the author buried a lot of foreshadowing, but unfortunately the final ending was a bit unexpected. But this is the author's first book, and such a pace is rare. The main plot takes care of daily life, and the emotional scenes are not abrupt, which is really a pity. Looking forward to your next book. Personally, I think the score should be at least 9.2.

It's very well written, I don't know how to describe it well. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it and it is not just a random fanfic. The description of the Song Dynasty is very vivid and allowed me to slowly walk into the Song Dynasty word for word.

This book is undoubtedly a romantic and tender book. Although the reform process is somewhat idealistic, this is exactly the meaning of creation. It is precisely because of the imperfection of history that literature flourishes. The Northern Song Dynasty was a relatively splendid dynasty except for military and diplomatic aspects. The author's "Another Possibility of the Northern Song Dynasty" gave me a feeling of tears, similar to the feeling of watching the Shu Han in the Three Kingdoms, a kind of belief and romance of risking one's life for ideals. Undoubtedly, the protagonist in the book has a better ending than the Shu Han. This is also the value of literary creation, healing shortcomings! Idealism is not a shameful existence at any time. It requires the determination of "Although there are thousands of people, I will go on", and it also requires the courage of "I still have the good intentions of my heart, and I will not regret it even if I die nine times". Our history is also shining brightly because of these idealists!

Well written. In recounting the history of the middle and late Northern Song Dynasty, he was particularly praised for his objective stance. He neither criticized the political strategies of the two parties nor overly praised one party, but evaluated the issues of the two parties with plain, detailed and penetrating discussions. The protagonist does not have the habit of being a condescending time-traveler, but truly lives as the Su family. He gets along with his elders and friends in a humorous and interesting way, loves to have fun, sets off firecrackers, watches lanterns, etc., And even cherishes Zhe Zong. It can be seen that the author has good poetry skills. The only fly in the ointment is that the ending is too fast-paced. The destruction of the Liao Dynasty and subsequent reforms are all rushed, and it is inevitably unfinished.

This is the first Song Dynasty novel that I insisted on reading. I also learned a lot about the Song Dynasty's borders and political affairs from this book. I thought there would be more than a hundred chapters, but I didn't expect it to be finished so quickly. I have to say that the author's narrative ability is still great. At least I can tell about these complex interpersonal relationships. I understand. I didn't read other people's comments. I just think this book is well written. The scope of it is not about the people at the bottom of the Song Dynasty. It is mainly about the author's own expectations for the transformation of the Song Dynasty. It is not realistic. This is a novel that the author can write however he likes. Generally speaking, it is not like a cheat. Throughout the article, I made two suggestions. One is that for people like me who don't read literature and history, I don't know how to pronounce some names. The other is that the author is too focused on writing about battlefields and officialdom, which is a bit boring. Many things about explaining official ranks and systems are also hard to understand and not grounded enough. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on!

It's pretty good, including the author's final commentary. When it was about to end, I thought there was at least half of it left behind [face covering]. It was indeed a bit too quick to stop. The character of the protagonist is actually very stand-alone, which is a pity. There is a lot to write about later. Policies need to be slowly adjusted. Improving transportation and information transmission can also strengthen central control, as well as southern development, outward expansion, etc. Don't be discouraged, author. As long as you don't deliberately explain history in long paragraphs, it's better to write at your own pace. I look forward to the next article.

This book is the first novel I have read in 🍅. I have read many historical novels, but short and quick novels are really boring. This one is more in line with my reading taste (very JJ style). The characterization of Su Guo is also very successful. I found out at the end that the author did not continue writing. It is a pity, but the ending is perfect. I am looking forward to the new book ~ It is really great. I chose the wrong platform [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Tomato is a rare good historical article. Good luck to the author. Five-star praise!

The cuteness of the Su family father and son is vividly written! ! ! !

After reading it, although I don't know much about history, I still think it is well written and the author has a good attitude. When I read the low-scoring comments, most of them said they weren't happy enough, so don't worry about it. It's also good to write like this. I think it's very real, and there is no help from the system. There is no need to deliberately cater to individual people. Support it

Overall pretty good. Maybe the author has lived in a very harmonious and smooth environment since he was a child, so he is relatively naive about the darkness of human nature, but the flaws are not hidden, except for some small details, it is quite good.

The writing is very good and very realistic. Before reading this book, I knew that the Song Dynasty court and emperor were terrible, but I never thought they were so terrible (I only knew some of the more famous generals who suppressed them). After reading this book, I know that everyone from the emperor to the ministers in the Song Dynasty was super bad. The emperor and the auxiliary queen mother have no tolerance; the ministers want to blackmail the emperor; the ministers crazily retaliate against each other because of personal grudges; the court only knows how to give money and cede land when faced with foreign invasion and threats of military power; it wants to destroy the country in the face of natural disasters; it only looks at the party and does not consider whether it is beneficial to the people's livelihood, and crazily suppresses the new or old policies... When I saw that Su Shi was successfully sent to Hangzhou (Chapter 60), I didn't want to read it. Su Guo (the protagonist) has not yet entered the court, and there are many restrictions on what he wants to do. It is really difficult to save such a great Song Dynasty... I am not a lover of Song Dynasty history, so I really can't stand it anymore. But the above also proves that the author's writing is very good, very true, and very well-founded.

I am "historically illiterate" and I don't understand the historical issues written by the author, but from the perspective of a reader, I think it is well written, every part is good, it is very comfortable to watch, and it makes people excited, especially the group of people who worked hard for the Song Dynasty. I like "Da Su", "Xiao Su" and "Xiao Xiao Su" very much. I also like the relationship between "Xiao Xiao Su" and the emperor. There is also "Little Su"'s attitude towards the teacher, which is very touching and touching. After reading the author's last words, I hope the author will not be disappointed with the writing. Many things are very subjective and people are different. The author can write according to his own ideas. If the readers' ideas are good, they will adopt them and ignore the bad ones. The Internet environment is like this. We can always meet many different people. We can't ask others, but we can choose to ignore them. This article is well written, and it can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it. I feel that no matter what it is, it is worth taking seriously, no matter how others slander it. And this is just a novel. If you don't like reading it, you can just walk away. Those who point fingers and make evil remarks are the ones who are annoying. The most important thing is that it turns out that everyone has sharp eyes. Although the ending of this article is hasty, the score is not low at all. It's a pity that I didn't read it until it was finished. I hope I will have the opportunity to read novels like this again in the future.

The shortcomings do not hide the good points, and overall it is very good. The story and characters are well described, and it is free. It is equivalent to the author practicing writing + sharing, and looking for close friends. Therefore, we should not place too high demands on the author to achieve perfection in all aspects. This novel is worth reading [Like]

It's a pity that I didn't read it when I was still tweeting about it, but it's really cool to read it again after it's over. I read it in one breath and felt refreshed. It's considered one of the best among time-travel novels. The protagonist doesn't have a strong golden finger. It's not like regular cool novels with all kinds of excitement, slaps in the face, and highlights. It's more of a group portrait. The plot has little ups and downs but is inexplicably attractive. As a As an old bookworm, my real-life impression of the Northern Song Dynasty basically comes from Zhao Kuangyin, the founding emperor of the Song Dynasty, in middle school textbooks, as well as the stereotypes of the Song Dynasty in film and television dramas. I have memorized Su Shi's ancient poems, but they cannot be connected with the Song Dynasty. From the star records touched in the history books, there are such bright, dazzling, and vivid people, objects, and stories buried.

This is not allowed to be scored? The characters are restored to a very high degree, and the political and military aspects are remarkable. The plot rhythm is just right. What is rare is that the emotional line is not abrupt, there is no harem, and there is no infatuated love setting. Su Shi writes vividly and vividly, making him a lovable Su Xian.