Beast Control: Awakening Double Spiritual Rings at the Beginning

Ahem, giving my book a five-star rating is not too much.

Well written! 6.7 Is a bit low. But I was a bit stung by the part where I started giving false names to my teammates and my real name to that girl. When I went to the back to buy something, I was still thinking about why I was writing about the girl who was attracted by two men. It felt a bit unnecessary, and I realized later that it was foreshadowing. But I still feel that the plot here could use some changes, it's weird when I watch it. I almost got pushed back by Lei. The more I see the back, the more exciting it feels. But the fight was too long. I usually jump when I get into a fight, so the duration may not be very long. Overall, it's really great! The writing style seems to be improving at the end! Please update more! (If you have time, it would be better to revise the previous one!)

Very good, but it's a pity that there is no title at the end The front is very good, but the back is watery and smelly. I don't even bother to mention the title.

Okay, I finally found one with a more normal name.

Can be watched: The story is solid, the pace is relatively slow, and the points that cause conflicts are not too abrupt. Those who like to watch stories about leveling up, killing monsters, and telling stories can take their time. Disadvantages: basically unsystematic, too few exciting points, too many emotional descriptions, and multiple stories are not attractive. Personal thoughts: It would be nice to add a little more, otherwise the long story will feel like the protagonist has nothing to do (basically, discovery-hard fight/rescue-emotion), and the (evolution book) should be a system, the double spiritual rings should be bloodlines (I guess), and the five countries (a rainforest) will not get stuck after writing it?

What can I say? When I saw the setting of the protagonist, I felt a bit like a full-time mage. In addition, I felt that it was imitated according to the setting of a full-time mage. Later, the author also said "I prefer the full-time mage." I originally wanted to give it a three-star rating, but because the full-time mage has no poison points, it encourages the author. After all, it is the first time, so it is five stars. I like the setting of this book very much, but First, is the reason for not joining the Demon Suppression Division just because you like freedom? This explanation is not good, and the benefits of joining the Demon Suppression Division are very helpful to the protagonist in the early stage, such as the increase of combat experience, the help of resources, and the help of the author to write the plot. "Insert a sentence: I looked at it and felt that the protagonist's behavior has no goal and just follow the situation. This is not good, because a goal is good for the author to write the plot and can also make readers interested." The second reason is my own reason. I read a lot of books and am more selective. "This is a new account and an old account. I forgot the password [face covering]. It is a highly rated book on Tomato and there are many chapters. Most of them I have read "Only the genre I like"" and I like to read invincible and fast-paced because it is fun, so I don't like this one very much. But it's still okay. If you like the slow pace, you can read it. It's still okay. There aren't many shortcomings. What I've read so far doesn't have any negative points, it's just that it doesn't suit my reading interests. Still recommendable

Yes, the book is very good, but the micro-group portrait is a bit too much nonsense. There is too much nonsense and the writing is too detailed.

It's not a brainless novel like Long Aotian. Although there is an opportunity for the protagonist, it more or less relies on evolution to increase the strength [send heart][send heart][send heart]

I like this type of slowly upgrading. You won't be invincible all at once. You are the only one who dominates the world. Others are just stupid and stupid [laughing and crying]. The few books that I have read from beginning to end are just hoping to simplify them a lot. Many times the same idea is repeated, so I often follow the chapters for a few days, but I don't have much progress in things, and I feel dissatisfied.

The book feels quite good, and the volume is sufficient. However, the author said that he has learned from the Versatile Mage. After reading the Versatile Mage, you can find many similar plot arrangements. Generally speaking, there are no bad points. However, the existence of one of the two golden fingers that the author arranged for the protagonist, the Catalog of Ten Thousand Beasts, is too low, and the protagonist, the originator, does not use this identity to earn resources. It is said that with this golden finger, resources can be obtained very quickly. I hope the author can pay attention to it. I hope the author can continue to create and never be too dissatisfied with the original work.

So far, it's still very interesting. The main reason is that there is no female protagonist [blowing kisses], and it's not very brainless. I just want to ask those who saw it behind, whether the Holy Wood Demon has come back! ! ! So anxious [cry][cry][cry]

Overall, it's pretty good. After looking at it, there isn't much of a sticking point. The three supreme attributes basically restrain each other at the same level, and are unlikely to be restrained unless they are completely crushed in terms of strength or the attributes are a bit weak. After all, this is something with a high upper limit and a lower limit. The other one is to restrain the mysterious system, one of the highest laws. I can only say that this is the author's setting, and it is not easy to understand. But I came late to show my respect, and I couldn't communicate with him and understand each other at the beginning. There is no way this can be done overall. If I rate it very well, it would be about 8 points. There is no big problem. I would also like to give the author a big piece of advice, a very sincere advice. The three supreme attributes of creation, time, space, and cause and effect, must not be stretched, nor should they be restrained by any one attribute. The three of them can only interact with each other. The only way to restrain it is to crush it purely by quantity, or with high numerical values, to crush it, and it must be absolutely rare. The pets with these three attributes must be absolutely rare or ridiculously strong or ridiculously strong, and the population must be very rare or even only about 10, otherwise it will definitely collapse in the later period. You don't want to see who has collected a few pets with these three attributes. The game starts back one day after the protagonist turns 18 and assassinates him directly. As you said, it leaves enough suspense and they basically complement each other and restrain each other. The suggestions are given here. It's too much to bear. In this way, this book basically has no big problems and is quite good.

I think the plot of the whole book is quite exciting. At least it is attractive and the writing is relatively coherent and smooth. Based on personal experience or feeling, writing a plot may be a bit too procrastinating, or it may take too many chapters to write a story, so it can be compressed. Not every opponent is worth spending more time on. But the flaws do not hide the virtues.

The pace is good. There are obviously several story lines, this one is pushed a little bit, that one is pushed a little bit, each one is pushed forward, and none is left behind. Each small story unit has a good idea (some are conventional and exciting, and some are different from the mainstream, good and good). The rhythm of the story is always in the hands of the author, and it is completely a small case that can close the loop. From the beginning, I have been waiting for the protagonist's parents and the absurd clown to fill in the gaps. I want to see how it turns out in the end.

The writing is quite good, but it just smells like Mo Fan [laughing]

It's quite good [love][love][love], but the progress is too slow. The protagonist is really miserable sometimes. I hope he can be stronger in the future. He is always threatened. I have never seen the relationship between the protagonist's parents. The author will update it a lot. I want to see the follow-up [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

It's a very good book. I've been reading it for a long time. I think it's very good. I don't know why the rating is so low. Well, maybe it's because the author talks a lot, which makes him a bit irritable, and then he deliberately gets a low rating. Anyway, I quite like it. I hope he can write better in the future. The only thing that feels a bit strange is why he doesn't have a title for the subsequent articles?

It's pretty good to watch, but the fighting part could be reduced a bit. It feels a bit unnecessary, because if you watch it too much, the perspective will be tired. Also, didn't he learn how to control beasts? Then he can make money, and there is no need to use beast control.

There are some hooks, but not too big. The main character is not ruined, and you can even feel a slight sense of suffocation. I feel that the writing is quite real, there are no smooth sailing, ups and downs. The only bad thing is that the protagonist improves too slowly, that is, if he can't improve, he keeps dragging on. I was wrong. I wasn't a little aggrieved. Sometimes the protagonist felt as aggrieved as a bastard. He always says that he only follows his heart and wants to be the savior every day... Oh my God, I feel so depressed that I am going to die. What will I do if I control the beast after you die? I don't mean to say that as a scold, I just feel that I am not willing to let my child suffer so much when I see him growing up. I felt relieved when I saw the sentence "I, Su Yu, am no worse than anyone else" at the end.

I have a question. I don't know if it will be clarified later. I only saw the previous part by comparing it. There is a setting. Spirit rings with certain attributes can only be contracted with beasts of certain attributes. The undead type can contract with undead. But the evolution of the beast may change the attributes For example, you awakened a water type, contracted a water type beast, and then evolved into an undead type during evolution. Then your spiritual ring restriction is equivalent to no more, so the attribute restriction doesn't seem serious at all. It seems that there was no explanation about this in the early stage.

It's pretty good. If it doesn't look good in the future, I'll change the review. From more than 300 chapters, I became a demon general to more than 700 chapters, and I am still a demon general. Well, I was wrong. After more than 900 chapters, I am still a demon general.

It is a good novel that maintains the flow of the plot. The time span is relatively large, and I feel that it may not be completed within 1,000 chapters. I have never seen such a long article here. It is well written.

Yes, the characters are carefully drawn, and the characters of the supporting characters like Zhao Jiu are also rich enough. The plot of Teacher Gao seems to be a cool point for the protagonist to reveal his identity [like]

The writing is very good, it shouldn't be rated like this. Some suggestions for the author: Add the chapter name. This is very uncomfortable if there is no chapter name.

Overall, it's okay, but can each chapter have a title? Otherwise, it would be too uncomfortable. Also, each chapter is a bit lacking [smile]

Still missing a space and a healing monster

After reading Chapter 61, I personally feel really good! The author doesn't want eunuchs [Like]

This book is well written, with clear logic and good writing style. It is worth reading. I gained weight and came back to read it [Adoration] This book is very good to read, IQ is online, logic is online, one link after another, you can't stop, the growth process is not exaggerated, there is some aura of the protagonist, but the protagonist will also avoid danger, will not rush just because he is the protagonist, has a strong and kind heart, is not a virgin, and has a bottom line. In short, I like this kind of protagonist very much, I love to read [Note]

Good for not joining the force! No heroine, thank you

It looks good, but updates are a bit slow. It would be better if it could be faster.