A Mortal’s Path to Immortality: From the Start, a Crippled Little Beggar

The writing is really good, the plot is a bit flat, but it's the rhythm I like. It's told in a eloquent way, and it's very realistic. It's different from mindless and cool writing. It's super good-looking. I hope the author will update it soon. Come on, author!

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After reading it for a while, I found the writing to be quite interesting and interesting. You can continue reading. Although the protagonist is young, he has a clear mind. The immortal, haha... It is the first time I have seen such an immortal. Spoiler alert, the name is actually called Xiang Yunduan. I instantly reached the other side of the mountain. You can tell me whether the skills of this pair are incredible! The plot is not brainless, and the writing style is also old-fashioned. Just by looking at the chapter names, I think it is interesting, so keep reading! After reading it, I came back again. The author of this book is talented and has written a lot of poems. The descriptions are also very detailed and beautiful. The most amazing thing is that I found that no one in the novel is a walk-on. Even the waiter and Xiaosi have plots, and none of the plots fall to the ground. They can catch them all. Even if the previous plots are not written, the latter ones will follow. This is amazing! It can be seen that the details still need to be refined, but the writing is really good, and it is definitely above the average level!

What can I say, it looks pretty good, I've learned some culture, it's funny but not vulgar, it's not nonsensical, my IQ is online, not bad, not bad!

There is a plot, literary talent, and connotation, and it will definitely be a god.

The standard is very high, there are many funny gags, but the logic is rigorous!

The author is very talented and a masterpiece. Like👍

The author writes well

Okay, okay! I'd rather cut off than water! It's great that you have a great conscience!

The writing is good and written with great care.