I Am a Passerby and the Yandere

It's well written and quite interesting. Even though I said something about my stupid head when I was getting started, I kept thinking of Murong as the heroine. Unfortunately, she wasn't. It hit a nail on the head and this book had no choice but to be abandoned. Come on, author!

I always thought of Su Murong as the heroine, but after taking a look, I found that she wasn't. It doesn't suit my appetite, so I have to walk hard. Come on, author. [You taste carefully]

The writing is good, but can you prioritize it? Don't write about Xiao Yan and his harem later, just go through the motions. Okay, except for this, the article is generally good [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It's okay. It's the type I like to read. The author is also very opinionated, and I can tell that the author wants to write well. However, the writing style is immature, so it's not that good to read. There are also some places that I want to explain, but in fact, they don't really need to be explained. Either a brief explanation is fine, otherwise it is too watery, and I feel like there is too little content in one chapter. Come on, give me a five-star encouragement.

I couldn't sleep, so I got up and read this book. No matter how I looked at it, the word "tired" was written all over it.

Not bad, the writing style is very clear, there is no literary youth problem, many of them are just jabbering and talking about a lot of things, especially some fake Japanese, and they don't have heroines or anything. In terms of originality, the plot is not bad now.

The characterization is good. After all, it is a rare normal book.

Not bad, at least for now it's fun to watch.

1. Iceberg Slut Senior Sister 2. Wind element redeems junior sister 3. Cute and clingy crawling pet 4. Kill the martial arts mad saint 5. Junior spy apprentice 6. To be determined

The book is excellent, but the author is quite free and easy. . . [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

Except for the author who is a bit lazy, the rest are pretty good. I really like a very ordinary person. The story that slowly became awesome is that the emotional aspect may still need to be grown. The above is just my personal opinion.

It looks good. I like this kind of steady male protagonist, better than other ones who talk too much and are silly. I also like this kind of light-hearted and refreshing writing. But can the female protagonist not be such a masochist? Just one basic one is enough, not all of them🙏

The writing is okay, at least in Xiaobai. The language is simple, the characters have rich hearts, and the characters' feelings are expressed. You can refer to other authors for these aspects.

More, if only a little in one day is enough, who can read it? Looking forward to further progress [Like]

Very nice to look at, but also slightly bland. But it is precisely because of this that it calms my mind. There are a lot of whimsical ideas in the book, and the yanderes are more ordinary, that is to say, their behavior so far has been normal and they are highly hidden. It shows us the hidden state of a group of yanderes.

Is Su Murong the female supporting role?

No one has discovered this treasure novel? Finally found a novel that makes people shine! ! There is no pretentiousness, rebirth, or system. As a woman, I like the old male protagonist's plot! Come on, author

It's okay, but the words are a bit short

I'll help you launch the book.

Dude, I beg you to stop showing off.

Anyway, there are hundreds of people supporting you. Come on, I believe in you. After all, you are also a person with two skills.

In fact, it's a perspective issue. If it's from Xiao Yan's perspective, then it's no problem that Su is the heroine. Besides, Lin is a passerby. If Xiao and Su gave birth to a girl, is that the same situation for Lin?

The concept is clear and the imagination is wonderful. Except for some details and loopholes in the storyline, there are no major problems with the theme.

It's pretty good, better than some books about cultivating immortals.

The writing and plot are impeccable, but the author's updated status needs to be considered. Worth a visit, of course you can raise ducks

He looks good. That guy named Su, will he become a yandere in the future?

I don't know since when, human beings have had the illusion that survival has become something within easy reach. This is the fundamental reason for your failure.

Author! I love your teeth [shy]

It looks good, but the author is too tired [smile], are you virtual? Keep updating! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's beautiful, please author, please continue writing.