If you're interested, feel free to check out another book about Teacher Bai on my bookshelf: From the Start, Earth Online: Leveling Up with Teacher Bai
I've gotten better at the writing than I was with this book, and I've also spent some time practicing on 7 .
Hello to everyone who clicked in after seeing this recommended for some reason. Thank you for your comments and support lately.
This book is finished. I posted the entire outline in the final chapter.
It's only 130,000 characters across 42 chapters. There's no need to waste your precious time on it.
This was my first time writing a novel. I mainly did it to fulfill a fantasy I'd had in high school. My actual skill is poor, and the writing isn't good. The logic is inconsistent from one part to another, and there are plenty of plot holes. Not many people read it at the time, and I was so discouraged that I just posted the rest of the outline and abandoned it. I don't know why so many people suddenly showed up in the last couple of days.
Everyone has been very enthusiastic, and the feedback has been spot-on. Unfortunately, the book is already finished, so I can't revise any of the chapters.
So I must ask you again not to read it. I'm embarrassed, and I don't want to waste your time. Even though the traffic has brought in some income, I really don't want you spending your precious time reading the kind of edgy nonsense I used to post on my high school QQ Space.
Thank you all again 🙏.
The author's basic writing style is solid and the content is creative. Although the plot progresses quickly and has some flaws. Considering that the inner portrayal of the characters is too rigid and not vivid enough, it leads to a poor reading experience. Overall, the general direction is creative, and I can look forward to the follow-up!
Look at it with a mindset of broadening your horizons. The main body of the book is well written, and the finale is an explanatory outline. (It can only be said that the current level of science and technology is not enough to support the author's writing)
Give it a four-star support. There are quite a lot of bugs in the first book I wrote. In addition, although the subject matter is one that I like, it is relatively unpopular. It is obviously not as easy to write as the mainstream ones. I was also recommended by Tomato to read this book. However, this book is still not recommended. I will try the author's new book.
Say, Lin Xueer, who is it????